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The story is great, I liked it a lot. If anyone knows webnovels similar to this please let me know. I hope there is no Chinese racism in your suggested novels.
it has good writing and it's grammar is better than most others i enjoy the story but it gets to side tracked like who cares about evil conspiracies or ancient secrets or other things it's supposed to be a system story about bringing earths entertainment media to a different world we don't care about those side things! and it's not helped by the fact that 85% of the time author seems to forget about the system
it gets a lot worse when he keeps adding bullshit subplots, especially the Cult-like divinity slash followers praying to the mc with a wish-style system for his followers.
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Wow blew my mind this story is fantastic!!! I love how it keeps me on my toes. There are twists and turns which might seem like they are predictable but in an unexpected way
I give 5 star cause i enjoy the books, people have different taste and your books suit my taste, overall quality is good few early chapter is not satisfactory but it's okay cause i know u just trying to find your own writing style, later chapter proving what i think is correct to make the books world building more completed and the character building is follow up the writing making multiple pov just finish the detailed touch Thanks for your hard work I appreciated your work and like it Sadly im just poor student can't give u a gift i will just support with what i have [img=recommend]
If you really want to just chill and read, this is the story for you. No need to overthink or stress, just read and immerse. it is genuinely fun story with actual enjoyment factor instead of same BS you see on this site every day. light hearted story overall so don't expect some insane over the top drama. When drama does happen it is well done and some reviews here are weirdly negative like they are so over the top. This is not a masterpiece but it is perfectly entertaining story with regular updates.
I was getting physically hurt while reading this......Like someone was poking my eyes continuesly. Mind was practically screaming to me to stop reading too much
meh, the premise is quite good but the execution could be a lot better. Like idk, put some details in the creation process, world building, character development etc. but it just became your usual entertainment fic, MC pulling masterpiece after masterpiece out his ass and only focus on writing audience reactions and news reports. Then from filmmaking, he went to creating modern computers, games, music it just became too much and that all happened in less than a year?
It's a really good novel, but with all the face slapping and all i don't think it's good to continue for the characters to only say he won by luck
So far good, world building and character creation good with multiple pov make it more imaginable and easy to imagine the world view, aside from usual troupe of urban novel magic and alternated world make it more colorful
The translation into my language (Spanish) is good, maybe it's because I got used to worse translations but I consider it a good translation. Although sometimes it is confusing since sometimes the names of the cities appear in English and others in Spanish.[img=thinking]
Hi, I'm a new reader of this novel (only about 2-3 days) and I'm in chapter 113. I really liked this book and the story path taken by the author so far. But I have a little advice, maybe the author forgot but in this book one of the scenes that I think is quite important but the author forgot to add is the script reading scene, whenever anyone reading a comic or another novel will know what I mean. It would be very interesting to see this scene if it was added during the filming arc
A pleasant read, I have really enjoyed reading it so far and I leave my regret for the current situation of the author, I hope he overcomes the adversities, I wish him luck. 😿😸👍
I enjoy reading the novel but I wonder are you gonna create a Hollywood city?
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Love this I was worried about the creators realm thinking he would start focusing on fighting but you made him release books in them instead so no problem .
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This story is hard to classify. During the first 20 chapters, I kept thinking: 'It's nice to pass the time, but nothing special so far.' After he released the movie, the reactions came, which I liked, and it kept me much more focused on the story. Currently, I’m on chapter 47, and I’m really enjoying following it now. It’s not a masterpiece or anything like that, but I can say it’s a good work.
La historia es entretenida, el protagonista es alguien que aprovecha las oportunidades y no por ello se convierte en villano o desarrolla algún problema metal. Me gusta como aunque el autor ponga desafíos al protagonista o lo recompense, nunca he sentido que fuera exagerado o no se lo mereciera, las historias que el protagonista crea están muy bien orientadas al tipo de público que se esperaría de un mundo como ese, si bien me incómodo lo que hizo con Harry Potter, también entendí que no era realista hacer una historia excluyendo a las demás razas de su mundo, esto le crearía problemas y disminuiría la popularidad de la obra.
Amazing story love the world building and the entertainment revision that he is doing a totally must read thank you author for such an amazing novel please keep it coming .
The author likes to develop his characters over time, so do not rush to draw conclusions from the first chapters. Yes, there are moments of film production and so on, but this is fan fiction about the entertainment industry. how to write a story if it does not have a basic structure on which the whole story rests. you may not read them, you won't lose much, I would say, but they complement the story by revealing some of the characters, their interactions, fears and much more, of course not all. the author is in a hurry to write chapters and there are gaps in the story. There is a lot left unsaid. Take a break, take a deep breath and exhale, you can write an excellent chapter with 5 stars once a week or many small ones with 3.8 stars every day. There are also antagonists in the story like religion and his family and other organizations, but they are poorly disclosed
It's a good story but it has a very bad rhythm everything happens very quickly until episode 166 it hasn't been more than 3 years although I'm not sure because it doesn't show a date but a lot of time hasn't passed but a lot of things happen he has released like 5 or 6 movies and other things in a short time I don't understand the author's haste if demons live a long time
I have read more than 200 chapter , and I can frankly say I enjoyed it .....it's written very well with a good mc.... though I am dropping it now not because it's not good but it is just the current development is just not my thing.... from the moment that devine points with a system came it veerd off course and now everything gets done easily as long as he spend devine phone
揭示劇透 The story is great, I liked it a lot. If anyone knows webnovels similar to this please let me know. I hope there is no Chinese racism in your suggested novels.
it has good writing and it's grammar is better than most others i enjoy the story but it gets to side tracked like who cares about evil conspiracies or ancient secrets or other things it's supposed to be a system story about bringing earths entertainment media to a different world we don't care about those side things! and it's not helped by the fact that 85% of the time author seems to forget about the system
it gets a lot worse when he keeps adding bullshit subplots, especially the Cult-like divinity slash followers praying to the mc with a wish-style system for his followers.
