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I don't play azur lane and don't know its story so all i read will be canon in my head [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Simply SUPERB~~ Try it Worth it~ smooth reading experience also, better if the Translator/Author can slip in the image of the shipgirl.
Clean translation and great story. The mtl versions is called Azur Lane: I took the graduation post through time and can be found on fanmtl.
Finally i meet FF Azur Lane with Continue, not to be continued (hiatus/drop).😅 but im little similar with your story and AL FF i know (MTL), btw this your original bruh ? . Nice story, romance, and background all secretary ship mc has 😘♥♥♥♥♥
I'm not very good with words so the only thing I'll say is that it's a great story
i love this story author keep up the good work.[img=coins] Fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
There are a few grammar errors here and there, but the general flow and pacing is well done. Updates are frequent and seem to generally benefit the story. The world building is a fanfic, but all of the items/elects taken from azure lane seem accurate to the game.
la historia está genial y la traduccion también. espero que se siga traduciendo por que no se encuentra prácticamente ninguna historia buena y traducida de azur lane
Great Translation! Excellent for the Azur Lane community interested in a good read. Recommended for those that like Azur Lane and want something a bit different from other fics of this series.
Really good translation, one of the best I’ve read so far, and so far it’s been updating really well so no worries so far about the Auther dropping. Love the story Author I hope you keep translating.
Dunno, read up to 18 chp(all at the moment of this review). Translation is good, if there were any grammar mistakes than i didn't noticed. Give this work a read. I don't know what else to say... bruh...
hope i can find more AL fics tnx for translating all ship girls needs lots of love
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Note: this is a translation! I quite enjoyed reading this fic (maybe because i'm a player of this game) and wanted to share it with people. I hope you guys enjoy it too! I am merely a translator translating this fic with a few edits to avoid poison and to make it easy to read. Thank you and enjoy~
I don't play azur lane and don't know its story so all i read will be canon in my head [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Simply SUPERB~~ Try it Worth it~ smooth reading experience also, better if the Translator/Author can slip in the image of the shipgirl.
Clean translation and great story. The mtl versions is called Azur Lane: I took the graduation post through time and can be found on fanmtl.
Finally i meet FF Azur Lane with Continue, not to be continued (hiatus/drop).😅 but im little similar with your story and AL FF i know (MTL), btw this your original bruh ? . Nice story, romance, and background all secretary ship mc has 😘♥♥♥♥♥
I'm not very good with words so the only thing I'll say is that it's a great story
i love this story author keep up the good work.[img=coins] Fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
There are a few grammar errors here and there, but the general flow and pacing is well done. Updates are frequent and seem to generally benefit the story. The world building is a fanfic, but all of the items/elects taken from azure lane seem accurate to the game.
la historia está genial y la traduccion también. espero que se siga traduciendo por que no se encuentra prácticamente ninguna historia buena y traducida de azur lane
Great Translation! Excellent for the Azur Lane community interested in a good read. Recommended for those that like Azur Lane and want something a bit different from other fics of this series.
Really good translation, one of the best I’ve read so far, and so far it’s been updating really well so no worries so far about the Auther dropping. Love the story Author I hope you keep translating.
Dunno, read up to 18 chp(all at the moment of this review). Translation is good, if there were any grammar mistakes than i didn't noticed. Give this work a read. I don't know what else to say... bruh...
hope i can find more AL fics tnx for translating all ship girls needs lots of love
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Note: this is a translation! I quite enjoyed reading this fic (maybe because i'm a player of this game) and wanted to share it with people. I hope you guys enjoy it too! I am merely a translator translating this fic with a few edits to avoid poison and to make it easy to read. Thank you and enjoy~