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Honestly the Writing is terrible with some basic stuff that is extremely annoying. And same for the boring Mc and even more so story Development. I expect much more from this author but honestly even some random novels from some amateur Writers/Authors have much better content then this. It feels like one of those Chinese novels where they take the Younger Generation to train but here the Mc is the side character that everyone forgets about if not for his father’s position. And the wjole Uounger generation and even the older generation fear the same tier/rank 1 Beast. In this case even those low quality Chinese Novel do a better job it especially considering the are born in that world and their mentality would not be that weak.
CAN YOU PLEASE UPADATE 14/WEEK .It's painful to wait whole 24hrs for only one chapter
Perfect OP protagonist in my opinion, desperately asking author for more/faster chapters.
I really like this book hope it doesn't go on hiatus like his other novel to work on inf mana
Romance? Harem? - Hope not, cause I ain't gonna read such. This is just a plain review without no credible score so don't take it as my judge on the book.
hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
While giving a clear picture of the key characters. I feel that the secondary characters need to be more in-depth.
I like just when I was looking for a new book to read. Looking forward to the story
As an Author and also a Reader of Adui's works, I'll leave my honest review here about what I think of the story so far. To be honest, it feels kind of dull and soulless, like the characters are puppets in a puppet show, the setting also feels kind of dry, and you've failed at making an atmosphere that is believable. Adui I think you should stop thinking about your infinite mana story while writing new stories, you have to start from zero and build something from zero, this clearly feels like it's very inspired by that world, or perhaps it even takes place in it. Even the dialogue of the main character is strange, why does he talks like that? Its as if he knows he's the main character of a novel, which only makes the entire setting more ironic and strange. The ideas are good I think, but the execution is rather poor for the first chapter. Like this you won't be able to attract that many new readers, and only those from Infinite Mana will show up. I think this story has some potential but it needs more "life" and "soul" to it, do you get it? The beginning of Infinite Mana had all of that, the main character was grounded, an underdog, and it felt like that because his thoughts were relatable and those of a normal person until he started getting more powerful. I think you need to start from there and then go up, develop the characters personalities, emotions, dreams, hopes, and what they want to achieve. This story, quite honestly, feels more like a concept where a story was written around it, rather than a proper story that showcases a concept.
What truly intrigued me about this novel is the unique concept and idea. I have a feeling that the likely constellation based life gem will prove to be more mysterious and more powerful than it seems. The world background is also quite good and becoming broader and more detailed. Overall this is a very good novel that's worth checking out. Seeing this review, bother no more and dive head-fest into this masterpiece. I for one hate clichè based novels but this author with only his original concept, ideas and the world building has got his hands on me. Hands down...I can say with absolute certainty. This novel has a lot of mind blowing possibilities!!
Damn, to think he started a new book. And the start is so good... damn. Check out the book guys, I'll leave another review after the end of the first volume
Let OPness shower this book in its glorious splendour and majesty. May we witness another rising of an Emperor. Let us go through this journey to the Omniverse and beyond. Let's goooooooo!!!!!
I have read more than 2000 chapters of Infinite Mana, and if this book is even half as good as that masterpiece, I will be here every step of the way! I will start reading right away and find inspiration for my own books from this book, because what better muse than the absolute Pinnacle of OP for one's own OP books? Adui is the reason I started writing OP, and I will never veer from the path that he paved before me! Praise be Adui!!
How long have we waited for another novel from Adui? the time has come dear brothers and sisters!
another op verse in webnovel starting. Nice hopefully it be more cool then infinite mana.
Too early to say, but its bound to be great if it's anything like Infinite Mana
Author Review and Inside Look! Hi everyone! The Empyreal Gem Master is a grand tale revolving around Alexander Asmodeus. His personality and the personalities of those around him evolve as events continue to unfold around them, and they truly begin stepping into who they are around chapter 70+! In terms of Overpowered mayhem, Alexander's close match can only be the lead of Infinite Mana- Noah Osmont. So far, it has been 1 chapter a day- which I know is excruciating for a lot of us, so we are looking to increase the release rate in the future! The World of Ephesus and the overall landscape of the Empyreal Gem Master will continue to evolve and include many races and creeds with their own cultures. Similar to Infinite Mana, this rich story will be extending past 1,000+ Chapters. Enjoy the read!
