4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
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I’m four chapters in and it’s quite good… but the kinks the author covers happen to be some of my turn offs 🫤. There’s prostitution and sloppy group play along with some blatant interracial role playing, all of which are things I find unappealing, and yet the story is fresh enough that four chapters have passed without me putting it down. I think it’s fair to say that if these type of scenarios are what you’re into then this story is probably something you can look forward to.
The novel is the best so far, love it and the the author describes the girls is the best. He puts in the effort in describing the girls. The best part is there's a lot of chapters to the novel. The author has my respect. Maybe come with a new novel with anime girls instead of dc girls or try out different girls too. Keep up the good work.
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I’m four chapters in and it’s quite good… but the kinks the author covers happen to be some of my turn offs 🫤. There’s prostitution and sloppy group play along with some blatant interracial role playing, all of which are things I find unappealing, and yet the story is fresh enough that four chapters have passed without me putting it down. I think it’s fair to say that if these type of scenarios are what you’re into then this story is probably something you can look forward to.
The novel is the best so far, love it and the the author describes the girls is the best. He puts in the effort in describing the girls. The best part is there's a lot of chapters to the novel. The author has my respect. Maybe come with a new novel with anime girls instead of dc girls or try out different girls too. Keep up the good work.