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The story is genuinely engaging, and I really enjoyed it! But I feel like the characters’ interactions and speech are a bit too formal, which takes away some of the romance and chemistry. If their conversations felt more natural and emotionally charged, the love story would shine even brighter. A little tweak here and there, and this could be a truly unforgettable romance!
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I’m into strong fl and I don’t think this MC is one. I couldn’t stand how she has no backbone and this is not it for me so chao✌️
Whoa! The first few chapters got hitched already. Kudos to you, author. This is definitely going to my library!
proof reading should be more strict. there are misspelled words, some grammars are not good.
This one is great story, but thinking about her mother she is just unbelievable. She doesn't trust her own daughter, hilarious😤.
it's actually a really good read. not particularly like the other novels. it's fascinating
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I love this story. It's so easy to get carried away reading considering I am at chapter 135 after I told myself just a few chapters to see what the story is all about. Dear author thanks for an interesting read. 🤗🤗😍😍 I do hope that the story doesn't drag on though.
Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling 🫶🏻 I enjoyed curling up with a coffee ☕️ and enjoying your novel as the characters developed and the plot thickened. I look forward to the opportunity to read the rest of your novel and to seeing how the characters develop and the back story being unveiled ( what is it that the FL has forgotten and why) 🫶🏻⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🫶🏻
Great book in which the author has invested time to. Writing quality is good.
the way I'm squealing, screaming, exasperating over the chapters so far 🤧🤧🤧
Started reading as a 24H free reading then decided to give a couple more chapters a chance. The beginning is pretty good - I thought it would go the usual route of rebirth but it didn't. FL actually broke free from the forced relationship early on. ML is decent as well. There's enough mysteries to make you want to read more. However, I'm not sure if it's about the pacing or the redundancy of having Ryan and Delyth chapters of "regretting", "brain washing", then "being more annoying", or a combination of both that it's making me feel the story is dragging. I personally would prefer for some mysteries to be solved or partially solved soon.
Impeccable writing style + fast paced story = a must read! Can’t wait to read more chapters!
This story is actually very interesting, can't wait for the development of the MCs. Very well written.
Dear readers, This Author has come first to review the book. Hope you all won't mind. After all someone has to be first. You all didn't choose it, so I had to. Let me tell you a little secret🤫—this book will become like your favorite snack. You will start with just one bite, and will slowly crave more, without realizing what fascinated you so much. Sorry in advance for being repetitive but allow me -this is the story of Arwen Quinn, a woman who’s had enough of waiting for her prince to stop being a frog 🐸 Spoiler alert: she doesn’t wait around for him to change. (Cue the standing ovation👏.) Instead, she puts on her heels—well, maybe a sensible pair of flats, considering her situation—and struts out of the toxic mess we call a relationship. But don’t worry, folks, she wouldn't be wandering into a lonely sunset. Before the jerk exits, Aiden Wislow, the enigmatic CEO will make an entry in her life. He wouldn't just want her heart—he would want the whole package, including the marriage certificate... like, yesterday. And believe me, this isn’t your typical second-chance romance where the female lead wavers between her past and future. Arwen is decisive—she knows what she wants, and she wouldn't be afraid to make it happen, even if it means signing a marriage contract with a man who has the audacity to tell her, “No contract marriages here. If we marry, you’re sharing my bed.” I know, swoon-worthy, right🙈? So, what are you all still waiting for? This novel is filled with heart-pounding moments, a touch of humor (because what’s life without a little snark?), and the kind of romance that makes you believe in second chances, not just in love, but in life. If you’re looking for a story where the female lead doesn’t just get her happy ending but practically demands it with a side of sass, then grab a cup of tea (or something stronger), find a cozy spot, and dive in. Happy reading, and remember—sometimes walking away is the best way to find out where you truly belong. Your dearest Author
The story is genuinely engaging, and I really enjoyed it! But I feel like the characters’ interactions and speech are a bit too formal, which takes away some of the romance and chemistry. If their conversations felt more natural and emotionally charged, the love story would shine even brighter. A little tweak here and there, and this could be a truly unforgettable romance!
