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Story alone has potential but I really cant understand ppl who like it. Mc is a one big failure. Dude is the definition of sumbissive beta simp loser. Serving a daughter of a duke while she assaults and makes fun of u is one thing but the same thing happens with simple maids. Sick
liked the start but as it went around ch 15+, the story is going nowhere. like i am at chapter 35( while writing this review) but there is no major change in the story or developement. What does the system do, what he practices, or what is his thinking not much is mentioned. and its more like he is a side mob who we see in when only other characters are around.
nothing plot worthy happens on 31 chapters “warrior training system” for one is a throw off he trains like twice in those 31 chapters his a submissive servant boy (if you like that good for you) and he’s just be toying with
read omnistore system, great book but to much lemons overshadows the mc..Hope this will have allot less lemons than omnistore and alott more character growth.
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I like the authors other works. this novel starting is better then his other. the main character doesnt seem like a psychopath for now and I hope he stays that way.
fan of this author since SONG pls continue it. as for this new work it seems good. it's starting but more story oriented then other. haven't seen any snu snum but knowing the author there will be lot in future. looking forward to future updates.
I like this one then the other till now. Still 12 ch so can't say more. Give it a try. And autjor add more lemons.[img=More pls][img=update]
Okay, listen up—this novel is basically a masterpiece because, well, I wrote it. I mean, it's almost unfair to other writers how good this is. You’re about to dive into the most gripping, hilarious, and downright genius story ever created by yours truly. Don’t worry, you’ll be fine—just keep a glass of water nearby because you might choke on how amazing it is. Seriously though, read it. You’ll thank me later.
Story alone has potential but I really cant understand ppl who like it. Mc is a one big failure. Dude is the definition of sumbissive beta simp loser. Serving a daughter of a duke while she assaults and makes fun of u is one thing but the same thing happens with simple maids. Sick
liked the start but as it went around ch 15+, the story is going nowhere. like i am at chapter 35( while writing this review) but there is no major change in the story or developement. What does the system do, what he practices, or what is his thinking not much is mentioned. and its more like he is a side mob who we see in when only other characters are around.
nothing plot worthy happens on 31 chapters “warrior training system” for one is a throw off he trains like twice in those 31 chapters his a submissive servant boy (if you like that good for you) and he’s just be toying with
read omnistore system, great book but to much lemons overshadows the mc..Hope this will have allot less lemons than omnistore and alott more character growth.
揭示劇透 I like the authors other works. this novel starting is better then his other. the main character doesnt seem like a psychopath for now and I hope he stays that way.
fan of this author since SONG pls continue it. as for this new work it seems good. it's starting but more story oriented then other. haven't seen any snu snum but knowing the author there will be lot in future. looking forward to future updates.
I like this one then the other till now. Still 12 ch so can't say more. Give it a try. And autjor add more lemons.[img=More pls][img=update]
Okay, listen up—this novel is basically a masterpiece because, well, I wrote it. I mean, it's almost unfair to other writers how good this is. You’re about to dive into the most gripping, hilarious, and downright genius story ever created by yours truly. Don’t worry, you’ll be fine—just keep a glass of water nearby because you might choke on how amazing it is. Seriously though, read it. You’ll thank me later.