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It’s good easy to follow and understand and compelling all and all a decent read .
What happened there no new chapter for 6 days is there something wrong is the author all right it's the first time something like this has happened
Honestly this Fan-fiction is a hidden gem. I can see that the Author/Translator has put in more efforts into Translation. This deservers 5* and here is why... Story : Decent, It is good enough compared to other Naruto Fanfics Mc : Even though he is Chinese supporter, it is not bad as other Fanfics Translation : Very good... its so good that it doesnt feel like an translation So if you are into naruto fanfics, i highly recommend atleast give it a 50+ chapters..
It was much better than most of the naruto fanfic's you should reduce the time-skips and focus more on interactions between Mc and his people . I suggest him trying use the system as way too survive more than protect as most of it is just a stimulation this will allow him to get stronger. The thing i find wierd is most of the times Mc behaves like a hero in the 4th great ninja war i suggest him in the stimulation to try to hide with hinata as long as possible in some remote area . Since he has the ability stealing shit i guess he can hide from infinte tsuknimoi ,even if he fails naruto &sasuke will free everyone which this author doesn't even mention and ends the stimulation like he's telling everyone the Mc died because of it which i found hilarous it's like he's trying his best not make the mc reach old age or controlling him through some nonsenscial factors other than that everything else was really good and i personally loved it.
the translation is very good. Well, the story itself is after that. As the main character became a dragon, the story began to lose its quality very rapidly, and after 10 chapters. the hero became a dragon, I decided to abandon this story and just read the title of the chapters to understand the further plot, (what I wrote is my subjective opinion, I do not urge new readers not to read this story, and I do not urge those who are already reading to abandon this story)
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the MC has no original thought of his own. He is literally just using cheats to get though the story. At least do something less predictable. Basically after the first couple of chapter you can already guess what the rest of the book is going to be like.
Unfortunately 😮💨 MC want to be in relationships with Hinata 😑, which is ruined for me.
I managed to survive to ch20. I really tried reading it. But the MC is beyond stupid. And its Chinese infested (written by one). MC is beyond help. He is so aaaaah im so mad just writing this review, this is one of the most infuriating fanfics I have read in years... AAAAAAAAAAAAH! TRASH!
After 150 chapters I am walking away from this one. It has an interesting premise, pretty good grammer and lots of chapters. However, the logic and progression of the story are inconsistent. It seems almost every chapter events happens or characters make choices just to push the plot in a specific direction. To many convenient events. The author wanted to write a weak mc with poor skill and a system to improve their strength and balance things so they can tell a more grounded and gritty story. Unfortunately, they don’t manage to do so, resulting in a lack of believability and immersion. With such a golden finger they should have leaned more into an op mc than one who lacks brain cells at convient moments. I was entertained and may come back. But I don’t think this story is for me.
This is an amazing story and my favorite naruto fanfiction, I hope you don't drop this and I'll be really happy if you could recommend similar stories
Excelente no deja de encantarme hasta el momento, ahora que lo pienso como reaccionara tobirama, cuando vea el modo mokuton de Mc, si es que llega a aparecer bueno sera de ver y esperar
Very good nothing else to say just very good I have neem reading this book since it had like 10 chapters and I still read it very very good keep it up author!
I’ve been following this fic for a while, and I have to say it’s a masterpiece. It’s perfect to the very last detail. It feels good to be born at a time when I get to read it.
The work is obviously of , the story is well-developed. The translation is... It's extremely bad. It's practically equivalent to machine translation via Google Translate
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There comes a point where all you need to do is read the chapter titles to know more or less how this goes. It's pulling that deeply from a certain genre that there is no suspense. As a translation though, this is A+
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give 5star bcos i was satisfied at the story and having fun reading it. thanks for the story!
A very good fanfic, the only drawback is the unnecessary delay to upgrade the MC's eyes to mangekyo.
I'm quite impressed with this author ( Chinese author) ( never happened before for a fanfic) The story was extremely satisfying - 1. Danzo's dead at right time 2. hokage's death at right time 3. this all happened before uchiha massacre 4. it didn't feel weird in anyway, story was smooth and interesting. 5. revealed hokage's seven deadly sins ( crime ) and published it 👍 6. Itachi's outcome was satisfying ( of course he joined AKATSUKI but it was to redeem himself for raising the blade against his own family) 7. MC compares many things to the real world ( memes, jokes etc.) mentioned Russian as well - I'm not Russian but i like this comparison most somehow. - still this wasn't annoying at all , story was smooth 8. MC doesn't hide his talent 👍( but didn't mentioned his system) 9. MC has a clear mind, his thoughts are clear and explained properly but briefly. 10. The author seems knowledgeable enough. 11. i can't really find any problems and that's my inner problem. even in power level and MC's progress. 12. of course lack of chapter is a issue but guys is posting them quickly. if it's slow we might lose the touch 13. it's lacking a bit of something but i can't figure it out. only conclusion is i need more of it . because the fun was short ( too short for me)
Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.
