Reviews of Pokemon: Gym Leader by RockyRoad891 - Webnovel

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4.59

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Milky_Waay

Can't wait for more chapters. Although there's some typos and naming mistakes, Its readable

8d
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exgarex_123

Esta muy Bueno, excepto que hay Pokémones olvidados como [Los Numeros son Apariciones en los Capitulos]: Venonat ×1, Zubat ×1, Toxapex ×6, Nidoking ×2, Arbok ×4, Drapion ×2, Glimmet ×1, Gligar ×1, Eevee ×1, Pikachu ×1, Larvitar ×1, Zoroark ×1, Yamask ×1, Honedge ×1, Pikachu ×1, Ninetales de Alola ×1 y Gimmighoul ×1. Hubo mucho Pokémon Vacío. Me sigue confundiendo la Fuerza de los Campeones ya que varía del Nivel 50 - 80

17d
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Jetboy76

It seems like there is an underlying romance in this novel but I am wondering if it is harem or no-harem?

24d
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Igneel_Fairy

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1mth
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Virtuosso

It’s been a while since I read a decent pokemon fic. The translation and editing was done very well. Engaging story wise and well executed characters and strategy exploration

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TheNight_Wyvern

This is a good history honestly............................................................................................................................................

1mth
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Tsubasa93

The system ruined the story. Was absolutely unneeded.

1mth
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SealedVessel

Es bastante bueno por lo general los autores suelen chetar a sus personajes de formas absurdamente descaradas (aquí x lo menos te dan un contexto)

1mth
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mecho_sobhy

merry christmas............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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1mth
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Daoistpg9gC9

I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.

2mth
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Christian_Quirimit_7442

no words needed, it's just great............

2mth
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Woaron

I like it definitely Unique among other pokemon fanfics, The update is kinda slow or maybe I'm just excited to get Chapters

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2mth
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Funnypilz

Very fun and unique, well written!

2mth
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NikaTheHonoredOne

A very Nice and Chill pokemon fanfic

2mth
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Daoiste4jtHj

i like the story about mc being a gym leader, especially his cheat, i also like the pokemon battles in his gym with a mix of comedy, overall i like it. please keep updating

2mth
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Dorian_1192

Ngl the system kinda ruins the story, it's perfectly fine without one and there isn't even a tag for it.

2mth
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ben_schneiderman

I like the story idea but the constant explanation of every single moves typing hurts me on an emotional level. There will be almost nobody reading a Pokémon fanfic that doesn’t know most of the moves already and can sus out the rest. Actually made me drop the story during the Red fight.

2mth
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Darquesse

The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.

2mth
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Kevin_Valentin

This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.

3mth
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TheGrayKing22

I definitely need more I caught up so fast and I'm totally hooked. Love the Gym leader premise, love the despicable Toxic stall and Parafusion tactics etc. Really good just need a few hundred more chapters lol. Hard finding a good Poke Fic on here.

3mth
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SenpaiiDayy

Honestly really like this its new for me if there are any others about being a gym leader id like the recommendations.

3mth
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Chickennick

Very funny character who is a total troll but in a very funny way very well written. It updates every day at 11 am. Its also very interesting having the Mc be a gym leader while still going on adventures

3mth
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TheGrayKing22

This is really good, hope the updates keep coming because I practically caught up in a single evening.

3mth
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Joefel_Flores

Very interesting story so far, i like that the MC has multiple teams as well as using actual strategy against opponents.

3mth
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GyroJapster

The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.

4mth
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Beauty_25

Nice fan-fic novel. Hopefully, its not harem.

4mth
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SolrakRK

translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....

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Tesouraria_Lac

Uma fanfic interessante de pokemon, possui um bom desenvolvimento cuma ressalva do sistema que torna o mc meio op mas que pelo desenvolvimento do autor pode se relevar. No mais uma fanfic que vale a pena sua leitura

4mth
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Ozil_Lah

This work is very good, when I read it, I couldn't stop reading.I really find this work difficult, keep going and keep up the enthusiasm .iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

4mth
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Sirantulas

It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.

