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Translation is subpar. It started okay but TL didn't seem to try anymore starting around 30+ Story is enjoyable, but the multiverse system is a bummer since the chosen other worlds were quite old. I skipped those arcs and didn't seem to miss anything. The MC is the least likeable part of this fic, it also filled most chapters with unneccessary expositions. Updates are super fast. World BG: The timeline are wrong. Majority of the characters ages are wrong.
Si soy sincero solo sigo el arco actual para ver la reunión con eris y ver si esta vez el MC realmente hace algo romántico [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
[img=Relaxed][img=Cries][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Relaxed][img=More pls][img=More pls] itu really good
Muito boa a história o único ruim é que os capítulos são muito curtos, por isso acho que deveria aumentar o tamanho de cada capítulo pós eu mal começo a ler e já acabou
My complaints are basically all the same as most of the reviews that are lower in stars. I dislike MCs with no backbone and no strong egos. That is legit the only complaint. Well, I got a bit more complaints but it probably wouldn't matter to most people anyway. One guy in replies for a 2-star review said it perfectly about how I feel.
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The story is beautiful, but there are things that made me not like it. The writer continues to weaken MC. There are many chapters that have no meaning and do not contribute to the progress of the story.
Just an all-in-all great read! Engaging, satisfying, funny and entertaining!! Keep up the good work!!
This fanfic has been quite entertaining so far. I enjoyed the different starting point than most fanfics. My only major complaint is the interaction with female characters. The MC goes from someone with a plan, strong ideals, and certain viewpoints, to a complete pushover whenever a woman is involved. It's bizarre and detracts from the story. Cheers
The MC s*cks. the story is quite good and promising, but the Improvement of the MC is too slow that you should've just made him a transmigrator that doesn't have a system. He's more like a side character with his development and not like an Mc transmigrator.
It's just an average translation story, honestly. Hardly anything good about it. the sheer obsession author has going with low key or hsving the face - slapping moments. it sounds more like a cultivation nonsense rather than a one-piece fanfic. It's incredibly boring.
Overall it is a good One Piece fanfic novel. Writing Quality needs improvement as too much info may affect the story as it is a fanfic of One Piece and some of the readers may find the flaws on it. Just continue writing this fanfic. It has potential. Good Work.
I think there are to many One Piece fanfics however I find this one pretty interesting. Mc character is also to my liking and I would like for him to remain without devil fruit since it is pretty comon in other fanfics for them to get either mera mera/rumble rumble or a kind of cheat to use multiple fruits which is pretty repetitive and boring.
me gusta la historia el arco de zero estubo algo flojo por que esa historia en modo lectura no es muy buena en relacion a su anime que traiga cosas de otros mundo es bueno pero que no sea algo muy trascendente es mejor ya que cambia mucho el flujo de la historia y tú argumento de trama... exelente fic...9/10
The translation was good but the original Author only has superficial knowledge about One piece. well, most Chinese Author fanfic is.
La única razón por que no se gano las 5 estrellas es porque este fanfic me hace sufrir por el próximo capitulo este Autor de Realmente Maligno :V jajaja
The main character has to be an idiot black arm. zephyr said he is a genius. In the main character's mind, still thinks he can be low profile.
é uma boa história, pelo menos até aonde eu li... recomendo para quem gosta de histórias lentas e bastante explicativas. KKK KKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
................................................It's stressful to read since he joined the navy and I'm leaving it since I wanted to entertain myself and not get stressed out
Então ele invade a redline, mata 2 dragões celestiais e não ganha 1 chance de simular? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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This is your best tl fic tbh.. or maybe I’m just liking the fact that I haven’t seen harem yet, either way, the plot line is very good. All thought, mc hiding his abilities was annoying at first, we can still see how it has saved his life as they can’t even associate certain events to him. It’s sad that I can’t still see this going the harem route as the author wouldn’t make mc save people for no reason, especially since they were all girls. Mc saved aine, her mom, Hancock and her sisters and even some random girl that we don’t know the name of and even gion considers him a rival.. u can see were all these leads to but I’m not mad at it since it’s not unusual to have an harem in this world of pirates and plus the plot leading to these events seems somewhat reasonable so I’m not mad..
