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the story was very good until chapter 30, with some flaws but nothing serious, but after that it became strong with a lot of irrelevant unnecessary information such as the daimyo's part there were 4 chapters or so that have no relevance to the story and other than that there is still the unrealistic scenario of several extras hitting on Tsunade so that the main one gets a little jealous? I don't know why he doesn't give a shit about her
meh, the MC doesn't want to do anything until he's 16. But he doesn't know that he won't have any experience in combat.
Really awesome, and hey Tsunade is just my waifu so maybe I’m a bit biased. Could you post the raw link? I wanna check some future details , I can read a bit Chinease however I still hope u keep posting so I can read English version
I just don't understand why authors love to write mc so just lives to get insulted....
If you saw any Grammatical problems, do tell me I will try to fix as soon as possible..........................................................
Hi, Translator Here! Hopefully you find it interesting.I am giving this a five star as i am obligated to...................................................
Author-san please try to write the correct name for the MC because it’s pretty annoying other than that you are doing very well.
the story was very good until chapter 30, with some flaws but nothing serious, but after that it became strong with a lot of irrelevant unnecessary information such as the daimyo's part there were 4 chapters or so that have no relevance to the story and other than that there is still the unrealistic scenario of several extras hitting on Tsunade so that the main one gets a little jealous? I don't know why he doesn't give a shit about her
meh, the MC doesn't want to do anything until he's 16. But he doesn't know that he won't have any experience in combat.
Really awesome, and hey Tsunade is just my waifu so maybe I’m a bit biased. Could you post the raw link? I wanna check some future details , I can read a bit Chinease however I still hope u keep posting so I can read English version
I just don't understand why authors love to write mc so just lives to get insulted....
If you saw any Grammatical problems, do tell me I will try to fix as soon as possible..........................................................
Hi, Translator Here! Hopefully you find it interesting.I am giving this a five star as i am obligated to...................................................
Author-san please try to write the correct name for the MC because it’s pretty annoying other than that you are doing very well.