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I'm looking forward to this fanfic, but since the MC will have powers from various worlds, I hope this doesn't ruin the power system too much, where his powers are very strong, like suddenly MC has Naruto's jutsu, where he can use all elements, I think that's already very damaging to the world's power
I'm looking forward to this fanfic, but since the MC will have powers from various worlds, I hope this doesn't ruin the power system too much, where his powers are very strong, like suddenly MC has Naruto's jutsu, where he can use all elements, I think that's already very damaging to the world's power