It's very good to reach my goal is to reach out to you my friend I hope you have a great day with your family are doing well and Medea qualité de la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 eyyy la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la t9l9 la
I’m into strong fl and I don’t think this MC is one. I couldn’t stand how she has no backbone and this is not it for me so chao✌️
Whoa! The first few chapters got hitched already. Kudos to you, author. This is definitely going to my library!
proof reading should be more strict. there are misspelled words, some grammars are not good.
This one is great story, but thinking about her mother she is just unbelievable. She doesn't trust her own daughter, hilarious😤.
it's actually a really good read. not particularly like the other novels. it's fascinating
nice book ,,,[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love this story. It's so easy to get carried away reading considering I am at chapter 135 after I told myself just a few chapters to see what the story is all about. Dear author thanks for an interesting read. 🤗🤗😍😍 I do hope that the story doesn't drag on though.
Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling 🫶🏻 I enjoyed curling up with a coffee ☕️ and enjoying your novel as the characters developed and the plot thickened. I look forward to the opportunity to read the rest of your novel and to seeing how the characters develop and the back story being unveiled ( what is it that the FL has forgotten and why) 🫶🏻⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️🫶🏻
Great book in which the author has invested time to. Writing quality is good.
the way I'm squealing, screaming, exasperating over the chapters so far 🤧🤧🤧
Started reading as a 24H free reading then decided to give a couple more chapters a chance. The beginning is pretty good - I thought it would go the usual route of rebirth but it didn't. FL actually broke free from the forced relationship early on. ML is decent as well. There's enough mysteries to make you want to read more. However, I'm not sure if it's about the pacing or the redundancy of having Ryan and Delyth chapters of "regretting", "brain washing", then "being more annoying", or a combination of both that it's making me feel the story is dragging. I personally would prefer for some mysteries to be solved or partially solved soon.
Impeccable writing style + fast paced story = a must read! Can’t wait to read more chapters!
This story is actually very interesting, can't wait for the development of the MCs. Very well written.
Dear readers, This Author has come first to review the book. Hope you all won't mind. After all someone has to be first. You all didn't choose it, so I had to. Let me tell you a little secret🤫—this book will become like your favorite snack. You will start with just one bite, and will slowly crave more, without realizing what fascinated you so much. Sorry in advance for being repetitive but allow me -this is the story of Arwen Quinn, a woman who’s had enough of waiting for her prince to stop being a frog 🐸 Spoiler alert: she doesn’t wait around for him to change. (Cue the standing ovation👏.) Instead, she puts on her heels—well, maybe a sensible pair of flats, considering her situation—and struts out of the toxic mess we call a relationship. But don’t worry, folks, she wouldn't be wandering into a lonely sunset. Before the jerk exits, Aiden Wislow, the enigmatic CEO will make an entry in her life. He wouldn't just want her heart—he would want the whole package, including the marriage certificate... like, yesterday. And believe me, this isn’t your typical second-chance romance where the female lead wavers between her past and future. Arwen is decisive—she knows what she wants, and she wouldn't be afraid to make it happen, even if it means signing a marriage contract with a man who has the audacity to tell her, “No contract marriages here. If we marry, you’re sharing my bed.” I know, swoon-worthy, right🙈? So, what are you all still waiting for? This novel is filled with heart-pounding moments, a touch of humor (because what’s life without a little snark?), and the kind of romance that makes you believe in second chances, not just in love, but in life. If you’re looking for a story where the female lead doesn’t just get her happy ending but practically demands it with a side of sass, then grab a cup of tea (or something stronger), find a cozy spot, and dive in. Happy reading, and remember—sometimes walking away is the best way to find out where you truly belong. Your dearest Author