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The interaction between MC and Gilgamesh kinda makes sense—MC doesn’t know how strong he is yet, hasn’t trained, so yeah, I get him fearing Gil… but damn, bro, this is just disgusting. Spineless. Like, not even a little dignity? Grow some pride, grow some balls—hell, grow something, my guy! At this point, I see why the comment section vanished after Chapter 4. Ain’t nobody tryna watch an MC fold faster than cheap lawn furniture. Bro really became a servant. And I dunno if the author thought that’d be funny, but nah, this ain’t comedy—this is downright distasteful. I swear, authors on this site either got a humiliation fetish or a full-on “bitch-boy MC” addiction. Like, blink twice if y’all need help, ‘cause this ain’t normal.
"Iam Out ...Mc is a Fucking Idiot and a Pushover .. The Other Review is a full lie ! Tell ing This 🗑️Masterpiece... it's not worth 5 Star To This Shit ....Mc brain Process slower then a Turtle in land 🤡... The Glazing Is Hard
Its a gem shining brightly. One of the best fate fanfics. The story starts off good and gets better with time. Yes some arcs feels cringe but for the rest of them it's marvellous
work of an excellent author I give it 5 stars directly [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=Out of it][img=Good night][img=Relaxed][img=More pls][img=Mad][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=Unalived][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Smug]
Many people call it a masterpiece, but all I saw is dumb mc. I mean, really dumb. I give it a try and wait for the good part till chapter 36. There is no improvement from the author. Many comments point the flaw, but the author didn't fix it. The main problem is that the mc's power system. Mc can absorb and transform to any elements, but the thing is that author doesn't know what elements mean. Author only know fire, water, earth, wood and air. Author doesn't understand there are more elements for example, sand(mc live in desert),metal(mc is Fri with gilgamesh who own all type of metal and scared metal), clay and jewel. Not a masterpiece for sure.
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the best story I've ever met. The picture reminds me of the God from onepanchmen [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy]
The MC is Archetype being with OP powers, this is very good fanfic with sad drama and tragedies, so FATE alike. Thanks for the great fanfic
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Amazing it went by to fast cause how good it was like eating a block of cocain on accident
I LIKE IT AND THAT'S ALL ......................................................................................................................................
excelent!!!!! .......................................................................................................................................
Mr. Author, i sincerely thank you for uploading this gem of a fic Here, cant believe this banger flew under my Radar [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
Thank you author for enlightening us with this masterpiece!! I really loved it and had to read the whole thing on ffn. Wouldn’t have know about this story without your upload. If you have any other stories that you could recommend please do so!!!
it's good and i like it. also can you pls tell me how to navigate wattpad cust the only fanfic i got are the ''lover'' type
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Really great story! Thank you for posting it here, never would have found it otherwise.
i remember reading it on ff.net. i was keeping up with the release for a while but a few chaps after the greek arc i stopped reading. not because it got bad or i didnt like it anymore. i just stop reading stuff at some point. anyway its good.
This is a really fun read. I hope you don’t discontinue it. The only issue I have is the short chapters but other than that it’s really good. 5🌟
I'm uploading Part one on Webnovel after i failed to convince the author to start posting here, he did give me permission to upload it though.
The interaction between MC and Gilgamesh kinda makes sense—MC doesn’t know how strong he is yet, hasn’t trained, so yeah, I get him fearing Gil… but damn, bro, this is just disgusting. Spineless. Like, not even a little dignity? Grow some pride, grow some balls—hell, grow something, my guy! At this point, I see why the comment section vanished after Chapter 4. Ain’t nobody tryna watch an MC fold faster than cheap lawn furniture. Bro really became a servant. And I dunno if the author thought that’d be funny, but nah, this ain’t comedy—this is downright distasteful. I swear, authors on this site either got a humiliation fetish or a full-on “bitch-boy MC” addiction. Like, blink twice if y’all need help, ‘cause this ain’t normal.
"Iam Out ...Mc is a Fucking Idiot and a Pushover .. The Other Review is a full lie ! Tell ing This 🗑️Masterpiece... it's not worth 5 Star To This Shit ....Mc brain Process slower then a Turtle in land 🤡... The Glazing Is Hard
Its a gem shining brightly. One of the best fate fanfics. The story starts off good and gets better with time. Yes some arcs feels cringe but for the rest of them it's marvellous
work of an excellent author I give it 5 stars directly [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=Out of it][img=Good night][img=Relaxed][img=More pls][img=Mad][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=Unalived][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Speechless][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Smug]
Many people call it a masterpiece, but all I saw is dumb mc. I mean, really dumb. I give it a try and wait for the good part till chapter 36. There is no improvement from the author. Many comments point the flaw, but the author didn't fix it. The main problem is that the mc's power system. Mc can absorb and transform to any elements, but the thing is that author doesn't know what elements mean. Author only know fire, water, earth, wood and air. Author doesn't understand there are more elements for example, sand(mc live in desert),metal(mc is Fri with gilgamesh who own all type of metal and scared metal), clay and jewel. Not a masterpiece for sure.
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the best story I've ever met. The picture reminds me of the God from onepanchmen [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy]
The MC is Archetype being with OP powers, this is very good fanfic with sad drama and tragedies, so FATE alike. Thanks for the great fanfic
揭示劇透 Amazing it went by to fast cause how good it was like eating a block of cocain on accident
I LIKE IT AND THAT'S ALL ......................................................................................................................................
excelent!!!!! .......................................................................................................................................
Mr. Author, i sincerely thank you for uploading this gem of a fic Here, cant believe this banger flew under my Radar [img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=nervous]
Thank you author for enlightening us with this masterpiece!! I really loved it and had to read the whole thing on ffn. Wouldn’t have know about this story without your upload. If you have any other stories that you could recommend please do so!!!
it's good and i like it. also can you pls tell me how to navigate wattpad cust the only fanfic i got are the ''lover'' type
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Really great story! Thank you for posting it here, never would have found it otherwise.
i remember reading it on ff.net. i was keeping up with the release for a while but a few chaps after the greek arc i stopped reading. not because it got bad or i didnt like it anymore. i just stop reading stuff at some point. anyway its good.
This is a really fun read. I hope you don’t discontinue it. The only issue I have is the short chapters but other than that it’s really good. 5🌟
I'm uploading Part one on Webnovel after i failed to convince the author to start posting here, he did give me permission to upload it though.