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Amazing stuff, i was not disappointed. at first, when I read about how the MC was framed and could not speak out to defend himself, I thought the story would turn out to be a cliche revenge plot, but as I continued reading, i discovered that the story was not about some guy after being betrayed became all dark and gloomy and craving for revenge and looking for everything that is wrong with the world, but about someone who understood that the only reason he could have been framed in the first place is because he lacked strength he understood how the world worked and instead of trying to fight against it by cooking up some unnecessary revenge plan and look for all the bad things that is wrong with world, He decided to get stronger, get better and build a world for him, his friends and his family a world were they would be happy and although the MC is not better than my Mecury (i don't care if he is the MC or not in this book no one is better than my Mecury those who don't agree can choke on their keyboard), he does make my top 3 list of amazing and well written characters of this book and top 20 of all time. my point is that this book is truly worth the read.
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This is a masterpiece. The only thing to complain about would be the occasional spelling or grammatical errors, but even that does not take away from the quality of the story. The author does a great job of capturing your attention from the first couple of chapters and keeping your attention with their almost magical ability to pace the story perfectly. I almost never take the time to write a review, but this one deserved the time. Highly recommend.
as a reader who has read more than 600 books on this platform, I can say that this book is definitely worth your time and money. amazing work and a fresh story unlike other trashy books with same old plot. read it and thank me later.
Really good novel so far, it’s like k drama Pokémon, good character development and overall plot.
Good read, been spending all of my FPS on it. You may want to cut the big paragraphs into smaller ones though, makes it much easier to read.
Honestly dropped this on the first chapter, i think we should first follow the mc and some of the other characters for a while before betrayals start to happen, I don't really know anything about these characthers to feel invested in the betrayals and the way the mc reacted didn't feel very realistic to me given the info we had (which wasn't a lot to be fair, first chapter and all), but the story felt like it was going to be very revenge driven, if that's your type of story give it a shot.
This is hands down the best beast taming book out right now and my personal favorite. The author know what he is doing, this boy is cooking over here. I will stay with this book until it's done. This author can have my money,points and stones. I will highly support this book that I always look forward to read. Even though he the Main character don't use his system as much as I like, the book is so good you don't really care. Thank you for all the your hard work. bless you
as of this review, I'm at chapter 95 of 120. overall, I would have to say the story is really good, I like the fact that the main character did not get lost in revenge and seeks to harm those who hurt him. I love the dynamic between the main character and the main female character. they have a fairly realistic romantic relationship. there are two main things I can even rag about on this story. one is the fact that several times there are grammatical and / or wording mistakes that can be distracting. and secondly, the fact that there seems to be missing info on a critical viewing makes me question this stability of the world. like one of the things is it's not made clear how Universal knowledge is on being a Beastmaster. cuz it's made obvious that the students and most lower ranked people don't know about bestification or field spells, really. but they seem extremely common in the higher ranks of a competition that is apparently a very popular sport that has sponsors, and I'm assuming commercials. Considering students watch replays of matchs, surely this has been seen before. But based on how the series reads, it seems like this is the first time their seeing these techniques. It could just be that the main populace don't expect it from their tier of competitors, but it doesn't read that way to me. But if you just let it not bother you, the story is an entertaining and honestly heartwarming read.
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Honestly my favorite book right now its very well written the characters are fleshed out the fights are described well the romance is good so far but i wish there were more chapters dedicated the only thing that’s really a problem is that some of the fights are too long or jus some scenes take way to long but besides that this is a amazing novel
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Everything seems very forced within the story. Read 20 chapters to get a feel for it and I personally think a longer “prologue” to the betrayal is much needed. Main character is supposed to be the top of the first years and a genius but no one listens to his side of the story which is very weird and feels too forced without more context. Maybe a few chapters of the Academy characters interacting before hand could sell it better but even the parents not listening ,after giving their all to send him to that Academy, just feels horribly forced. Then he’s accepted no problem at all within the aunt’s household… either way more worldbuilding and fleshing out of every character’s motive is really needed. POV switching is prevalent within the story as well but personally, I think it should be handled differently by making dedicated chapters or a cleaner text break within the chapter instead of just the next paragraph.
thanks for this treat of a story, well crafted, can't wait to see him explore the world and discover new and power monster to tame and befriend
HOOK LINE AND SINKER. So far the book got be hooked and my heart wouldn’t stop beating fast. Love the story, I related a lot with the main character. Can’t wait for more chapters to come. HONESTLY best book i have read so far please give it a try as a reader.
ten out ten beast tamer book I love it keep up the good work. I will say add more stats so we can see where he stands from time to time. but I love the book and emotions you give to the book.
I'm not gonna lie. This is one amazing story. I have enjoyed every moment from the first chapter. The author has created an amazing sympathetic protagonist whom I can't stop rooting for. Highly recommended.
