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As An Pseudo-Spirit In A Supernatural World (DxD,To Love Ru)(Dropping)
4.46 (17 評分)
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My native language is not English, I translate this story as best I can, so be patient, or else blame Google Translate, not me, I don't even know the language.
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Shiki. was an orphan boy in his past life, after working until he was tired, life dealt him a bad trick and his body was affected with a terminal illness. After dying at the age of 19,
Shiki was reincarnated in another world full of supernatural beings (DxD and also aliens (To Love Ru). But he was not so helpless since when he reincarnated, he obtained 10 angels from the series 'Date a Live' [Sandalphon] [Zadkiel] [Camael] [Zafkiel] [Raphael] [Haniel] [Michael] [Metraton] [Gabriel] [Rasiel]
So Shiki wasn't very defenseless, in fact he was quite dominated.
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This is my first FanFic, I write it as a hobby so don't be too harsh. I will upload chapters, when I have them, but I will try not to spend more than 4 days without uploading a chapter This fanfic will have some anime characters; but it will mainly focus on the plot of DxD and To Love Ru.
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The translator did a good job, unfortunately the story has a lot to be desired, the first chapters can easily be skipped, the mc is like any Chinese fanfic mc and I had to leave it because of the Lala chapter, their relationship was too rushed.
the story is very nice, tho maybe the romance is abit too fast but dat can be ignore for now. But i have a question he have the 10 angels can he access the demon kings form
I'm going to be very honest here, the beginning was boring, the fic only started to get good when Lala appeared, but this part was really wonderful so I really recommend putting up with it or just skipping the tediousness of the first chapters 1-6 which can be summed up with almost no loss in: "The MC published a novel and started middle school, Nisekoi's Riku was introduced as a classmate." From chapter 7 onwards things change and the fic gets really interesting! The romance, despite being quick, is also very good. However, apart from the romance moments with Lala, the fic is more or less boring, so as much as I loved the romance, 4 stars is the maximum I can give, even taking into account that it's a Tu Love Ru fic and I love Tu Love Ru . The MC's powers are pretty OP, the fights are meh, but the moments with Lala are top notch.
It s nice.I like thissssssssssssssss I hope it continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnjjwoosndirndidnekodmepwoeomeifbdjienwosnfjejndkdkdkdkkdkdkekekdkkdld
why is it being dropped? i cant find the reason with just a little browse but anyway if you answered then thank you
It’s a good story a few dings here and their but I think it’s more so due to google translating being not very good at times. So I didn’t give review perfect five. Also I feel it completely knowing how stressful a story is to write especially when you have lots of ideas you want but don’t know what to do first. I think this story has a lot of potential truly I’m not sure late game dxd how strong he will be compared to the things like the Exe gods or trihexa but at the same time I want to see reactions from the angels when he uses his weapons that will be fun Overall, Good story, Good concept not many mix the two worlds and if they do they go overboard and put in 4+ other worlds, I’m not even mad about updates because truly it’s stressful to update constantly. So continue to do your best.
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Bro, I liked the story, but I'd like to know if the harem is small? Like 3 to 5 heroines? Don't make it big because it will be boring, I've never liked big harem stories.
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i like the concept ngl. but the plot itself is just like another tier 3 harem fic. it's a boring gray stu type with an op mc who won't have a problem with whatever he's going to do. guess author just roasting his own fics without knowing he roasting his own self
KEEP UPDATING................................... 1 CHAPTER/DAY IS GOOD :V.........................................................................................................................................................
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 [1] What kind of world is this? 4 months ago
- 2 [2] If the original bearer of this power saw me using it for this, she would slap me for sure. 4 months ago
- 3 [3] Contract achived 4 months ago
- 4 [4] Infinite ingredients 4 months ago
- 5 [5] Presentations. 4 months ago
- 6 [6] Nino's clone. 4 months ago
- 7 [7] Now there are also aliens. 4 months ago
- 8 [8] Would you marry me? 4 months ago
- 9 [9] I love you too. 4 months ago
- 10 [10] The guy with the rare armor 4 months ago
- 11 [11] Clash of swords. 4 months ago
- 12 [12] The surprise was you! 4 months ago
- 13 [13] The Kuudere girl 4 months ago
- 14 [14] Diabolical territory. 4 months ago
- 15 [15] The arrow that crosses the sky 'El Kanaph'. 4 months ago
- 16 [No CAP] Author's message 4 months ago
- 17 [16] The young demons 4 months ago
- 18 [17] Lala's sisters 4 months ago
This is translated right? Can i know the name of the original?