Overally, mid story. If you have free evening, give it a read. But don't expect too much of it. Story is pretty... Well... Let's just say it's same thing, in just new wrapping. MC is slave of system, quite literally. But. Writting quality, is not that bad. It is decent translation of terrible novel.
This fic might not be a masterpiece without flaws but it certainly is one of the best naruto fics ever written and translated. hats off to the translator for consistenly translating this into perfectly readable english.honestly only the original authors chinese vibes makes it recognizable as a chinese novel otherwise it almost seems like originally written fic .keep up the great work!!:)
Stop focusing on a small group of ppl that leave negative reviews….. Most of us here love this story ❤️
About this fanfic, from the first time I read this fanfic when it first uploaded more than a week ago, I already knew that the thing that's gonna be the main complaints of a lot of people is the MC's abysmal talent. It's important to note that this Fic is a Life Simulator System fic, one of the many subgenre of the more usual System fic. And like most other Life simulator fics, the author will have to impose a restriction upon the mechanics of the system, usually by limiting the times of possible simulation, simulation rewards, limiting the MC's talent so that he can only grow with simulation rewards, etc. This is important thing that's necessary to be done so that an actual story could take place, without restrictions to the Simulator System the MC could possibly spends time training for thousands of years in just a matter of 1 real time years. This would trivialize everything and destroy any hope of writing an action or adventure type story because the MC became so strong that nothing would matter. This of course did not matter if it's intended to be more focused on a slice of life or even a story that revolves around the side characters more than the MC, like Onepunch-Man for example. But it's clear that's not what this story specifically intended to be. So, with all that been said, it's a good fanfic in my opinion, is it a masterpiece without flaw? No it is not. But is it good enough that it can be enjoyable despite the flaw? I certainly think it is.
It’s good easy to follow and understand and compelling all and all a decent read .
What happened there no new chapter for 6 days is there something wrong is the author all right it's the first time something like this has happened
Honestly this Fan-fiction is a hidden gem. I can see that the Author/Translator has put in more efforts into Translation. This deservers 5* and here is why... Story : Decent, It is good enough compared to other Naruto Fanfics Mc : Even though he is Chinese supporter, it is not bad as other Fanfics Translation : Very good... its so good that it doesnt feel like an translation So if you are into naruto fanfics, i highly recommend atleast give it a 50+ chapters..
It was much better than most of the naruto fanfic's you should reduce the time-skips and focus more on interactions between Mc and his people . I suggest him trying use the system as way too survive more than protect as most of it is just a stimulation this will allow him to get stronger. The thing i find wierd is most of the times Mc behaves like a hero in the 4th great ninja war i suggest him in the stimulation to try to hide with hinata as long as possible in some remote area . Since he has the ability stealing shit i guess he can hide from infinte tsuknimoi ,even if he fails naruto &sasuke will free everyone which this author doesn't even mention and ends the stimulation like he's telling everyone the Mc died because of it which i found hilarous it's like he's trying his best not make the mc reach old age or controlling him through some nonsenscial factors other than that everything else was really good and i personally loved it.
the translation is very good. Well, the story itself is after that. As the main character became a dragon, the story began to lose its quality very rapidly, and after 10 chapters. the hero became a dragon, I decided to abandon this story and just read the title of the chapters to understand the further plot, (what I wrote is my subjective opinion, I do not urge new readers not to read this story, and I do not urge those who are already reading to abandon this story)
揭示劇透 the MC has no original thought of his own. He is literally just using cheats to get though the story. At least do something less predictable. Basically after the first couple of chapter you can already guess what the rest of the book is going to be like.
Unfortunately 😮💨 MC want to be in relationships with Hinata 😑, which is ruined for me.
I managed to survive to ch20. I really tried reading it. But the MC is beyond stupid. And its Chinese infested (written by one). MC is beyond help. He is so aaaaah im so mad just writing this review, this is one of the most infuriating fanfics I have read in years... AAAAAAAAAAAAH! TRASH!
