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寫檢討
(Switching genders in 2024 is crazy!) Tch(it’s a joke) Anyway just in case my brother this novel has crazy potential hope for more chapters , keep cooking, amazing novel like the other one
Some crazy potential. Very enjoyable to read. The only complaint is sometimes it's unclear who is talking, however it only happened a few times. The interaction between both characters feels really balanced. They both compliment each other with their humor. Hopefully kakashi makes fun of them more for being so close.
This is an early review on the potential of the novel from a perspective of a fan of one of the author’s other Naruto works (with the MC- Sora). The premise of this novel is not only promising, but unique. It takes the somewhat conventional trope that most Naruto ffs take and expands it. The addition of another reincarnator adds layers to the potential backstory, lore, canon-altering and most importantly inter-personal relationships between the MCs and the side-characters. Personally, I found it difficult to find stories that can show the balance between keeping a story like Naruto shonen while maintaining a steady and captivating romantic side. I’m confident, however, that the author has everything to achieve it just purely based on his other works. The quality of writing, the pacing, the comedy and action are all done smoothly and seamlessly. I’m looking forward to another masterpiece!!
This fic is really interesting and entertaining as the characters have an original and really intriguing personality and story and the interactions between the MC and the and the FMC is really good and original unlike other fics in this one one can see the how well complimented the two MC are for each other trough the story and their interactions were there is quite a lot of shenanigans and comedy. So to finish this Fanfic is really good and I expect great things from it.
(Switching genders in 2024 is crazy!) Tch(it’s a joke) Anyway just in case my brother this novel has crazy potential hope for more chapters , keep cooking, amazing novel like the other one
Some crazy potential. Very enjoyable to read. The only complaint is sometimes it's unclear who is talking, however it only happened a few times. The interaction between both characters feels really balanced. They both compliment each other with their humor. Hopefully kakashi makes fun of them more for being so close.
This is an early review on the potential of the novel from a perspective of a fan of one of the author’s other Naruto works (with the MC- Sora). The premise of this novel is not only promising, but unique. It takes the somewhat conventional trope that most Naruto ffs take and expands it. The addition of another reincarnator adds layers to the potential backstory, lore, canon-altering and most importantly inter-personal relationships between the MCs and the side-characters. Personally, I found it difficult to find stories that can show the balance between keeping a story like Naruto shonen while maintaining a steady and captivating romantic side. I’m confident, however, that the author has everything to achieve it just purely based on his other works. The quality of writing, the pacing, the comedy and action are all done smoothly and seamlessly. I’m looking forward to another masterpiece!!
This fic is really interesting and entertaining as the characters have an original and really intriguing personality and story and the interactions between the MC and the and the FMC is really good and original unlike other fics in this one one can see the how well complimented the two MC are for each other trough the story and their interactions were there is quite a lot of shenanigans and comedy. So to finish this Fanfic is really good and I expect great things from it.