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HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
I had already read this, but with Spider-man, so this ff contains, r*pe, slave system, brainwashing, and that kind of stuff, so if you want you can read it.
Gona give myself a 5 star and Thank you all for all support!! If you have questions feel free to leave below and i try answer them [img=proud]
Interesting concept, the system is good, i like the timer, and the world building is far more intriguing that i thought it would be. I hope you keep it up
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didn't read the book just wanted to say that that's surely not everyone's favourite system
A very interesting fic with a system that you don't see every day. I remember there was even a Spider-Man fic with a system like that. Too bad it was deleted. I hope this one is just as better.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
I had already read this, but with Spider-man, so this ff contains, r*pe, slave system, brainwashing, and that kind of stuff, so if you want you can read it.
Gona give myself a 5 star and Thank you all for all support!! If you have questions feel free to leave below and i try answer them [img=proud]
Interesting concept, the system is good, i like the timer, and the world building is far more intriguing that i thought it would be. I hope you keep it up
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Damn i want this system[img=gift] [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
didn't read the book just wanted to say that that's surely not everyone's favourite system
A very interesting fic with a system that you don't see every day. I remember there was even a Spider-Man fic with a system like that. Too bad it was deleted. I hope this one is just as better.