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Good translation, meh story The story had a good and interesting start with the mc being creative, ambitious and building power in interesting ways, it got boring kinda quick because of all the obsessive planning and training people, not to mention Karin’s mom has hashirama potential because she has mostly his cells (that are 40+ years old). At first it implies the mc gonna leave konoha and maybe become a jinjuriki or do something outside the village but he’s kinda just playing politics like some uchiha reincarnation story. It’s still a good story for whoever wants that.
It is an interesting story and premise but terrible execution. This story at the beginning felt like it's going to be a combo of science and chakra, but sadly, it didn't happen. There are a lot of theories about this and that, but most of the time, the mc just makes it happen with force . There is almost zero actual scientific progression here. There are also few weird characters that really don't have any meaningful presence like yumi . Some weird way she got wood release and the explanation given was mental energy. And this energy isn't really explored as well. It's just there for the sake of convenience . And pretty much going against all clans and the guy is pretty much starting a war with them . This would've made sense if he was hashirama and madara strong where nobody wouldn't be able to defy him which isn't the case here.
It’s okay a bit boring but if your going to translate a story the least you can do is credit the Chinese author and provide the link to the original
The story is really good; the MC is smart and logical. Would definitely recommend.
odio este tipo de historias donde el MC camina dos pasos y se encuentra al protagonsita le dice hola y el protagonista se combierte en su hermano enos obediente para toda la vida despues el mc camina 2 pasos y se encuentra con el dios del mundo que se por alguna extraña razon lo quiere ayudar camina dos pasos mas y se encuentra con el dios del multiverso :///
very good.................................................................................................................................................................................................
5 star (Iam at ch 40) the translation is good story is good ...........................................................................................
Pretty good story, protagonist is smart and likeable, he has some cool moments, it updates daily, and everything is pretty accurate to canon so far. I like it! Keep up the great work!
This is just far too good for you to skip out on. With such high quality writing and storytelling, I had to write a review of recommendation. 5 Stars!
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So far (Chapter 21) the story is very interesting. Different from the usual, with no tricks or bloodlines for the MC. He created his skills step by step becoming a good ninja by the time of the story. I look forward to the continuation of the story, hoping it will maintain the level it has so far. Congratulations author!
Writing quality is good, I didn't notice any errors. I liked the MC's personality which is likeable, logical, and intelligent. There is no system or cheat powers but he uses his intelligence and meta-knowledge of the naruto show to plan accordingly to help empower himself. I love how everything he does is thought out and everyone he interacts with seems like what their canon counterpart would act like.
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Good translation, meh story The story had a good and interesting start with the mc being creative, ambitious and building power in interesting ways, it got boring kinda quick because of all the obsessive planning and training people, not to mention Karin’s mom has hashirama potential because she has mostly his cells (that are 40+ years old). At first it implies the mc gonna leave konoha and maybe become a jinjuriki or do something outside the village but he’s kinda just playing politics like some uchiha reincarnation story. It’s still a good story for whoever wants that.
It is an interesting story and premise but terrible execution. This story at the beginning felt like it's going to be a combo of science and chakra, but sadly, it didn't happen. There are a lot of theories about this and that, but most of the time, the mc just makes it happen with force . There is almost zero actual scientific progression here. There are also few weird characters that really don't have any meaningful presence like yumi . Some weird way she got wood release and the explanation given was mental energy. And this energy isn't really explored as well. It's just there for the sake of convenience . And pretty much going against all clans and the guy is pretty much starting a war with them . This would've made sense if he was hashirama and madara strong where nobody wouldn't be able to defy him which isn't the case here.
It’s okay a bit boring but if your going to translate a story the least you can do is credit the Chinese author and provide the link to the original
The story is really good; the MC is smart and logical. Would definitely recommend.
odio este tipo de historias donde el MC camina dos pasos y se encuentra al protagonsita le dice hola y el protagonista se combierte en su hermano enos obediente para toda la vida despues el mc camina 2 pasos y se encuentra con el dios del mundo que se por alguna extraña razon lo quiere ayudar camina dos pasos mas y se encuentra con el dios del multiverso :///
very good.................................................................................................................................................................................................
5 star (Iam at ch 40) the translation is good story is good ...........................................................................................
Pretty good story, protagonist is smart and likeable, he has some cool moments, it updates daily, and everything is pretty accurate to canon so far. I like it! Keep up the great work!
This is just far too good for you to skip out on. With such high quality writing and storytelling, I had to write a review of recommendation. 5 Stars!
what is the name of the original?.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................,...............................,.......................................,...
So far (Chapter 21) the story is very interesting. Different from the usual, with no tricks or bloodlines for the MC. He created his skills step by step becoming a good ninja by the time of the story. I look forward to the continuation of the story, hoping it will maintain the level it has so far. Congratulations author!
Writing quality is good, I didn't notice any errors. I liked the MC's personality which is likeable, logical, and intelligent. There is no system or cheat powers but he uses his intelligence and meta-knowledge of the naruto show to plan accordingly to help empower himself. I love how everything he does is thought out and everyone he interacts with seems like what their canon counterpart would act like.