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not a fan of it's writing style and so much inner monologue plus some unnecessary thoughts that can cause me irritated in every chapter, Yuri included.
Sigo con mi idea de por lo menos no haya muchas escenas escritas tuyas de duendes follandose chicas antes que el MC no se solo digo , O y una duda abra viajes mundiales?¿ en esta historia? Por cierto me encanta tu obra de reencarnado en akame ga kill
Jdr entoces todo era una prólogo Speenrun para empezar desde 0 buscando a sus chicas con un nuevo cuerpo jdr que epico [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
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This story caught me, it can improve, but in general it has a lot of potential, suspense, intrigue and the protagonist is easy to empathize with, he has well thought out waifu and he is not a silly villain, just an anti-hero with clear ideas and he is not afraid of success, when it has to do with girls, it has a lot of story, it has the essence of re mouster, with a gem of goblin slayer.
Its very hard to read and follow,the grammar needs to be fixes,and the story itself is good[img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
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I don't care about the plot or the grammar, it's a Goblin Slayer fanfic so get 5 stars .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Muerte a los PuT0s duendes. ..............................................................................................................................................................................
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Its very hard to read and follow and the grammar needs to be fixes half he time idk whats going on
200 gems = bonus chapter 20 comments per chapter = bonus chapter 10 reviews = bonus chapter 3 patreon subscriptions = 10 bonus chapters
not a fan of it's writing style and so much inner monologue plus some unnecessary thoughts that can cause me irritated in every chapter, Yuri included.
Sigo con mi idea de por lo menos no haya muchas escenas escritas tuyas de duendes follandose chicas antes que el MC no se solo digo , O y una duda abra viajes mundiales?¿ en esta historia? Por cierto me encanta tu obra de reencarnado en akame ga kill
Jdr entoces todo era una prólogo Speenrun para empezar desde 0 buscando a sus chicas con un nuevo cuerpo jdr que epico [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
揭示劇透 This story caught me, it can improve, but in general it has a lot of potential, suspense, intrigue and the protagonist is easy to empathize with, he has well thought out waifu and he is not a silly villain, just an anti-hero with clear ideas and he is not afraid of success, when it has to do with girls, it has a lot of story, it has the essence of re mouster, with a gem of goblin slayer.
Its very hard to read and follow,the grammar needs to be fixes,and the story itself is good[img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
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I don't care about the plot or the grammar, it's a Goblin Slayer fanfic so get 5 stars .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Muerte a los PuT0s duendes. ..............................................................................................................................................................................
揭示劇透 Its very hard to read and follow and the grammar needs to be fixes half he time idk whats going on
200 gems = bonus chapter 20 comments per chapter = bonus chapter 10 reviews = bonus chapter 3 patreon subscriptions = 10 bonus chapters