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مع قرأة القصة أجد أني أحبها لكني أجد أنك تتسرع في إعطاء القوة لي جون مثل أن يصبح قائد 5000 جندي من معركة واحدة أو أن ينشأ جيشا من 20000 الف جندي بسرعة لا تناسب الأحدات ف الجيش يتطلب أعوام ليتشكل وتكون نوات صلبة حتى في القصة كانكي بدأ من فرق صغيرة رغم أن بطلنا لديه عشيرة القتلة إلى أنه في الواقع لن يمكنهم السيطرة على الممالك أو محاربتهم مهما أصبحوا أقوا أو زعم البطل أنه يمكنه ذالك ف المملكة رغم أنها قصة خيالية تاريخي لديها قواعد في القوة فلجميل فيها هو أنا لها العديد من الفروع السياسة الحروب الخيانة التقة والكتير الكثير
the first chapters i have read so far, are exactly like a manhwa called reaper of the drifting moon. cool writing though.
A Kingdom fanfic!? That KINGDOM!! Just that alone, I'm gonna give this fanfic a 5 Star. Been waiting for too long. Also *cough* while we at it, who gonna be the love interest? Even thought I'm already can guess it.
Big fan of ''the kingdom''. Have only read one other fanfic that got droppd. So far (cap 29) the story is egaging. I like how adaptable the mc is to the situation he finds himself in and the background characters, i feel are adding to the story. Hope author doesn't dropp this.
Bro! Why is it always you. I keep finding fics i like to read in the fic section and when i see the author, it turns out to be you. BRO! why do i have to find out a new work of yours in the fic section. cant you update your previous works and say you have a new work.
I have been waiting for a great kingdom fanfic and i must say the start for this fanfic is just perfect i really hope for the rest of the story to stay at this level.
It's actually a fantastic start for a story. If there was a story I'd like to see put into like form it would be this one! Please continue! ! ! ! !!
I am surprisingly liking this story so far, I hope Author keeps it up because I miss a good Kingdom novel. Sadly, all other Kingdom fics end up either dead or just deleted
I have only read the synopsis but I am very sure to give 5 stars because this is the Kingdom, hell yeah.
The last Kingdom story I read disappeared, I trust the author and I know that at least he won't abandon his stories. So far, so good, the beginning has some resemblance to another novel but the author said that he was inspired by it to create the first chapters. I'm not complaining about that, good luck.
yo is this genuine kingdom fanfic? last one i found was fake one made by using chatgbt
I haven’t even read it and I’m only giving 5 stars cuz it’s your fanfic I just wanna ask if this kingdom show of the zombies one or no?
مع قرأة القصة أجد أني أحبها لكني أجد أنك تتسرع في إعطاء القوة لي جون مثل أن يصبح قائد 5000 جندي من معركة واحدة أو أن ينشأ جيشا من 20000 الف جندي بسرعة لا تناسب الأحدات ف الجيش يتطلب أعوام ليتشكل وتكون نوات صلبة حتى في القصة كانكي بدأ من فرق صغيرة رغم أن بطلنا لديه عشيرة القتلة إلى أنه في الواقع لن يمكنهم السيطرة على الممالك أو محاربتهم مهما أصبحوا أقوا أو زعم البطل أنه يمكنه ذالك ف المملكة رغم أنها قصة خيالية تاريخي لديها قواعد في القوة فلجميل فيها هو أنا لها العديد من الفروع السياسة الحروب الخيانة التقة والكتير الكثير
the first chapters i have read so far, are exactly like a manhwa called reaper of the drifting moon. cool writing though.
A Kingdom fanfic!? That KINGDOM!! Just that alone, I'm gonna give this fanfic a 5 Star. Been waiting for too long. Also *cough* while we at it, who gonna be the love interest? Even thought I'm already can guess it.
Big fan of ''the kingdom''. Have only read one other fanfic that got droppd. So far (cap 29) the story is egaging. I like how adaptable the mc is to the situation he finds himself in and the background characters, i feel are adding to the story. Hope author doesn't dropp this.
Bro! Why is it always you. I keep finding fics i like to read in the fic section and when i see the author, it turns out to be you. BRO! why do i have to find out a new work of yours in the fic section. cant you update your previous works and say you have a new work.
I have been waiting for a great kingdom fanfic and i must say the start for this fanfic is just perfect i really hope for the rest of the story to stay at this level.
It's actually a fantastic start for a story. If there was a story I'd like to see put into like form it would be this one! Please continue! ! ! ! !!
I am surprisingly liking this story so far, I hope Author keeps it up because I miss a good Kingdom novel. Sadly, all other Kingdom fics end up either dead or just deleted
I have only read the synopsis but I am very sure to give 5 stars because this is the Kingdom, hell yeah.
The last Kingdom story I read disappeared, I trust the author and I know that at least he won't abandon his stories. So far, so good, the beginning has some resemblance to another novel but the author said that he was inspired by it to create the first chapters. I'm not complaining about that, good luck.
yo is this genuine kingdom fanfic? last one i found was fake one made by using chatgbt
I haven’t even read it and I’m only giving 5 stars cuz it’s your fanfic I just wanna ask if this kingdom show of the zombies one or no?