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Good story the mc more likeable than many other fanfic out there i really enjoy it i hope author can update more frequently
Una historia increíble, lastima que todavía tiene pocos capítulos (voy por el 88 que es el último hasta ahora). Un MC completo, con un buen trasfondo y una buena personalidad, tiene mucho espacio para desarrollarse, lo cual es bueno. Su desarrollo en Danmachi también está bien hecho. Sigue así.
The author either doesn't know or ignores the power system because the MC has the power to fight a level 5 person when he is level 1 and a level 6 person when he is level 2, but this is unrealistic and spoils the pleasure of reading, and their stats are very high, each of them goes over 2000.
It's a good and underrated fic, it's entertaining and the characters have been good so far, although it lacks the spark to make it a boom, it fulfills its entertainment function very well, leaving you wanting more. I recommend it, let's hope the author doesn't drop it and there are more chapters.[img=recommend][img=update][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Feeling it]
It's a good read, not many grammatical issues. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ну это хорошо. Это будет история с мульти вселенной? Желаю автору хорошего здоровья, и обновлений почаще. [img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy]
This is a really well written novel, i too also want to know if its translaed or original :)
Story is good. I hope you can continue. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a pleasure to read. I hope the story doesn't turn into a collection of Pokemon in the person of girls.
I like the story. I was just wonder in this is a translation or a original?
es una gran historia es bastante entretenida me gusto bastante la trama de la historia
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Good story the mc more likeable than many other fanfic out there i really enjoy it i hope author can update more frequently
Una historia increíble, lastima que todavía tiene pocos capítulos (voy por el 88 que es el último hasta ahora). Un MC completo, con un buen trasfondo y una buena personalidad, tiene mucho espacio para desarrollarse, lo cual es bueno. Su desarrollo en Danmachi también está bien hecho. Sigue así.
The author either doesn't know or ignores the power system because the MC has the power to fight a level 5 person when he is level 1 and a level 6 person when he is level 2, but this is unrealistic and spoils the pleasure of reading, and their stats are very high, each of them goes over 2000.
It's a good and underrated fic, it's entertaining and the characters have been good so far, although it lacks the spark to make it a boom, it fulfills its entertainment function very well, leaving you wanting more. I recommend it, let's hope the author doesn't drop it and there are more chapters.[img=recommend][img=update][img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Feeling it]
It's a good read, not many grammatical issues. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ну это хорошо. Это будет история с мульти вселенной? Желаю автору хорошего здоровья, и обновлений почаще. [img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy]
This is a really well written novel, i too also want to know if its translaed or original :)
Story is good. I hope you can continue. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's a pleasure to read. I hope the story doesn't turn into a collection of Pokemon in the person of girls.
I like the story. I was just wonder in this is a translation or a original?
es una gran historia es bastante entretenida me gusto bastante la trama de la historia
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