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Только не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее время Только не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последние годы Только не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее времяТолько не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее времяТолько не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее время
Pretty good fanfic author so far but can you plz tell me the original name ............................................................................................
the MC is getting too good at staying low key that hes still doing freakin grunt work lol he should have at least be above average but not exeptional but he went for bellow average like a retard XD
There's way too much over-explanation. Even the smallest things are explained over 3-4 paragraphs ..... ............. ................ .................
it's a good story but i hope you would make mc courages i know that the world is very dangerous but making him stay lowkey when his strength is not even that powerfull is not good he should know that without power he won't be able to live a good life but will just be coward
Starting from One Piece: Multiverse Simulation is a Chinese web novel that mixes the concept of world-hopping with strategic simulation. The protagonist, Wood, is equipped with a unique system that allows him to travel to different fictional worlds, including popular universes like One Piece and Familiar of Zero and more. This system also enables him to simulate various scenarios, which helps him accumulate knowledge, abilities, and power in these diverse environments. Story Development: The story begins in the world of One Piece, but as the narrative progresses, Wood travels to multiple other worlds. Each new world offers fresh challenges and opportunities for Wood to grow. The simulation system at the heart of the plot adds a strategic element, as Wood must carefully navigate the complexities of each world. He doesn’t simply overpower his enemies; instead, he often relies on his wits and the strategic use of the simulation system. The plot’s pacing varies, with some readers enjoying the slow, deliberate development, while others may find it a bit too cautious. Wood’s approach is methodical; he doesn’t rush into battles or show off his power without reason, which can sometimes make the story feel more like a slow burn rather than a fast-paced adventure. Character Design Wood’s character is shaped by his cautious nature. Unlike many protagonists in similar genres, Wood doesn’t seek attention or immediate recognition of his strength. Instead, he prefers to blend in, keeping his abilities hidden until absolutely necessary. This approach is a double-edged sword; while it makes Wood a more realistic and grounded character, some readers find his reluctance to showcase his power frustrating, interpreting it as cowardice. However, this cautiousness is a key part of Wood's personality. He understands the dangers of each world he enters and knows that revealing too much too soon could lead to unnecessary conflict or even death. Wood's interactions with other characters are influenced by this mindset, leading to relationships that are complex and often based on mutual respect rather than mere power dynamics. World Background The world-building in 从海贼开始万界模拟 is one of its strongest aspects. The author faithfully recreates the worlds of One Piece, Familiar of Zero, and other fictional universes. Each world has its unique set of rules and challenges, which Wood must navigate using the knowledge and abilities he gains from the simulation system. The simulation system itself adds depth to the world-building. It allows for the exploration of alternate outcomes and "what-if" scenarios within these well-known universes. This not only keeps the story fresh but also provides new perspectives on familiar settings, making the world-hopping experience more engaging. Reader Criticism A common criticism from readers is that Wood is too cautious, often hiding his powers and trying to blend in with the ordinary characters of each world. Some see this as a lack of courage, wanting a protagonist who takes bold actions and dominates every situation. However, Wood’s behavior is a calculated survival strategy. He is aware of the risks of each world and understands that being too flashy could attract dangerous attention. This aspect of his personality is essential to his character and adds a layer of realism to the story. Conclusion 从海贼开始万界模拟 is a compelling blend of strategic world-hopping and character development. While Wood’s cautious nature might not appeal to all readers, it is a deliberate choice that adds depth and realism to his character. The story is well-paced, with a strong emphasis on strategic thinking and survival, and the world-building is both immersive and true to the source material of the worlds Wood visits. If you enjoy stories where the protagonist must think carefully and navigate complex situations, this novel offers a unique take on the genre.