4mth
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Milky_Waay

Can't wait for more chapters. Although there's some typos and naming mistakes, Its readable

8d
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exgarex_123

Esta muy Bueno, excepto que hay Pokémones olvidados como [Los Numeros son Apariciones en los Capitulos]: Venonat ×1, Zubat ×1, Toxapex ×6, Nidoking ×2, Arbok ×4, Drapion ×2, Glimmet ×1, Gligar ×1, Eevee ×1, Pikachu ×1, Larvitar ×1, Zoroark ×1, Yamask ×1, Honedge ×1, Pikachu ×1, Ninetales de Alola ×1 y Gimmighoul ×1. Hubo mucho Pokémon Vacío. Me sigue confundiendo la Fuerza de los Campeones ya que varía del Nivel 50 - 80

17d
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Jetboy76

It seems like there is an underlying romance in this novel but I am wondering if it is harem or no-harem?

24d
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Igneel_Fairy

..........,......................................,......................................,..........................,.......................................

1mth
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Virtuosso

It’s been a while since I read a decent pokemon fic. The translation and editing was done very well. Engaging story wise and well executed characters and strategy exploration

img
1mth
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TheNight_Wyvern

This is a good history honestly............................................................................................................................................

1mth
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Tsubasa93

The system ruined the story. Was absolutely unneeded.

1mth
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SealedVessel

Es bastante bueno por lo general los autores suelen chetar a sus personajes de formas absurdamente descaradas (aquí x lo menos te dan un contexto)

1mth
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mecho_sobhy

merry christmas............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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1mth
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Daoistpg9gC9

I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.

2mth
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Christian_Quirimit_7442

no words needed, it's just great............

2mth
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Woaron

I like it definitely Unique among other pokemon fanfics, The update is kinda slow or maybe I'm just excited to get Chapters

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2mth
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Funnypilz

Very fun and unique, well written!

2mth
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NikaTheHonoredOne

A very Nice and Chill pokemon fanfic

2mth
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Daoiste4jtHj

i like the story about mc being a gym leader, especially his cheat, i also like the pokemon battles in his gym with a mix of comedy, overall i like it. please keep updating

2mth
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Dorian_1192

Ngl the system kinda ruins the story, it's perfectly fine without one and there isn't even a tag for it.

2mth
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ben_schneiderman

I like the story idea but the constant explanation of every single moves typing hurts me on an emotional level. There will be almost nobody reading a Pokémon fanfic that doesn’t know most of the moves already and can sus out the rest. Actually made me drop the story during the Red fight.

2mth
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Darquesse

The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.

2mth
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Kevin_Valentin

This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.

3mth
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TheGrayKing22

I definitely need more I caught up so fast and I'm totally hooked. Love the Gym leader premise, love the despicable Toxic stall and Parafusion tactics etc. Really good just need a few hundred more chapters lol. Hard finding a good Poke Fic on here.

3mth
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SenpaiiDayy

Honestly really like this its new for me if there are any others about being a gym leader id like the recommendations.

3mth
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Chickennick

Very funny character who is a total troll but in a very funny way very well written. It updates every day at 11 am. Its also very interesting having the Mc be a gym leader while still going on adventures

3mth
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TheGrayKing22

This is really good, hope the updates keep coming because I practically caught up in a single evening.

3mth
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Joefel_Flores

Very interesting story so far, i like that the MC has multiple teams as well as using actual strategy against opponents.

3mth
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GyroJapster

The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.

4mth
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Beauty_25

Nice fan-fic novel. Hopefully, its not harem.

4mth
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SolrakRK

translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....

img
4mth
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Tesouraria_Lac

Uma fanfic interessante de pokemon, possui um bom desenvolvimento cuma ressalva do sistema que torna o mc meio op mas que pelo desenvolvimento do autor pode se relevar. No mais uma fanfic que vale a pena sua leitura

4mth
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Ozil_Lah

This work is very good, when I read it, I couldn't stop reading.I really find this work difficult, keep going and keep up the enthusiasm .iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

4mth
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Sirantulas

It begins with a great start. Bonus gym Gary Oak went against, with an isekai protag. Sadly, it devolves into "system" slop quite fast. The story didn't even need it in the first place as a counter type gym would actually be a fascinating read, but instead we get shortcuts through the beginning where instead of character development we get menus and stuff from doing basic things the MC would have done anyways. Also, we get the regular intelligence debuff for Canon characters that is all too common in this type of story.

4mth
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