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Everybody is sharing a single braincell and not in a good way.. Everyone is to OOC for my tastes.
Very boring book all the characters including the MC have no personality they come off very bland and kinda dumb. (Very sad for a DC fanfic) The MC relies on the system to do everything and when he learns something on his own the system praises him claiming he is a super genius which is definitely not true. Writing quality is subpar with multiple sentences each chapters that don’t make sense. This is also one of those books where the Original DC characters are dumbed down and accepting of things they wouldn’t be otherwise.
i hope the story continues for 300 chapters or more .[img=update] it would be nice if there was a little Slice of life with Raven and other characters instead of always Training and Planning in the future
Yeah it's a good fan fic but I know for a fact that it's gonna fall off since the Author introduced the backstory of the system like that was necessary 😮💨anyway I am gonna enjoy while it lasts
(At 32) I do like the story. But I am not sure about future harem. If it became a Pokémon story this going to suck so that's it. ,........................
la esencia de la historia es una joya, pero autor tienes mucha prisa y no tienes camino para correr, se siente muy forzado todo con un montón de agujeros de trama. creo que si tomas tiempo para planificar la historia un poco más lento, más desarrollado, más creíble? creo que sería un absoluto éxito... saludos y gracias
The Mc is dumb, act like a child and the system act like a spoiled kid it's insufferable.
What did you expect of course I would have a biased review. I hope you guys enjoy my story I welcome all helpful feedback. Don't be a keyboard warrior
It’s your average dc system story. Not really much to say the writing quality is decent. The story tho is just like every other dc or marvel fic with the mc ending up joining Batman them. The mc is nothing special either nothing about him will really make you want to read it.
Cara por enquanto esta otimo, o nivel de poder do MC ta subindo rapido mas é a DC, o sistema e bom ta la so para ajudar o MC nao transforma ele em um escravo
I do like the novel but there are a little tidbits that some viewers might not like. First is the AI gifted by the system. It gets a little annoying at sometimes because AIs are supposed to be smart yet this one feels a little too clueless and acts like a nagging clingy GF. The second would be Batman’s whole deal. Batman practically forces the MC to join Young Justice so that the MC’s moral compass goes from neutral to good. Like I’d understand if the MC was some psycho, but it’s not like the MC committed any crimes. The only serious thing he did was use magic in self defense in a robbery. But Batman being the controlling psycho he is, forces the MC to be a force for good while also bugging his room. So Batman is spying on him 24/7. Honestly the stalker and predatory behavior creeps me the hell out. I know Batman’s whole deal is wanting to be in control but it leaves a bitter taste. Other than those two I can think of I think the novels pretty good, I’m just waiting for the MC to ditch the league and just do his own thing.
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A aparência do protagonista e a mesma da capa ? Ser sim então por que diz que ele e bronzeado ? Does the protagonist's appearance look the same as on the cover? If so, then why does it say he's tanned?
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Everybody is sharing a single braincell and not in a good way.. Everyone is to OOC for my tastes.
Very boring book all the characters including the MC have no personality they come off very bland and kinda dumb. (Very sad for a DC fanfic) The MC relies on the system to do everything and when he learns something on his own the system praises him claiming he is a super genius which is definitely not true. Writing quality is subpar with multiple sentences each chapters that don’t make sense. This is also one of those books where the Original DC characters are dumbed down and accepting of things they wouldn’t be otherwise.
i hope the story continues for 300 chapters or more .[img=update] it would be nice if there was a little Slice of life with Raven and other characters instead of always Training and Planning in the future
Yeah it's a good fan fic but I know for a fact that it's gonna fall off since the Author introduced the backstory of the system like that was necessary 😮💨anyway I am gonna enjoy while it lasts
(At 32) I do like the story. But I am not sure about future harem. If it became a Pokémon story this going to suck so that's it. ,........................
la esencia de la historia es una joya, pero autor tienes mucha prisa y no tienes camino para correr, se siente muy forzado todo con un montón de agujeros de trama. creo que si tomas tiempo para planificar la historia un poco más lento, más desarrollado, más creíble? creo que sería un absoluto éxito... saludos y gracias
The Mc is dumb, act like a child and the system act like a spoiled kid it's insufferable.
What did you expect of course I would have a biased review. I hope you guys enjoy my story I welcome all helpful feedback. Don't be a keyboard warrior
It’s your average dc system story. Not really much to say the writing quality is decent. The story tho is just like every other dc or marvel fic with the mc ending up joining Batman them. The mc is nothing special either nothing about him will really make you want to read it.
Cara por enquanto esta otimo, o nivel de poder do MC ta subindo rapido mas é a DC, o sistema e bom ta la so para ajudar o MC nao transforma ele em um escravo
I do like the novel but there are a little tidbits that some viewers might not like. First is the AI gifted by the system. It gets a little annoying at sometimes because AIs are supposed to be smart yet this one feels a little too clueless and acts like a nagging clingy GF. The second would be Batman’s whole deal. Batman practically forces the MC to join Young Justice so that the MC’s moral compass goes from neutral to good. Like I’d understand if the MC was some psycho, but it’s not like the MC committed any crimes. The only serious thing he did was use magic in self defense in a robbery. But Batman being the controlling psycho he is, forces the MC to be a force for good while also bugging his room. So Batman is spying on him 24/7. Honestly the stalker and predatory behavior creeps me the hell out. I know Batman’s whole deal is wanting to be in control but it leaves a bitter taste. Other than those two I can think of I think the novels pretty good, I’m just waiting for the MC to ditch the league and just do his own thing.
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A aparência do protagonista e a mesma da capa ? Ser sim então por que diz que ele e bronzeado ? Does the protagonist's appearance look the same as on the cover? If so, then why does it say he's tanned?
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me gustó bastante la historia pero sigo esperando más capitulos xd