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I don't mean to accuse you of anything but this novel is egregiously close if not the same as another Chinese novel I'm reading from the synopsis, plot, team Alabama Crimson Tide, and name Li Wei (Wei Li) a Chinese-American Linebacker for the Crimson Tide with a football system who had to join cause he stopped a thief with MMA if he played decent the school would handle his legal expenses real sus but I hope not.
bro, I don't have the energy to try a system fic but I am really interested in A. football. Do tell me what this SYSTEM does. Does it give super op multiversal abilities or what? I hope not
A fantastic fanfic, a one of a kind on this platform or anywhwere else. A great job done on the translation as well. A must read for any sports fan. P.S. For people with no patience like me who cannot wait for more chapters, patreon is a good place.
This fic got me into American Football. It explains it well and pulls you into the story even if you have no prior knowledge. Great read
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Good stuff interesting development great job finding another novel after dropping the last one hoping you can pick up an nba system novel
The author did an excellent job of creating an engaging story. Even though it has a system, it doesn't make the MC very strong overnight. What impress me more is how the writer Build and introduced another character, its give me a joy when another character not just a Stepping stone for the mc and have a personality
Actually a pretty good football fanfic, you can actually enjoy this if you aren't knowledgeable in football as it teaches you along the way since the protagonist also doesn't know what football is at the start.
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hello... I didn't read this book for now but can you make a story about anime like the shokugeki but with Eyeshield 21 an anime about American Football.
This is a nice novel with an interesting concept. The author has done a stellar job so far keeping the storing engaging and informative for those new to American Football
good novel keep the good work man there aren't many nfl novel hopefully you can give us good one
American Football fic about a Lance, a guy who somehow ends up playing football for the Crimson Tide except, at first, he has no idea what football is. Try it out.
I don't mean to accuse you of anything but this novel is egregiously close if not the same as another Chinese novel I'm reading from the synopsis, plot, team Alabama Crimson Tide, and name Li Wei (Wei Li) a Chinese-American Linebacker for the Crimson Tide with a football system who had to join cause he stopped a thief with MMA if he played decent the school would handle his legal expenses real sus but I hope not.
bro, I don't have the energy to try a system fic but I am really interested in A. football. Do tell me what this SYSTEM does. Does it give super op multiversal abilities or what? I hope not
A fantastic fanfic, a one of a kind on this platform or anywhwere else. A great job done on the translation as well. A must read for any sports fan. P.S. For people with no patience like me who cannot wait for more chapters, patreon is a good place.
This fic got me into American Football. It explains it well and pulls you into the story even if you have no prior knowledge. Great read
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good stuff interesting development great job finding another novel after dropping the last one hoping you can pick up an nba system novel
The author did an excellent job of creating an engaging story. Even though it has a system, it doesn't make the MC very strong overnight. What impress me more is how the writer Build and introduced another character, its give me a joy when another character not just a Stepping stone for the mc and have a personality
Actually a pretty good football fanfic, you can actually enjoy this if you aren't knowledgeable in football as it teaches you along the way since the protagonist also doesn't know what football is at the start.
Intesrinting translation michael continue with a translation with little erros and maintain the essence Sdbdndnsnsksndndnsnsnsnsnsnheehjejsjssjsjjssjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjsjs
hello... I didn't read this book for now but can you make a story about anime like the shokugeki but with Eyeshield 21 an anime about American Football.
This is a nice novel with an interesting concept. The author has done a stellar job so far keeping the storing engaging and informative for those new to American Football
good novel keep the good work man there aren't many nfl novel hopefully you can give us good one
American Football fic about a Lance, a guy who somehow ends up playing football for the Crimson Tide except, at first, he has no idea what football is. Try it out.