After 150 chapters I am walking away from this one. It has an interesting premise, pretty good grammer and lots of chapters. However, the logic and progression of the story are inconsistent. It seems almost every chapter events happens or characters make choices just to push the plot in a specific direction. To many convenient events. The author wanted to write a weak mc with poor skill and a system to improve their strength and balance things so they can tell a more grounded and gritty story. Unfortunately, they don’t manage to do so, resulting in a lack of believability and immersion. With such a golden finger they should have leaned more into an op mc than one who lacks brain cells at convient moments. I was entertained and may come back. But I don’t think this story is for me.
This is an amazing story and my favorite naruto fanfiction, I hope you don't drop this and I'll be really happy if you could recommend similar stories
Excelente no deja de encantarme hasta el momento, ahora que lo pienso como reaccionara tobirama, cuando vea el modo mokuton de Mc, si es que llega a aparecer bueno sera de ver y esperar
Very good nothing else to say just very good I have neem reading this book since it had like 10 chapters and I still read it very very good keep it up author!
I’ve been following this fic for a while, and I have to say it’s a masterpiece. It’s perfect to the very last detail. It feels good to be born at a time when I get to read it.
The work is obviously of , the story is well-developed. The translation is... It's extremely bad. It's practically equivalent to machine translation via Google Translate
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There comes a point where all you need to do is read the chapter titles to know more or less how this goes. It's pulling that deeply from a certain genre that there is no suspense. As a translation though, this is A+
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give 5star bcos i was satisfied at the story and having fun reading it. thanks for the story!
A very good fanfic, the only drawback is the unnecessary delay to upgrade the MC's eyes to mangekyo.
I'm quite impressed with this author ( Chinese author) ( never happened before for a fanfic) The story was extremely satisfying - 1. Danzo's dead at right time 2. hokage's death at right time 3. this all happened before uchiha massacre 4. it didn't feel weird in anyway, story was smooth and interesting. 5. revealed hokage's seven deadly sins ( crime ) and published it 👍 6. Itachi's outcome was satisfying ( of course he joined AKATSUKI but it was to redeem himself for raising the blade against his own family) 7. MC compares many things to the real world ( memes, jokes etc.) mentioned Russian as well - I'm not Russian but i like this comparison most somehow. - still this wasn't annoying at all , story was smooth 8. MC doesn't hide his talent 👍( but didn't mentioned his system) 9. MC has a clear mind, his thoughts are clear and explained properly but briefly. 10. The author seems knowledgeable enough. 11. i can't really find any problems and that's my inner problem. even in power level and MC's progress. 12. of course lack of chapter is a issue but guys is posting them quickly. if it's slow we might lose the touch 13. it's lacking a bit of something but i can't figure it out. only conclusion is i need more of it . because the fun was short ( too short for me)
Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.
Overally, mid story. If you have free evening, give it a read. But don't expect too much of it. Story is pretty... Well... Let's just say it's same thing, in just new wrapping. MC is slave of system, quite literally. But. Writting quality, is not that bad. It is decent translation of terrible novel.
This fic might not be a masterpiece without flaws but it certainly is one of the best naruto fics ever written and translated. hats off to the translator for consistenly translating this into perfectly readable english.honestly only the original authors chinese vibes makes it recognizable as a chinese novel otherwise it almost seems like originally written fic .keep up the great work!!:)
Stop focusing on a small group of ppl that leave negative reviews….. Most of us here love this story ❤️
About this fanfic, from the first time I read this fanfic when it first uploaded more than a week ago, I already knew that the thing that's gonna be the main complaints of a lot of people is the MC's abysmal talent. It's important to note that this Fic is a Life Simulator System fic, one of the many subgenre of the more usual System fic. And like most other Life simulator fics, the author will have to impose a restriction upon the mechanics of the system, usually by limiting the times of possible simulation, simulation rewards, limiting the MC's talent so that he can only grow with simulation rewards, etc. This is important thing that's necessary to be done so that an actual story could take place, without restrictions to the Simulator System the MC could possibly spends time training for thousands of years in just a matter of 1 real time years. This would trivialize everything and destroy any hope of writing an action or adventure type story because the MC became so strong that nothing would matter. This of course did not matter if it's intended to be more focused on a slice of life or even a story that revolves around the side characters more than the MC, like Onepunch-Man for example. But it's clear that's not what this story specifically intended to be. So, with all that been said, it's a good fanfic in my opinion, is it a masterpiece without flaw? No it is not. But is it good enough that it can be enjoyable despite the flaw? I certainly think it is.