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The novel is nice, MC is OP but it feels like it is a mixture of plot armor plus hard work, it is not like he reached the power level as quickly as Issei but he is smart about it but man I am Jealous so let us list all the cheats of MC (He only had 1 at start but gained others later): 1. Dxd (Diablos Dragon) Level Sacred Gear: with Apophis powers + Boost + Divide + Ophis blessing + Great Red blessing 2. Brindhlde Sword: Contain spirit of an Evil Spirit + Bryndhilde Odindaughter (Both at least Leader class) + devour to increase power 3. Hero + Ocean god + Magic god + witch + Dragon + Fallen Bloodline 4. Devouring other bloodlines 5. Blessing of Ophis Pro (Allows MC to master Ophis' power faster and acts like an EXP boost)
Bro, I have a lot of ideas that come to my head and I don't know how to write stories as cool as the ones you do, so I wanted to give you ideas so you can do more, because I honestly like your way of writing. Here I leave you one, it could be that Mc reincarnates in MHA but with the powers of beast boy, simply with some modifications, such as not being limited to common animals but also fictional creatures
Bro, and if you make a story in which your character is a very big fan of Akaza and is reborn in the world of My Hero Academia with his appearance and abilities, it would be really cool, and I feel like you would make it very good.
Excellent work making it an original fanfic and not a run of the mill fic! I’m looking forward to reading more.
The author was very original in giving an original sacred gear to the MC, besides the story having a good rhythm, not to mention that the characters are quite charismatic.
bro I'm about to crash out fr for 9 months we've been waiting for updates on the wyvern and the Toji fanfics and bro just keeps bringing new ones
If it's like all the other amazing stories the author writes, It's bond to be amazing
Seems interesting enough and since it’s three worlds in one there should be plenty of enemies
Suggestion for a fanfic, make one about the MC with SCP 682 or SCP 076 abilities in DxD or DC.
so he going to become a fallen angel I hope so beacuse humans don't have long lifespan author.
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Hello, I have a question in addition to the worlds already mentioned that you plan to use in the crossover you will not add any others and if you do I have another doubt since you are going to use the approach of Fallen Angels why don't you make a change in the canon saving Akeno and help her develop on a fallen angel route and you develop a team out there you can also threaten Zuo Himejima and take control of his clan to create a hand of honor against future supernatural threats and create an alliance with the syntonist gods and the yokais
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Hope it lives up to your name...............................................................................................................
My favorite pass time, I have wanted to do a Testmant of a sister new Devil fanfic and a Rosario + Vampire so I will put them in DxD. Time to work my magic as always.
The novel is nice, MC is OP but it feels like it is a mixture of plot armor plus hard work, it is not like he reached the power level as quickly as Issei but he is smart about it but man I am Jealous so let us list all the cheats of MC (He only had 1 at start but gained others later): 1. Dxd (Diablos Dragon) Level Sacred Gear: with Apophis powers + Boost + Divide + Ophis blessing + Great Red blessing 2. Brindhlde Sword: Contain spirit of an Evil Spirit + Bryndhilde Odindaughter (Both at least Leader class) + devour to increase power 3. Hero + Ocean god + Magic god + witch + Dragon + Fallen Bloodline 4. Devouring other bloodlines 5. Blessing of Ophis Pro (Allows MC to master Ophis' power faster and acts like an EXP boost)
Bro, I have a lot of ideas that come to my head and I don't know how to write stories as cool as the ones you do, so I wanted to give you ideas so you can do more, because I honestly like your way of writing. Here I leave you one, it could be that Mc reincarnates in MHA but with the powers of beast boy, simply with some modifications, such as not being limited to common animals but also fictional creatures
Bro, and if you make a story in which your character is a very big fan of Akaza and is reborn in the world of My Hero Academia with his appearance and abilities, it would be really cool, and I feel like you would make it very good.
Excellent work making it an original fanfic and not a run of the mill fic! I’m looking forward to reading more.
The author was very original in giving an original sacred gear to the MC, besides the story having a good rhythm, not to mention that the characters are quite charismatic.
bro I'm about to crash out fr for 9 months we've been waiting for updates on the wyvern and the Toji fanfics and bro just keeps bringing new ones
If it's like all the other amazing stories the author writes, It's bond to be amazing
Seems interesting enough and since it’s three worlds in one there should be plenty of enemies
Suggestion for a fanfic, make one about the MC with SCP 682 or SCP 076 abilities in DxD or DC.
so he going to become a fallen angel I hope so beacuse humans don't have long lifespan author.
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Hello, I have a question in addition to the worlds already mentioned that you plan to use in the crossover you will not add any others and if you do I have another doubt since you are going to use the approach of Fallen Angels why don't you make a change in the canon saving Akeno and help her develop on a fallen angel route and you develop a team out there you can also threaten Zuo Himejima and take control of his clan to create a hand of honor against future supernatural threats and create an alliance with the syntonist gods and the yokais
揭示劇透 Hope it lives up to your name...............................................................................................................
My favorite pass time, I have wanted to do a Testmant of a sister new Devil fanfic and a Rosario + Vampire so I will put them in DxD. Time to work my magic as always.
its good but some parts are just annoying, fallens.