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A young man named Mark finds himself at the crossroads of life and death, struck by the fateful "truck-kun" and offered a chance for reincarnation by a higher-dimensional being known as ROB.
Given the opportunity to start anew, Mark, now reborn as James Logan Howlett, enters the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU).
Armed with the combined abilities of Wolverine and an Alpha werewolf, James now as one of the most formidable beings in existence, he navigates his new life.
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Kara, Natasha and Wanda are the only mates for Logan. I'm not planning to add more.
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Don't waste your time... At chapter 1 the Mc is a nobody, at chapter 2 he is the richest and powerful man with 1.000 members on his pack. No development, the author just threw the information on us and we have to accept it 👎
It could be better, to begin with it's not fun to read about a bad-tempered protagonist, I don't want to read a Logan 2.0, so why make a reincarnating protagonist if his personality is similar to the original Logan; second, it is said that his organization works in the shadows but at the beginning of the novel it is said that they do not make an effort to hide, furthermore, it could not be more cliché, a protagonist who does not like to attract attention, this is seen in 90 % of webnovel MCs.
You’re story is basically All over like you skipped all of how started his pack and his organization and his growth and I don’t think there were mate bonded in marvel or just add it to keep harem small you just left out a lot and I don’t care if you do flashbacks because its going to fail like a lot of other fanfic were they skip over like all there childhood and teen years and adult years and go right to all powerful organization or all powerful character I just think most of all them fail ps you lost a lot of content because his character journey is basically complete like the rest of the story will be him getting together with other 2 Women in his harem and beating up super villains and getting his last step in his plans we don’t know and the things like the Japan/china mc face slapping
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I'm speechless as to how bad this is, it's an info dump rather than a story and just straight up tells summary of movies with 2-3 repeating lines with context being I have worked hard and I'm reborn
I like it is better than not having any power and always relying on system it's good to new type of Logan who is not doing everything solo instead an organisation money power people it's great
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I wish there was a fan-fic where one is reincarnated as Victor Creed, half brother to Wolverine. He gets adamantium/vibranium in his body to surpress his natural mutation from changing and would look like The Xmen Origins Victor Creed. Not a review but an Idea that I want to pitch to the author(or anybody). Would be interesting to see his relationship with Logan.
The story has potential to be great, just hoping the author won't drop. Though the story is entertaining, it can be more better. All The Best🙏
Great Concept. Something refreshing. Maybe slightly longer chapters tho? Because story doesn’t progress much otherwise short chapters feel like story has no depth and just speeding through plot
although the last chapters are good, we can't forget the first chapters done in ultra fast mode where other stories (5 star stories) would have dragged out the construction of the mc in 30/50 chapters there it was done in 2, and still one in truth)
I like it a lot. The plot, the Mc, and his powers are very interesting. Harem or no harem, the story will come out great. keep it up boss, ur doing great!
I like it, but I don't like how it wasn't shown how he got his wealth and pack, it was too rushed, but with the rest I liked it.
was a pretty good if alittle fast paced fanfic. till the author just threw everything in the trash and started over. The next fanfic set in one of the world wars is sooo OVER DONE ive read at least 5 of them that have wolverine in one of the world wars and it always get boring in 5- 10 chapters.
Well it's great and genuinely different from the Wolverine we know op and he has power money people to do his bidding and he slapped the face of one eyed bald headed pirate that it's make it worth reading and I am appreciating it
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Chapter 1: A Chance Beyond Death 3 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2: James Logan Howlett 3 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3: Phil Coulson 3 months ago
- 4 The Rescue 3 months ago
- 5 The Rebirth of the Wolverine 1 3 months ago
- 6 The Rebirth of the Wolverine 2 3 months ago
- 7 The Wolverine 3 months ago
- 8 I am Iron Man 3 months ago
- 9 Everyone wants to meet the Alpha (Uncle Wolf) 3 months ago
- 10 Meeting with Stark 3 months ago
- 11 A watchful Guilt 3 months ago
- 12 The Calm Before the Storm 3 months ago
- 13 A Night to Remember 1 3 months ago
- 14 A Night to Remember 2 3 months ago
- 15 Reactions 2 months ago
- 16 Fun on the beach (R18) 2 months ago
- 17 The Beast within 2 months ago
- 18 Time for the truth 2 months ago
- 19 Rewrite is out 2 months ago
It's ridiculous for an alpha with over 1000 pack members to try to find someone like an errand dog. So much wealth, so much servant, political power, influence, military power, James himself is running around like a mercenary looking for stardom. Beta mc search dog mc The character's growth, development, marriage and the wars they experience are skipped. The character is introduced as a side character. There is no character development. There is no world background introduction. Bad writing. Lots of logical errors.