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almost nothing happens in 50 chapters, then people find out about his abilities, he brings others to dungeons to level up. mainly its just a boring level up novel with almost no story or action outside of dungeons.
Man the author is basically using the r18 and harem tags to fool people into reading his fanfic... All he does is dungeons, dungeons, and even more dungeons. At this point the story is less Naruto and more 'Dungeons exploration with Tanaka' 🙄 There is not even a hint of development towards any of it. Some of the girls act like they're interested but MC simply decides to ignore it and explores dungeons. It's to the point of frustration 😑
Its good. .,.,.,.,.,.,... .,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,
It s so good ...................................................................................................................................
Caution MC committed the cardinal sin of being reincarnated by revealing his secrets to another (of course it's a girl). It happened in chapter 22. Read it on your own risk For that reason alone it must be marked as one star. But I have a feeling it is rated below 3 star review will be deleted.
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turn off your brain to read some parts of the story. it is heavily AU. overall, a nice idea but poor execution. not my cup of tea. just some warnings
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I tried not my cup of tea. I can't switch off my mind for this. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Excellent story that doesn't refrain from changing canon, using OCs or even new paths. even killing canon figures and actually not nerfing your characters and using them to the full potential is unique for webnovel. excellent work author and please don't abandon it
Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon?
It's a really good story, gives the accurate vibes that such a story needs to have, the 'game' and 'naruto world', 'jutsu' vibes are mixing in a harmonious way, it's definitely worth reading, I hope the author doesn't drop it. Precisely because it has naruto and game system ( the system is not sentient ) in it, it has limitless potential.
It was pretty mediocre at first. But it gets better and better with time. I recommend reading it.
La novela es bien interesante y entretenida, me llamo la atención porque el MC es Uzumaki que son más interesantes que los Senju y Uchiha, y hay muy pocos fanfic de calidad que tratan de ellos y por ende espero que se centren más en el Fūinjutsu
:) 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🙃🙃🙃 he loses his humanity, is a good fic, to good. And i like the system, sometimes different and exagerate. But to good.
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This is so so GOOD!!!! Thank you so much, finally I got the chance to read a naruto masterpiece after such a long time... ...............................................
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I like it so far, keep up the good work. ........................................................................................................................
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bro wanted to ask you a few more questions, do you have discord for easier communication? and have to agree with your Itachi opinion of him being a traitor to his family and a slave to the village. commited genocide and kinslaying with the order of not even the village leader but an elder. cuck man. hope mc is more loyal to his clan and family and doesn't leave uzu to it's fate and instead makes it the most powerful. also fire style majestic destroyer flame instantly ends every dungeon
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Will Kushina be in the harem? Please let her be in the harem instead of the leaf loyal minato and that shitty detail,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ll
揭示劇透
the story is good and the creativity has been really fun Congratulations! I hope for more depth in Fuuinjutsu and uzumaki kingdom building.
if you like gamer system with a dungeon creation system and the author using mp instead of chakra then saying how it's like being in constant sage mode then he gets mind powers to levitate shit and later contradicts himself by saying he's mp is chakra then again contradicts himself again by saying he doesn't have chakra but a complete different power when confronted. and explains how he he travel dimensions and the person he told says , yeah I heard of that.
almost nothing happens in 50 chapters, then people find out about his abilities, he brings others to dungeons to level up. mainly its just a boring level up novel with almost no story or action outside of dungeons.
Man the author is basically using the r18 and harem tags to fool people into reading his fanfic... All he does is dungeons, dungeons, and even more dungeons. At this point the story is less Naruto and more 'Dungeons exploration with Tanaka' 🙄 There is not even a hint of development towards any of it. Some of the girls act like they're interested but MC simply decides to ignore it and explores dungeons. It's to the point of frustration 😑
Its good. .,.,.,.,.,.,... .,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,
It s so good ...................................................................................................................................
Caution MC committed the cardinal sin of being reincarnated by revealing his secrets to another (of course it's a girl). It happened in chapter 22. Read it on your own risk For that reason alone it must be marked as one star. But I have a feeling it is rated below 3 star review will be deleted.
揭示劇透 turn off your brain to read some parts of the story. it is heavily AU. overall, a nice idea but poor execution. not my cup of tea. just some warnings
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I tried not my cup of tea. I can't switch off my mind for this. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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Excellent story that doesn't refrain from changing canon, using OCs or even new paths. even killing canon figures and actually not nerfing your characters and using them to the full potential is unique for webnovel. excellent work author and please don't abandon it
Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon? Why Marcel, why not Milan or Hamburg or Liverpool or Barcelona or Lisbon?
It's a really good story, gives the accurate vibes that such a story needs to have, the 'game' and 'naruto world', 'jutsu' vibes are mixing in a harmonious way, it's definitely worth reading, I hope the author doesn't drop it. Precisely because it has naruto and game system ( the system is not sentient ) in it, it has limitless potential.
It was pretty mediocre at first. But it gets better and better with time. I recommend reading it.
La novela es bien interesante y entretenida, me llamo la atención porque el MC es Uzumaki que son más interesantes que los Senju y Uchiha, y hay muy pocos fanfic de calidad que tratan de ellos y por ende espero que se centren más en el Fūinjutsu
:) 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🙃🙃🙃 he loses his humanity, is a good fic, to good. And i like the system, sometimes different and exagerate. But to good.
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This is so so GOOD!!!! Thank you so much, finally I got the chance to read a naruto masterpiece after such a long time... ...............................................
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I like it so far, keep up the good work. ........................................................................................................................
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bro wanted to ask you a few more questions, do you have discord for easier communication? and have to agree with your Itachi opinion of him being a traitor to his family and a slave to the village. commited genocide and kinslaying with the order of not even the village leader but an elder. cuck man. hope mc is more loyal to his clan and family and doesn't leave uzu to it's fate and instead makes it the most powerful. also fire style majestic destroyer flame instantly ends every dungeon
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Will Kushina be in the harem? Please let her be in the harem instead of the leaf loyal minato and that shitty detail,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ll
揭示劇透 the story is good and the creativity has been really fun Congratulations! I hope for more depth in Fuuinjutsu and uzumaki kingdom building.
if you like gamer system with a dungeon creation system and the author using mp instead of chakra then saying how it's like being in constant sage mode then he gets mind powers to levitate shit and later contradicts himself by saying he's mp is chakra then again contradicts himself again by saying he doesn't have chakra but a complete different power when confronted. and explains how he he travel dimensions and the person he told says , yeah I heard of that.