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There's a lot I didn't understand here, and some of the author's decisions left me confused, but I hope this work will find its response and will continue. There are already few Adventure Time fanfics here, and to top it off, they've been abandoned from the start.
There's a lot I didn't understand here, and some of the author's decisions left me confused, but I hope this work will find its response and will continue. There are already few Adventure Time fanfics here, and to top it off, they've been abandoned from the start.