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i love this fanfic, a bit too slow to my liking but overall it was a great piece, very fun and enjoyable keep up the good work
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I liked this story. A piece of advice, I believe you prolong too much in relation to the audience watching the film, 2 or 3 chapters at most is already good. I hope you continue with this story.
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I didn't read it, just curious will Marvel or any other American movie film would aloud a Chinese play so many big roles in movies for an American public. Not to be a hater, really. Just curious, about how they perceive the world.
i love this fanfic, a bit too slow to my liking but overall it was a great piece, very fun and enjoyable keep up the good work
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I liked this story. A piece of advice, I believe you prolong too much in relation to the audience watching the film, 2 or 3 chapters at most is already good. I hope you continue with this story.
[img=Loving it][img=Smug][img=Why][img=Unalived][img=In your face][img=Your move][img=Loving it][img=Unalived][img=Smitten][img=Unalived][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=Unalived][img=Feeling it][img=Unalived][img=In your face][img=Feeling it][img=Why][img=Feeling it][img=Why][img=Feeling it]
I didn't read it, just curious will Marvel or any other American movie film would aloud a Chinese play so many big roles in movies for an American public. Not to be a hater, really. Just curious, about how they perceive the world.