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The idea in general is good, unfortunately the story itself is not. It reads more are an author’s quick notes for his planned chapter, not an actual story.
it's like an interview not a story there is not negative reaction in this novel
80% sure this is chatgpt, starts off every chapter with a reminder that the mc is former brazilian special forces. only time someone speaks they keep praising the mc, like they say nothing else.
I really liked this story it was great one of my favourite story's and even though their is some bits and pieces i am not a fan of the overall fic was great Keep it up
The idea in general is good, unfortunately the story itself is not. It reads more are an author’s quick notes for his planned chapter, not an actual story.
it's like an interview not a story there is not negative reaction in this novel
80% sure this is chatgpt, starts off every chapter with a reminder that the mc is former brazilian special forces. only time someone speaks they keep praising the mc, like they say nothing else.
I really liked this story it was great one of my favourite story's and even though their is some bits and pieces i am not a fan of the overall fic was great Keep it up