Honestly the Writing is terrible with some basic stuff that is extremely annoying. And same for the boring Mc and even more so story Development. I expect much more from this author but honestly even some random novels from some amateur Writers/Authors have much better content then this. It feels like one of those Chinese novels where they take the Younger Generation to train but here the Mc is the side character that everyone forgets about if not for his father’s position. And the wjole Uounger generation and even the older generation fear the same tier/rank 1 Beast. In this case even those low quality Chinese Novel do a better job it especially considering the are born in that world and their mentality would not be that weak.
CAN YOU PLEASE UPADATE 14/WEEK .It's painful to wait whole 24hrs for only one chapter
Perfect OP protagonist in my opinion, desperately asking author for more/faster chapters.
I really like this book hope it doesn't go on hiatus like his other novel to work on inf mana
Romance? Harem? - Hope not, cause I ain't gonna read such. This is just a plain review without no credible score so don't take it as my judge on the book.
hello, Can you review my book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
While giving a clear picture of the key characters. I feel that the secondary characters need to be more in-depth.
I like just when I was looking for a new book to read. Looking forward to the story
As an Author and also a Reader of Adui's works, I'll leave my honest review here about what I think of the story so far. To be honest, it feels kind of dull and soulless, like the characters are puppets in a puppet show, the setting also feels kind of dry, and you've failed at making an atmosphere that is believable. Adui I think you should stop thinking about your infinite mana story while writing new stories, you have to start from zero and build something from zero, this clearly feels like it's very inspired by that world, or perhaps it even takes place in it. Even the dialogue of the main character is strange, why does he talks like that? Its as if he knows he's the main character of a novel, which only makes the entire setting more ironic and strange. The ideas are good I think, but the execution is rather poor for the first chapter. Like this you won't be able to attract that many new readers, and only those from Infinite Mana will show up. I think this story has some potential but it needs more "life" and "soul" to it, do you get it? The beginning of Infinite Mana had all of that, the main character was grounded, an underdog, and it felt like that because his thoughts were relatable and those of a normal person until he started getting more powerful. I think you need to start from there and then go up, develop the characters personalities, emotions, dreams, hopes, and what they want to achieve. This story, quite honestly, feels more like a concept where a story was written around it, rather than a proper story that showcases a concept.
What truly intrigued me about this novel is the unique concept and idea. I have a feeling that the likely constellation based life gem will prove to be more mysterious and more powerful than it seems. The world background is also quite good and becoming broader and more detailed. Overall this is a very good novel that's worth checking out. Seeing this review, bother no more and dive head-fest into this masterpiece. I for one hate clichè based novels but this author with only his original concept, ideas and the world building has got his hands on me. Hands down...I can say with absolute certainty. This novel has a lot of mind blowing possibilities!!
Damn, to think he started a new book. And the start is so good... damn. Check out the book guys, I'll leave another review after the end of the first volume
Let OPness shower this book in its glorious splendour and majesty. May we witness another rising of an Emperor. Let us go through this journey to the Omniverse and beyond. Let's goooooooo!!!!!
I have read more than 2000 chapters of Infinite Mana, and if this book is even half as good as that masterpiece, I will be here every step of the way! I will start reading right away and find inspiration for my own books from this book, because what better muse than the absolute Pinnacle of OP for one's own OP books? Adui is the reason I started writing OP, and I will never veer from the path that he paved before me! Praise be Adui!!
How long have we waited for another novel from Adui? the time has come dear brothers and sisters!
another op verse in webnovel starting. Nice hopefully it be more cool then infinite mana.
Too early to say, but its bound to be great if it's anything like Infinite Mana
Author Review and Inside Look! Hi everyone! The Empyreal Gem Master is a grand tale revolving around Alexander Asmodeus. His personality and the personalities of those around him evolve as events continue to unfold around them, and they truly begin stepping into who they are around chapter 70+! In terms of Overpowered mayhem, Alexander's close match can only be the lead of Infinite Mana- Noah Osmont. So far, it has been 1 chapter a day- which I know is excruciating for a lot of us, so we are looking to increase the release rate in the future! The World of Ephesus and the overall landscape of the Empyreal Gem Master will continue to evolve and include many races and creeds with their own cultures. Similar to Infinite Mana, this rich story will be extending past 1,000+ Chapters. Enjoy the read!