Translation is subpar. It started okay but TL didn't seem to try anymore starting around 30+ Story is enjoyable, but the multiverse system is a bummer since the chosen other worlds were quite old. I skipped those arcs and didn't seem to miss anything. The MC is the least likeable part of this fic, it also filled most chapters with unneccessary expositions. Updates are super fast. World BG: The timeline are wrong. Majority of the characters ages are wrong.
Si soy sincero solo sigo el arco actual para ver la reunión con eris y ver si esta vez el MC realmente hace algo romántico [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
[img=Relaxed][img=Cries][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=In a daze][img=Cries][img=Relaxed][img=More pls][img=More pls] itu really good
Muito boa a história o único ruim é que os capítulos são muito curtos, por isso acho que deveria aumentar o tamanho de cada capítulo pós eu mal começo a ler e já acabou
My complaints are basically all the same as most of the reviews that are lower in stars. I dislike MCs with no backbone and no strong egos. That is legit the only complaint. Well, I got a bit more complaints but it probably wouldn't matter to most people anyway. One guy in replies for a 2-star review said it perfectly about how I feel.
[img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Shocked][img=Speechless][img=Relaxed][img=Shocked][img=Unalived][img=Shocked][img=Out of it][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Out of it][img=Shocked][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Shocked][img=Shocked]
The story is beautiful, but there are things that made me not like it. The writer continues to weaken MC. There are many chapters that have no meaning and do not contribute to the progress of the story.
Just an all-in-all great read! Engaging, satisfying, funny and entertaining!! Keep up the good work!!
This fanfic has been quite entertaining so far. I enjoyed the different starting point than most fanfics. My only major complaint is the interaction with female characters. The MC goes from someone with a plan, strong ideals, and certain viewpoints, to a complete pushover whenever a woman is involved. It's bizarre and detracts from the story. Cheers
The MC s*cks. the story is quite good and promising, but the Improvement of the MC is too slow that you should've just made him a transmigrator that doesn't have a system. He's more like a side character with his development and not like an Mc transmigrator.
It's just an average translation story, honestly. Hardly anything good about it. the sheer obsession author has going with low key or hsving the face - slapping moments. it sounds more like a cultivation nonsense rather than a one-piece fanfic. It's incredibly boring.
Overall it is a good One Piece fanfic novel. Writing Quality needs improvement as too much info may affect the story as it is a fanfic of One Piece and some of the readers may find the flaws on it. Just continue writing this fanfic. It has potential. Good Work.
I think there are to many One Piece fanfics however I find this one pretty interesting. Mc character is also to my liking and I would like for him to remain without devil fruit since it is pretty comon in other fanfics for them to get either mera mera/rumble rumble or a kind of cheat to use multiple fruits which is pretty repetitive and boring.
me gusta la historia el arco de zero estubo algo flojo por que esa historia en modo lectura no es muy buena en relacion a su anime que traiga cosas de otros mundo es bueno pero que no sea algo muy trascendente es mejor ya que cambia mucho el flujo de la historia y tú argumento de trama... exelente fic...9/10
The translation was good but the original Author only has superficial knowledge about One piece. well, most Chinese Author fanfic is.
La única razón por que no se gano las 5 estrellas es porque este fanfic me hace sufrir por el próximo capitulo este Autor de Realmente Maligno :V jajaja
The main character has to be an idiot black arm. zephyr said he is a genius. In the main character's mind, still thinks he can be low profile.
é uma boa história, pelo menos até aonde eu li... recomendo para quem gosta de histórias lentas e bastante explicativas. KKK KKK KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
................................................It's stressful to read since he joined the navy and I'm leaving it since I wanted to entertain myself and not get stressed out
Então ele invade a redline, mata 2 dragões celestiais e não ganha 1 chance de simular? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
揭示劇透 This is your best tl fic tbh.. or maybe I’m just liking the fact that I haven’t seen harem yet, either way, the plot line is very good. All thought, mc hiding his abilities was annoying at first, we can still see how it has saved his life as they can’t even associate certain events to him. It’s sad that I can’t still see this going the harem route as the author wouldn’t make mc save people for no reason, especially since they were all girls. Mc saved aine, her mom, Hancock and her sisters and even some random girl that we don’t know the name of and even gion considers him a rival.. u can see were all these leads to but I’m not mad at it since it’s not unusual to have an harem in this world of pirates and plus the plot leading to these events seems somewhat reasonable so I’m not mad..
