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even tho its not his own fanfiction just "mtl" I wouldnt have found this fine piece of a ff without him bringing it up. So thanks for that really like the ff after reading all 300 chaps in one go
It's a good story, which I've already read in its original language and your translation is average, compared to the original story you've translated most of the chapter well, just try to read the chapters and dub the parts you skipped, for everyone this story is full of Chinese idiom, and the author makes an average translation, if you're not one of those who doesn't mind skipping some parts of Chinese, this is not your novel, and if you are it's a good story that you can generally enjoy if you have your share of Chinese but ignoring that it's a good story
Prime Minister Eddard Stark. Yes it's chinese. It's not bad though.[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
At least if you want to upload Chinese novels here, it would be nice to change the language that the author can understand better, so that you don't just copy and paste people's novels, so if you have to contribute so that readers will remember you Powers Stone author
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The MC is a reincarnated dragon hatchling that watched the GoT series. The novel is readable and the story was amusing in the beginning. I found myself skimming quite a bit from midway on. The end comes out of left field and makes me wish I gave up early.
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MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
even tho its not his own fanfiction just "mtl" I wouldnt have found this fine piece of a ff without him bringing it up. So thanks for that really like the ff after reading all 300 chaps in one go
It's a good story, which I've already read in its original language and your translation is average, compared to the original story you've translated most of the chapter well, just try to read the chapters and dub the parts you skipped, for everyone this story is full of Chinese idiom, and the author makes an average translation, if you're not one of those who doesn't mind skipping some parts of Chinese, this is not your novel, and if you are it's a good story that you can generally enjoy if you have your share of Chinese but ignoring that it's a good story
Prime Minister Eddard Stark. Yes it's chinese. It's not bad though.[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
At least if you want to upload Chinese novels here, it would be nice to change the language that the author can understand better, so that you don't just copy and paste people's novels, so if you have to contribute so that readers will remember you Powers Stone author
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The MC is a reincarnated dragon hatchling that watched the GoT series. The novel is readable and the story was amusing in the beginning. I found myself skimming quite a bit from midway on. The end comes out of left field and makes me wish I gave up early.