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not normally one to post a review but the lack of reviews in this forced me to. all in all not a bad story
Praise The Fool (i havent read it but seeing novel has blessing of The Fool it deserves 4 star)
slapstick comedy, MC: no get away you evil porcupine! rips his pants off and goes after his behind, stab ahh, why again! stranger passing by, it's a pervert run! I'm no pervert dam my pants and underwear were ripped off again, women shrieks yelling pervert and throws her Starbucks coffee at the mc. I need clothes oh a beach store better then nothing, mc leaves the store wearing a tank top, beach shirts flip flops and beach hat, child sees mc, oh is that uncle going to the beach at night?
not normally one to post a review but the lack of reviews in this forced me to. all in all not a bad story
Praise The Fool (i havent read it but seeing novel has blessing of The Fool it deserves 4 star)
slapstick comedy, MC: no get away you evil porcupine! rips his pants off and goes after his behind, stab ahh, why again! stranger passing by, it's a pervert run! I'm no pervert dam my pants and underwear were ripped off again, women shrieks yelling pervert and throws her Starbucks coffee at the mc. I need clothes oh a beach store better then nothing, mc leaves the store wearing a tank top, beach shirts flip flops and beach hat, child sees mc, oh is that uncle going to the beach at night?