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Bravo, it's been a while since I've seen a fanfic with a power-progression this good. If I had any worries, it would primarily be with what the author plans to do now that the MC is so powerful
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Is there any lemons ahead? I’m asking because I’m barely in year one, so I’m asking those who are in year 4+
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I’m glad this is my first invested HP fan fic…this is….a masterpiece of its own kind! Thanks author for the hardwork, guys u can believe this hp fic is very very very good! The story is very logical and the interactions btween characters are also smooth!!
If you are new to HP fanfic this one will be fine. If you are not, you will find it repetitive, boring, generic and even a little frustrating because of the way it uses his points and also when he drowns you in a whole chapter of information. (He spent four chapters buying a wand for the love of God)
While at first I didn't except much because of the title of the book -thought it was a guy trying to be the next Dumbledore- I was pleasantly surprised by the plot, the character development and well everything.
bro there's a lot of theory here, it's very tiring to read dozens of chapters just about theory and no action, this book broke the record and made me sleep a lot while reading
I was worried when you suddenly stopped uploading for straight 4 days after uploading everyday and taking down the cover pic. Glad you didn't stop and here is my review so please don't ever stop♥
3.2 1 star on writing: The translator did not even try to edit the chapters well. The words and terminologies are so obviously done in a hurry. 1 star character design: The MC is made by chinese so, he wants more magic power as an 11 yr old obscurus. and he even said allocating stat points is a pressing matter!? Because he could add any more stat points in magic which is already legendary?? hello!??? his physic is 1 (ordinary) why not put it there cuz that will save your freaking life!? stupid MC
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currently loving it, the seamless blending of the different sources is very refreshing
Great Fanfic . The story is intriguing and does go to main lead wanting to control everything. The world development is great giving chances for future plots . The plot movement is somewhat slow but understandable to help in background management at the start. Just hope it doesn't get dropped. All in all one of my favorite fanfics till now.
I honestly don't understand why this story is rated so high? I mean, it reads like a bad translation, the characters are reduced to cheerleaders who worship mc, and sometimes the terms used differ from the original and get used inconsistently. But at least i have the feeling the author is a fan of the series and actually read the books. The explanation about the goldfinger (System) and its actual use are also a bit different, while the rewards appear to be random. The power level also randomly spikes, making the progression quite weird. It is a pretty basic story that orients itself close to the books, and the new parts added to the story and world building appear a bit bland, but it seems the story is slowly diverging from the original, so maybe that will change. Overall, I would give this story barely a 3 out of 5 if we don't consider the update stability, which is good.
This is kind of boring in my opinion. The magic part is good, but the main character is just too perfect. There is no suspense, humor, or original characters. If you want to read about a gender-bent Mary Sue, then this is it, but if you want some exciting wizard battles, I can't recommend this.
So gooood!! And did he just creat Ultron? Lookimg forward to see him become a White Lord so don't drop.
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What a great Fanfic. MC isn't an idiot, he first adds points to his magic and wisdom and then add points to body (don't forget he's a wizard). You may find him idiot when he choses to trust the professors and reveal his obscurus BUT he has seen the future and is doing things 2 steps ahead.
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It’s hard to read this when he’s thinking so stupidly and they’re such obvious answers
Good Work.............................................................................................................................................
I like the story very much. Finally a good Dumbledore lol[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can be bised as I've only read only another harry potter fanfic and that was about an edge lord but I truly beleave that this fic deserves 5 stars
Amazing characters, backstory, good magic understanding and mc is strong but not big headed or try’s and hide that he has power but is stil careful about what he show until he can trust the people around him.
Great Story so far... Update more!....................................................................................................................
......................................................................................Great..................................................
Easy top 10 HP fics. If you are reading the initial chapters and think there is a lot of info, trust me, you will thank those infos later 'coz in later chapters you'll be able to tell what stat will help at what time♥
Best. Makes the annoying character of Hermione very adorable. [img=update]..............................................................................
The author of this novel is a complete idiot, he is one of those morons who believes that it is better to add all your points in magic, but none in the physical, for God's sake, having a fucking system that allows you to break the limits, since you are not going to strengthen your physique, thanks to that you would not have to spend your magical power to protect yourself since you could dodge the spell.
