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Hello! This is my newest book; I hope you will like it. To support me, please send powerstones and help spread the word about the story. What are my thoughts on the book? In my opinion did a decent job, but ultimately, the final say is up to you.
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I really like this story and especially the character of the heroine who is really funny and I can't wait to see what happens next if you like more chapters.
The protagonist has an interesting personality and I'm curious to see how things will unfold, especially seeing the "hero" get screwed and the development of her relationship with the heroine.
я желею психов таких как автора и читателей которым нрависа это,да ее же поносит эта хреновая система при каждом поевлении,ах да автор чтобы ты знал такие системы называются демоническими👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
揭示劇透 Hello! This is my newest book; I hope you will like it. To support me, please send powerstones and help spread the word about the story. What are my thoughts on the book? In my opinion did a decent job, but ultimately, the final say is up to you.
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I really like this story and especially the character of the heroine who is really funny and I can't wait to see what happens next if you like more chapters.
The protagonist has an interesting personality and I'm curious to see how things will unfold, especially seeing the "hero" get screwed and the development of her relationship with the heroine.
я желею психов таких как автора и читателей которым нрависа это,да ее же поносит эта хреновая система при каждом поевлении,ах да автор чтобы ты знал такие системы называются демоническими👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
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