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If u wanted to write about a character that doesn’t kill people then don’t write about toji
Hasta ahora me gusta mucho espero que siga así ❤️🔥, lo único que no me gustó fue lo rápido que pareció que toji se abrió con kara en esa escena de la cabaña se sintió fuera de personaje la verdad pero es tu historia y respeto tus elecciones😉 Esperando actualización ⌚️
It has Toji, but this fic just ain't it. It's a good concept with poor execution. 3 stars for Toji.
This is NOT my toji. Toji is way to chalant. And the romance feels forced. If Toji fell in love this easily he would have been married again a long time ago. 😭‼️‼️‼️
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tbh i was excited at first about toji vs justice league stuff and toji being toji , it was all good and well until that Supergirl got involved , after that toji was not being toji anymore , and the reason i find the interaction between toji and Supergirl bad is because i thought he isekaied after fighting gojo , that means he has a son which makes the interaction with Supergirl a lot more nonsense because toji doesn't care about anything unless it's his son or late wife, it is a good story but not my cup of tea because when i heard toji i didn't even thought about any romance or relationship . And i don't like how the league binds him just like zenin clan especially when joker runs free after killing thousands but he is not allowed to roam free, the justice league itself is like a private organisation not government , and i don't like them having that much authority and toji is not even supernatural just curse tools
Hi. Author here. Just wanna pop them numbers up a bit. I give it 4 cuz my update times are horrible. Still, I believe in this. Would love to hear your thoughts though. Be as honest as you can (But pls be nice). Yours truly, the Cook
This fanfic is a blasphemy towards our Toji ××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××
If u wanted to write about a character that doesn’t kill people then don’t write about toji
Hasta ahora me gusta mucho espero que siga así ❤️🔥, lo único que no me gustó fue lo rápido que pareció que toji se abrió con kara en esa escena de la cabaña se sintió fuera de personaje la verdad pero es tu historia y respeto tus elecciones😉 Esperando actualización ⌚️
It has Toji, but this fic just ain't it. It's a good concept with poor execution. 3 stars for Toji.
This is NOT my toji. Toji is way to chalant. And the romance feels forced. If Toji fell in love this easily he would have been married again a long time ago. 😭‼️‼️‼️
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tbh i was excited at first about toji vs justice league stuff and toji being toji , it was all good and well until that Supergirl got involved , after that toji was not being toji anymore , and the reason i find the interaction between toji and Supergirl bad is because i thought he isekaied after fighting gojo , that means he has a son which makes the interaction with Supergirl a lot more nonsense because toji doesn't care about anything unless it's his son or late wife, it is a good story but not my cup of tea because when i heard toji i didn't even thought about any romance or relationship . And i don't like how the league binds him just like zenin clan especially when joker runs free after killing thousands but he is not allowed to roam free, the justice league itself is like a private organisation not government , and i don't like them having that much authority and toji is not even supernatural just curse tools
Hi. Author here. Just wanna pop them numbers up a bit. I give it 4 cuz my update times are horrible. Still, I believe in this. Would love to hear your thoughts though. Be as honest as you can (But pls be nice). Yours truly, the Cook
This fanfic is a blasphemy towards our Toji ××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××
Did not expect it to be good and it surprised me pls dont dropp.