Bravo, it's been a while since I've seen a fanfic with a power-progression this good. If I had any worries, it would primarily be with what the author plans to do now that the MC is so powerful
.....................................................................................................................................¿link?
Is there any lemons ahead? I’m asking because I’m barely in year one, so I’m asking those who are in year 4+
揭示劇透 I’m glad this is my first invested HP fan fic…this is….a masterpiece of its own kind! Thanks author for the hardwork, guys u can believe this hp fic is very very very good! The story is very logical and the interactions btween characters are also smooth!!
If you are new to HP fanfic this one will be fine. If you are not, you will find it repetitive, boring, generic and even a little frustrating because of the way it uses his points and also when he drowns you in a whole chapter of information. (He spent four chapters buying a wand for the love of God)
While at first I didn't except much because of the title of the book -thought it was a guy trying to be the next Dumbledore- I was pleasantly surprised by the plot, the character development and well everything.
bro there's a lot of theory here, it's very tiring to read dozens of chapters just about theory and no action, this book broke the record and made me sleep a lot while reading
I was worried when you suddenly stopped uploading for straight 4 days after uploading everyday and taking down the cover pic. Glad you didn't stop and here is my review so please don't ever stop♥
3.2 1 star on writing: The translator did not even try to edit the chapters well. The words and terminologies are so obviously done in a hurry. 1 star character design: The MC is made by chinese so, he wants more magic power as an 11 yr old obscurus. and he even said allocating stat points is a pressing matter!? Because he could add any more stat points in magic which is already legendary?? hello!??? his physic is 1 (ordinary) why not put it there cuz that will save your freaking life!? stupid MC
揭示劇透 currently loving it, the seamless blending of the different sources is very refreshing
Great Fanfic . The story is intriguing and does go to main lead wanting to control everything. The world development is great giving chances for future plots . The plot movement is somewhat slow but understandable to help in background management at the start. Just hope it doesn't get dropped. All in all one of my favorite fanfics till now.
I honestly don't understand why this story is rated so high? I mean, it reads like a bad translation, the characters are reduced to cheerleaders who worship mc, and sometimes the terms used differ from the original and get used inconsistently. But at least i have the feeling the author is a fan of the series and actually read the books. The explanation about the goldfinger (System) and its actual use are also a bit different, while the rewards appear to be random. The power level also randomly spikes, making the progression quite weird. It is a pretty basic story that orients itself close to the books, and the new parts added to the story and world building appear a bit bland, but it seems the story is slowly diverging from the original, so maybe that will change. Overall, I would give this story barely a 3 out of 5 if we don't consider the update stability, which is good.
This is kind of boring in my opinion. The magic part is good, but the main character is just too perfect. There is no suspense, humor, or original characters. If you want to read about a gender-bent Mary Sue, then this is it, but if you want some exciting wizard battles, I can't recommend this.
So gooood!! And did he just creat Ultron? Lookimg forward to see him become a White Lord so don't drop.
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What a great Fanfic. MC isn't an idiot, he first adds points to his magic and wisdom and then add points to body (don't forget he's a wizard). You may find him idiot when he choses to trust the professors and reveal his obscurus BUT he has seen the future and is doing things 2 steps ahead.
揭示劇透 It’s hard to read this when he’s thinking so stupidly and they’re such obvious answers
Good Work.............................................................................................................................................
I like the story very much. Finally a good Dumbledore lol[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can be bised as I've only read only another harry potter fanfic and that was about an edge lord but I truly beleave that this fic deserves 5 stars
Amazing characters, backstory, good magic understanding and mc is strong but not big headed or try’s and hide that he has power but is stil careful about what he show until he can trust the people around him.
Great Story so far... Update more!....................................................................................................................
......................................................................................Great..................................................
Easy top 10 HP fics. If you are reading the initial chapters and think there is a lot of info, trust me, you will thank those infos later 'coz in later chapters you'll be able to tell what stat will help at what time♥
Best. Makes the annoying character of Hermione very adorable. [img=update]..............................................................................
The author of this novel is a complete idiot, he is one of those morons who believes that it is better to add all your points in magic, but none in the physical, for God's sake, having a fucking system that allows you to break the limits, since you are not going to strengthen your physique, thanks to that you would not have to spend your magical power to protect yourself since you could dodge the spell.