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It's a great start to the story. It is very fast-paced but has great grammar and great storytelling. Waiting for more chapters. Good work author.[img=recommend]
You asked for an overpowered MC with reasonable female leads, well-paced, action-packed and twists leaving surprised? Well, here you go! This is my fourth fanfic!
i'm enjoying it...............the mc isn't edgy, has potential to get stronger..........don't know if the author will burn wat he's cooking but so far its been good you just keep wanting more
It's a great start to the story. It is very fast-paced but has great grammar and great storytelling. Waiting for more chapters. Good work author.[img=recommend]
You asked for an overpowered MC with reasonable female leads, well-paced, action-packed and twists leaving surprised? Well, here you go! This is my fourth fanfic!
i'm enjoying it...............the mc isn't edgy, has potential to get stronger..........don't know if the author will burn wat he's cooking but so far its been good you just keep wanting more