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The character is op and not realistic in term plot. dont read it, waste your time.
Either this came first or the other one came first bit one of these is a direct rip off of the other, in this one the guy goes to the abyss and in the other one the guy goes to hell. Both of them conquer it, and eventually, they get sent back to earth, where they are reset to level 1
I just started reading chapter one and I'm hooked!! I didn't expect an epic battle right in the beginning! I'm saving this and will enter marathon state for the next two days. also, I love you author! keep up the good work!!!
Since we're already past 110 chapters, I wanted to share my thoughts and help new readers and also this review will serve Q and A. Below might be a spoiler Maybe so I'll put SPOILER ALERT. This novel begins near the end of the main character's journey in the Abyss. Some readers might find this annoying or what because the next chapters focus on the main character's past of how he got to that point. I recommend that everyone give it a try. Start with chapters 1 and 2, then you can either skip to chapter 30, which is the last Domain of that Past, or go to chapter 64, which is the continuation of Chapter 1. Please give it a chance!
I really hate it when an author starts their story with its ending then suddenly starts to change into the main character's past. Sorry, but this novel is not for me
Awesome book, I love the monsters in this novel, they are so nice with their Titan size and remind me of the Shadow Of Colossus game!. can't wait for him to come back to earth and become OP!.
Starting was op with a fancy fight by the overpowered mc but this is a tragic system novel with lots of tragedy. Suddenly, the new system comes and our poor mc is threatened and abducted. MC cries "I want to be with mommy" so sad to see this😥. And to top it off he's blackmailed by this beautiful and stunning goddess throwing all responsibility onto his claiming she bestowed this system to his family and he's the poor chosen sacrifice who has to help her if he wants to see his mommy. The worst of all we know nothing about the previous system which bares its neck from time to time in this new errortic.. I mean error system. The mc is continuously threatened with the system missions have to fight evil slimy monsters higher levelled than him. Thankfully, there's this cute and dumb slimy guy keeping our mc company in his tragic journey. There are lots and lots of missions for mc whether he likes it or not, poor guy. The goddess does shower her blessings to our mc. Jokes aside, this is a novel with potential as it has good writing, satisfactory character development, good plot flow. I just missed some jovial situation and some funny dialogues,
The system trope, even if I personnaly feel that it has been overdone, i salute the author and his commitment to creating a nice setting where the systeme is not over taking the story. So far it looks good, so imma give it a 5 star and follow it closely
There are lots of things that need to be improved. I've already stated it in the paragraph comments.
What can I say... a very good novel with good writing. I could already see the personality of the main character and I like it.
The first two chapters are so amazing and author really explained the book in such a creative manner. I'm invested and eagerly awaiting more updates!
OK, this is really an intriguing book. The author really tried when it comes to putting his readers at suspense. I'm even shocked my self at such descriptive! Good work
Beautiful work, intense start. Love the opening fight [img=recommend][img=recommend] Waiting for more chapters . Can't wait to see him back in his world with that level of system, too op[img=strong][img=strong]
The first chapter is really captivating, especially with the concept of the abyss and the main character's powers. I can't wait to read the next chapters. I hope the author keeps publishing and doesn't drop the story.
First chapter is thrilling, love the start and it has this kind of theme "The beginning after the end" which makes me want to read it more than ever, i need more chapters.
just letting folks know because the synopsis got me confused, if you think the story starts after he's returned to earth; you're wrong. it goes through his journey in the abyss. around ch 84/85 he gets back but the journey is worth it so don't skip it
揭示劇透 The character is op and not realistic in term plot. dont read it, waste your time.
Either this came first or the other one came first bit one of these is a direct rip off of the other, in this one the guy goes to the abyss and in the other one the guy goes to hell. Both of them conquer it, and eventually, they get sent back to earth, where they are reset to level 1
I just started reading chapter one and I'm hooked!! I didn't expect an epic battle right in the beginning! I'm saving this and will enter marathon state for the next two days. also, I love you author! keep up the good work!!!
Since we're already past 110 chapters, I wanted to share my thoughts and help new readers and also this review will serve Q and A. Below might be a spoiler Maybe so I'll put SPOILER ALERT. This novel begins near the end of the main character's journey in the Abyss. Some readers might find this annoying or what because the next chapters focus on the main character's past of how he got to that point. I recommend that everyone give it a try. Start with chapters 1 and 2, then you can either skip to chapter 30, which is the last Domain of that Past, or go to chapter 64, which is the continuation of Chapter 1. Please give it a chance!
I really hate it when an author starts their story with its ending then suddenly starts to change into the main character's past. Sorry, but this novel is not for me
Awesome book, I love the monsters in this novel, they are so nice with their Titan size and remind me of the Shadow Of Colossus game!. can't wait for him to come back to earth and become OP!.
Starting was op with a fancy fight by the overpowered mc but this is a tragic system novel with lots of tragedy. Suddenly, the new system comes and our poor mc is threatened and abducted. MC cries "I want to be with mommy" so sad to see this😥. And to top it off he's blackmailed by this beautiful and stunning goddess throwing all responsibility onto his claiming she bestowed this system to his family and he's the poor chosen sacrifice who has to help her if he wants to see his mommy. The worst of all we know nothing about the previous system which bares its neck from time to time in this new errortic.. I mean error system. The mc is continuously threatened with the system missions have to fight evil slimy monsters higher levelled than him. Thankfully, there's this cute and dumb slimy guy keeping our mc company in his tragic journey. There are lots and lots of missions for mc whether he likes it or not, poor guy. The goddess does shower her blessings to our mc. Jokes aside, this is a novel with potential as it has good writing, satisfactory character development, good plot flow. I just missed some jovial situation and some funny dialogues,
The system trope, even if I personnaly feel that it has been overdone, i salute the author and his commitment to creating a nice setting where the systeme is not over taking the story. So far it looks good, so imma give it a 5 star and follow it closely
There are lots of things that need to be improved. I've already stated it in the paragraph comments.
What can I say... a very good novel with good writing. I could already see the personality of the main character and I like it.
The first two chapters are so amazing and author really explained the book in such a creative manner. I'm invested and eagerly awaiting more updates!
OK, this is really an intriguing book. The author really tried when it comes to putting his readers at suspense. I'm even shocked my self at such descriptive! Good work
Beautiful work, intense start. Love the opening fight [img=recommend][img=recommend] Waiting for more chapters . Can't wait to see him back in his world with that level of system, too op[img=strong][img=strong]
The first chapter is really captivating, especially with the concept of the abyss and the main character's powers. I can't wait to read the next chapters. I hope the author keeps publishing and doesn't drop the story.
First chapter is thrilling, love the start and it has this kind of theme "The beginning after the end" which makes me want to read it more than ever, i need more chapters.
just letting folks know because the synopsis got me confused, if you think the story starts after he's returned to earth; you're wrong. it goes through his journey in the abyss. around ch 84/85 he gets back but the journey is worth it so don't skip it
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