揭示劇透 Wow blew my mind this story is fantastic!!! I love how it keeps me on my toes. There are twists and turns which might seem like they are predictable but in an unexpected way
I give 5 star cause i enjoy the books, people have different taste and your books suit my taste, overall quality is good few early chapter is not satisfactory but it's okay cause i know u just trying to find your own writing style, later chapter proving what i think is correct to make the books world building more completed and the character building is follow up the writing making multiple pov just finish the detailed touch Thanks for your hard work I appreciated your work and like it Sadly im just poor student can't give u a gift i will just support with what i have [img=recommend]
If you really want to just chill and read, this is the story for you. No need to overthink or stress, just read and immerse. it is genuinely fun story with actual enjoyment factor instead of same BS you see on this site every day. light hearted story overall so don't expect some insane over the top drama. When drama does happen it is well done and some reviews here are weirdly negative like they are so over the top. This is not a masterpiece but it is perfectly entertaining story with regular updates.
I was getting physically hurt while reading this......Like someone was poking my eyes continuesly. Mind was practically screaming to me to stop reading too much
meh, the premise is quite good but the execution could be a lot better. Like idk, put some details in the creation process, world building, character development etc. but it just became your usual entertainment fic, MC pulling masterpiece after masterpiece out his ass and only focus on writing audience reactions and news reports. Then from filmmaking, he went to creating modern computers, games, music it just became too much and that all happened in less than a year?
It's a really good novel, but with all the face slapping and all i don't think it's good to continue for the characters to only say he won by luck
So far good, world building and character creation good with multiple pov make it more imaginable and easy to imagine the world view, aside from usual troupe of urban novel magic and alternated world make it more colorful
The translation into my language (Spanish) is good, maybe it's because I got used to worse translations but I consider it a good translation. Although sometimes it is confusing since sometimes the names of the cities appear in English and others in Spanish.[img=thinking]
Hi, I'm a new reader of this novel (only about 2-3 days) and I'm in chapter 113. I really liked this book and the story path taken by the author so far. But I have a little advice, maybe the author forgot but in this book one of the scenes that I think is quite important but the author forgot to add is the script reading scene, whenever anyone reading a comic or another novel will know what I mean. It would be very interesting to see this scene if it was added during the filming arc
A pleasant read, I have really enjoyed reading it so far and I leave my regret for the current situation of the author, I hope he overcomes the adversities, I wish him luck. 😿😸👍
I enjoy reading the novel but I wonder are you gonna create a Hollywood city?
Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood. Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood. Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood. Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood Yooooo sooo goooood.
Love this I was worried about the creators realm thinking he would start focusing on fighting but you made him release books in them instead so no problem .
揭示劇透 This story is hard to classify. During the first 20 chapters, I kept thinking: 'It's nice to pass the time, but nothing special so far.' After he released the movie, the reactions came, which I liked, and it kept me much more focused on the story. Currently, I’m on chapter 47, and I’m really enjoying following it now. It’s not a masterpiece or anything like that, but I can say it’s a good work.
La historia es entretenida, el protagonista es alguien que aprovecha las oportunidades y no por ello se convierte en villano o desarrolla algún problema metal. Me gusta como aunque el autor ponga desafíos al protagonista o lo recompense, nunca he sentido que fuera exagerado o no se lo mereciera, las historias que el protagonista crea están muy bien orientadas al tipo de público que se esperaría de un mundo como ese, si bien me incómodo lo que hizo con Harry Potter, también entendí que no era realista hacer una historia excluyendo a las demás razas de su mundo, esto le crearía problemas y disminuiría la popularidad de la obra.
Amazing story love the world building and the entertainment revision that he is doing a totally must read thank you author for such an amazing novel please keep it coming .
The author likes to develop his characters over time, so do not rush to draw conclusions from the first chapters. Yes, there are moments of film production and so on, but this is fan fiction about the entertainment industry. how to write a story if it does not have a basic structure on which the whole story rests. you may not read them, you won't lose much, I would say, but they complement the story by revealing some of the characters, their interactions, fears and much more, of course not all. the author is in a hurry to write chapters and there are gaps in the story. There is a lot left unsaid. Take a break, take a deep breath and exhale, you can write an excellent chapter with 5 stars once a week or many small ones with 3.8 stars every day. There are also antagonists in the story like religion and his family and other organizations, but they are poorly disclosed
It's a good story but it has a very bad rhythm everything happens very quickly until episode 166 it hasn't been more than 3 years although I'm not sure because it doesn't show a date but a lot of time hasn't passed but a lot of things happen he has released like 5 or 6 movies and other things in a short time I don't understand the author's haste if demons live a long time
I have read more than 200 chapter , and I can frankly say I enjoyed it .....it's written very well with a good mc.... though I am dropping it now not because it's not good but it is just the current development is just not my thing.... from the moment that devine points with a system came it veerd off course and now everything gets done easily as long as he spend devine phone
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