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Только не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее время Только не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последние годы Только не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее времяТолько не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее времяТолько не забрасывай ради бога. Это лучшее что я читал за последнее время
Pretty good fanfic author so far but can you plz tell me the original name ............................................................................................
the MC is getting too good at staying low key that hes still doing freakin grunt work lol he should have at least be above average but not exeptional but he went for bellow average like a retard XD
There's way too much over-explanation. Even the smallest things are explained over 3-4 paragraphs ..... ............. ................ .................
it's a good story but i hope you would make mc courages i know that the world is very dangerous but making him stay lowkey when his strength is not even that powerfull is not good he should know that without power he won't be able to live a good life but will just be coward
Starting from One Piece: Multiverse Simulation is a Chinese web novel that mixes the concept of world-hopping with strategic simulation. The protagonist, Wood, is equipped with a unique system that allows him to travel to different fictional worlds, including popular universes like One Piece and Familiar of Zero and more. This system also enables him to simulate various scenarios, which helps him accumulate knowledge, abilities, and power in these diverse environments. Story Development: The story begins in the world of One Piece, but as the narrative progresses, Wood travels to multiple other worlds. Each new world offers fresh challenges and opportunities for Wood to grow. The simulation system at the heart of the plot adds a strategic element, as Wood must carefully navigate the complexities of each world. He doesn’t simply overpower his enemies; instead, he often relies on his wits and the strategic use of the simulation system. The plot’s pacing varies, with some readers enjoying the slow, deliberate development, while others may find it a bit too cautious. Wood’s approach is methodical; he doesn’t rush into battles or show off his power without reason, which can sometimes make the story feel more like a slow burn rather than a fast-paced adventure. Character Design Wood’s character is shaped by his cautious nature. Unlike many protagonists in similar genres, Wood doesn’t seek attention or immediate recognition of his strength. Instead, he prefers to blend in, keeping his abilities hidden until absolutely necessary. This approach is a double-edged sword; while it makes Wood a more realistic and grounded character, some readers find his reluctance to showcase his power frustrating, interpreting it as cowardice. However, this cautiousness is a key part of Wood's personality. He understands the dangers of each world he enters and knows that revealing too much too soon could lead to unnecessary conflict or even death. Wood's interactions with other characters are influenced by this mindset, leading to relationships that are complex and often based on mutual respect rather than mere power dynamics. World Background The world-building in 从海贼开始万界模拟 is one of its strongest aspects. The author faithfully recreates the worlds of One Piece, Familiar of Zero, and other fictional universes. Each world has its unique set of rules and challenges, which Wood must navigate using the knowledge and abilities he gains from the simulation system. The simulation system itself adds depth to the world-building. It allows for the exploration of alternate outcomes and "what-if" scenarios within these well-known universes. This not only keeps the story fresh but also provides new perspectives on familiar settings, making the world-hopping experience more engaging. Reader Criticism A common criticism from readers is that Wood is too cautious, often hiding his powers and trying to blend in with the ordinary characters of each world. Some see this as a lack of courage, wanting a protagonist who takes bold actions and dominates every situation. However, Wood’s behavior is a calculated survival strategy. He is aware of the risks of each world and understands that being too flashy could attract dangerous attention. This aspect of his personality is essential to his character and adds a layer of realism to the story. Conclusion 从海贼开始万界模拟 is a compelling blend of strategic world-hopping and character development. While Wood’s cautious nature might not appeal to all readers, it is a deliberate choice that adds depth and realism to his character. The story is well-paced, with a strong emphasis on strategic thinking and survival, and the world-building is both immersive and true to the source material of the worlds Wood visits. If you enjoy stories where the protagonist must think carefully and navigate complex situations, this novel offers a unique take on the genre.