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writing this after reading 36 chapters. the writing quality is really good, the dialogues aren’t awkward/unrealistic unlike most novels on webnovel and most importantly I’ve been really enjoying reading the chapters. I have high hopes for this one :D
I really like the type of novels where MC is professor and OP at the same time but knows what he is doing and doesn't like being looked down upon. Author you have a good novel going on here keep up the good work and upload more chapters.
I gave it 20 chapters... Nothing happened, we know nothing about Mc. Nothing about other characters. Nothing about why he became teacher or soldier. Like you read it and get nothing. We only saw that he is super strong and he only dealt with one student we know hardly anything about... Look story should have a plot hook at least in first 5 chapters... And good one should at 1 or 2 chapter... There was no future goal created, no drama, nothing. I just wasted time reading guy running around talking 3 sentences and going back to sleep.
No way are rat is a MC. Reading this.🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀
It's a great story. A strong Kakashi with his special students... sure to be interesting.
Não gosto de Novels onde o prota é desconhecido em uma guerra onde foi um dos proragonistas, e ainda tem o fato dele ser um duque, acabei abandonando a estória com 7 capitulos, já que vi que não era para mim.
This story was not for me. I tried to read the first couple of chapters, but it was filled with sarcastic comments and contradictions. It might bring in an audience and keep them entertained, but establishing a connection just didn't seem to happen with me. Good luck with your work.
he mc can't seem to make up his mind and acts like a immatured teenager with mood swings. The dialogues flow unnaturally and none of the characters have a stable personality. They are made as like a side character from a harem anime, lacking depth and substance. unrelatable and dragged out in the boring parts
This is a great find!!👍 Nice starting ,I liked how this started after years of his transmigration , and i don't think we 'll get his any time soon. I really like the mc character and the others , this is bit slow paced and the locked chapters are soo soon!!
A peak comeback, academy book boring??, nahh it is on a different level from other books. highly recommended ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😁😁
Finally it's back😭 Last time I read this it had 13 chaps And was sooooo good! Ofc I'll relead it
Author san giving you your first three stones based on strongest assassin novel looking forward to reading this also first review 🤭
Hello, Jallen here. I wrote this work a few months ago and decided to finally post it. If you have any questions, you can ask them below, and I will answer them.
writing this after reading 36 chapters. the writing quality is really good, the dialogues aren’t awkward/unrealistic unlike most novels on webnovel and most importantly I’ve been really enjoying reading the chapters. I have high hopes for this one :D
I really like the type of novels where MC is professor and OP at the same time but knows what he is doing and doesn't like being looked down upon. Author you have a good novel going on here keep up the good work and upload more chapters.
I gave it 20 chapters... Nothing happened, we know nothing about Mc. Nothing about other characters. Nothing about why he became teacher or soldier. Like you read it and get nothing. We only saw that he is super strong and he only dealt with one student we know hardly anything about... Look story should have a plot hook at least in first 5 chapters... And good one should at 1 or 2 chapter... There was no future goal created, no drama, nothing. I just wasted time reading guy running around talking 3 sentences and going back to sleep.
No way are rat is a MC. Reading this.🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀🐀
It's a great story. A strong Kakashi with his special students... sure to be interesting.
Não gosto de Novels onde o prota é desconhecido em uma guerra onde foi um dos proragonistas, e ainda tem o fato dele ser um duque, acabei abandonando a estória com 7 capitulos, já que vi que não era para mim.
This story was not for me. I tried to read the first couple of chapters, but it was filled with sarcastic comments and contradictions. It might bring in an audience and keep them entertained, but establishing a connection just didn't seem to happen with me. Good luck with your work.
he mc can't seem to make up his mind and acts like a immatured teenager with mood swings. The dialogues flow unnaturally and none of the characters have a stable personality. They are made as like a side character from a harem anime, lacking depth and substance. unrelatable and dragged out in the boring parts
This is a great find!!👍 Nice starting ,I liked how this started after years of his transmigration , and i don't think we 'll get his any time soon. I really like the mc character and the others , this is bit slow paced and the locked chapters are soo soon!!
A peak comeback, academy book boring??, nahh it is on a different level from other books. highly recommended ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😁😁
Finally it's back😭 Last time I read this it had 13 chaps And was sooooo good! Ofc I'll relead it
Author san giving you your first three stones based on strongest assassin novel looking forward to reading this also first review 🤭
Hello, Jallen here. I wrote this work a few months ago and decided to finally post it. If you have any questions, you can ask them below, and I will answer them.