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the translation is good and readable. but in my opinion you should change the MC's name to japanese or english name to make it comfortable [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Brooo this shit got the potential! Where's the rest of the story?! ..................................................... .....................................................
For the translator and readers of this fic. I warn you that its ending is disappointing, abrupt and accelerated. The original creator gave up.
the translation is good and readable. but in my opinion you should change the MC's name to japanese or english name to make it comfortable [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Brooo this shit got the potential! Where's the rest of the story?! ..................................................... .....................................................
For the translator and readers of this fic. I warn you that its ending is disappointing, abrupt and accelerated. The original creator gave up.