I feel like a father proud of the evolution of this son, now your writing is really like novelupdate stories, good job. - - - - - - - - How long before your big project between? I need the true ending of P Ava to keep living
Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷
Amazing stuff, i was not disappointed. at first, when I read about how the MC was framed and could not speak out to defend himself, I thought the story would turn out to be a cliche revenge plot, but as I continued reading, i discovered that the story was not about some guy after being betrayed became all dark and gloomy and craving for revenge and looking for everything that is wrong with the world, but about someone who understood that the only reason he could have been framed in the first place is because he lacked strength he understood how the world worked and instead of trying to fight against it by cooking up some unnecessary revenge plan and look for all the bad things that is wrong with world, He decided to get stronger, get better and build a world for him, his friends and his family a world were they would be happy and although the MC is not better than my Mecury (i don't care if he is the MC or not in this book no one is better than my Mecury those who don't agree can choke on their keyboard), he does make my top 3 list of amazing and well written characters of this book and top 20 of all time. my point is that this book is truly worth the read.
揭示劇透 This is a masterpiece. The only thing to complain about would be the occasional spelling or grammatical errors, but even that does not take away from the quality of the story. The author does a great job of capturing your attention from the first couple of chapters and keeping your attention with their almost magical ability to pace the story perfectly. I almost never take the time to write a review, but this one deserved the time. Highly recommend.
as a reader who has read more than 600 books on this platform, I can say that this book is definitely worth your time and money. amazing work and a fresh story unlike other trashy books with same old plot. read it and thank me later.
Really good novel so far, it’s like k drama Pokémon, good character development and overall plot.
Good read, been spending all of my FPS on it. You may want to cut the big paragraphs into smaller ones though, makes it much easier to read.
Honestly dropped this on the first chapter, i think we should first follow the mc and some of the other characters for a while before betrayals start to happen, I don't really know anything about these characthers to feel invested in the betrayals and the way the mc reacted didn't feel very realistic to me given the info we had (which wasn't a lot to be fair, first chapter and all), but the story felt like it was going to be very revenge driven, if that's your type of story give it a shot.
This is hands down the best beast taming book out right now and my personal favorite. The author know what he is doing, this boy is cooking over here. I will stay with this book until it's done. This author can have my money,points and stones. I will highly support this book that I always look forward to read. Even though he the Main character don't use his system as much as I like, the book is so good you don't really care. Thank you for all the your hard work. bless you
as of this review, I'm at chapter 95 of 120. overall, I would have to say the story is really good, I like the fact that the main character did not get lost in revenge and seeks to harm those who hurt him. I love the dynamic between the main character and the main female character. they have a fairly realistic romantic relationship. there are two main things I can even rag about on this story. one is the fact that several times there are grammatical and / or wording mistakes that can be distracting. and secondly, the fact that there seems to be missing info on a critical viewing makes me question this stability of the world. like one of the things is it's not made clear how Universal knowledge is on being a Beastmaster. cuz it's made obvious that the students and most lower ranked people don't know about bestification or field spells, really. but they seem extremely common in the higher ranks of a competition that is apparently a very popular sport that has sponsors, and I'm assuming commercials. Considering students watch replays of matchs, surely this has been seen before. But based on how the series reads, it seems like this is the first time their seeing these techniques. It could just be that the main populace don't expect it from their tier of competitors, but it doesn't read that way to me. But if you just let it not bother you, the story is an entertaining and honestly heartwarming read.
揭示劇透 Honestly my favorite book right now its very well written the characters are fleshed out the fights are described well the romance is good so far but i wish there were more chapters dedicated the only thing that’s really a problem is that some of the fights are too long or jus some scenes take way to long but besides that this is a amazing novel
揭示劇透 Everything seems very forced within the story. Read 20 chapters to get a feel for it and I personally think a longer “prologue” to the betrayal is much needed. Main character is supposed to be the top of the first years and a genius but no one listens to his side of the story which is very weird and feels too forced without more context. Maybe a few chapters of the Academy characters interacting before hand could sell it better but even the parents not listening ,after giving their all to send him to that Academy, just feels horribly forced. Then he’s accepted no problem at all within the aunt’s household… either way more worldbuilding and fleshing out of every character’s motive is really needed. POV switching is prevalent within the story as well but personally, I think it should be handled differently by making dedicated chapters or a cleaner text break within the chapter instead of just the next paragraph.
thanks for this treat of a story, well crafted, can't wait to see him explore the world and discover new and power monster to tame and befriend
HOOK LINE AND SINKER. So far the book got be hooked and my heart wouldn’t stop beating fast. Love the story, I related a lot with the main character. Can’t wait for more chapters to come. HONESTLY best book i have read so far please give it a try as a reader.
ten out ten beast tamer book I love it keep up the good work. I will say add more stats so we can see where he stands from time to time. but I love the book and emotions you give to the book.
I'm not gonna lie. This is one amazing story. I have enjoyed every moment from the first chapter. The author has created an amazing sympathetic protagonist whom I can't stop rooting for. Highly recommended.
I feel like a father proud of the evolution of this son, now your writing is really like novelupdate stories, good job. - - - - - - - - How long before your big project between? I need the true ending of P Ava to keep living
Pertamax 😎📖🥇 Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷
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