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This is the first twilight crossover I have read and I love it so far. I hope the author continues it and not drops it.
It seems not bad, in terms of relationships, at first. But everything else raises doubts: The hero is smart, a genius - but probably only in a narrow invisible magical sense. Otherwise, he is nothing, down-to-earth and led. He is Ambrosius and, of course, the heir of Merlin himself. We will throw in some more of the worst on top of that to finally bury the character under them. As a result, the unpretentious simple character of a romantic work is terribly inflated. Everything looks rather bad than not.
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a splendid story to the point where I look forward to the continuation of the story
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never been good room with reviews so all I can say is that I'm giving this five stars I've read the other book from this same author and I like that one too so if you want to know more about this story or fanfiction then you're going to have to pick it up and read
Author had the MC sitting still in front of an old man thumbing the magic equivalent of a gun and didn't do anything about with the scene. Sitting around and doing nothing when the potential murderer of your parents acts like he is your grandfather snd the mc has the power to at least set himself above being a chess piece is just annoying. Seems like the MC is going to follow canon in a world that is a mash of evil sparkly vampire overlords and dumb wizards who don't have math or english as a mandatory class.
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Generally not a fan of twilight but the way this was writen interests me. I would very much like to read the rest asap so i will be keeping an eye on this one
This story is kind of like an addiction. If there isn't a new chapter, i get withdrawals.
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I need more chapters 😩 I'm really enjoying the book so far. I hope your boredom continues so you write more 😂
Promising beginning with an interesting concept. I recommend this amazing fanfic to readers. Hope the author doesn’t drop it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Liking the novel so far. It’s nice seeing an OP MC who is just chilling out and figuring out his life. It’s oretty clear who the FML is, but I can see there might be one or two more in the future. Not opposed to more, but please keep it limited.
If your other book was that good I am pretty sure this one will be, we are in good hands ladies and gentlemen very good hands 😉 its a joke or is it
Written as a story to pass the time, I wondered how Twilight and Harry Potter would meld well in a world of my own design. Story is AU, with changes happening everywhere, but it's fun to write. Hope you enjoy it!
This is the first twilight crossover I have read and I love it so far. I hope the author continues it and not drops it.
It seems not bad, in terms of relationships, at first. But everything else raises doubts: The hero is smart, a genius - but probably only in a narrow invisible magical sense. Otherwise, he is nothing, down-to-earth and led. He is Ambrosius and, of course, the heir of Merlin himself. We will throw in some more of the worst on top of that to finally bury the character under them. As a result, the unpretentious simple character of a romantic work is terribly inflated. Everything looks rather bad than not.
揭示劇透 a splendid story to the point where I look forward to the continuation of the story
Me encanta la historia desde argentina.............................. .................,.,........,..,,..................
never been good room with reviews so all I can say is that I'm giving this five stars I've read the other book from this same author and I like that one too so if you want to know more about this story or fanfiction then you're going to have to pick it up and read
Author had the MC sitting still in front of an old man thumbing the magic equivalent of a gun and didn't do anything about with the scene. Sitting around and doing nothing when the potential murderer of your parents acts like he is your grandfather snd the mc has the power to at least set himself above being a chess piece is just annoying. Seems like the MC is going to follow canon in a world that is a mash of evil sparkly vampire overlords and dumb wizards who don't have math or english as a mandatory class.
揭示劇透 .......................................................good.................................................................................
Generally not a fan of twilight but the way this was writen interests me. I would very much like to read the rest asap so i will be keeping an eye on this one
This story is kind of like an addiction. If there isn't a new chapter, i get withdrawals.
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I need more chapters 😩 I'm really enjoying the book so far. I hope your boredom continues so you write more 😂
Promising beginning with an interesting concept. I recommend this amazing fanfic to readers. Hope the author doesn’t drop it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Liking the novel so far. It’s nice seeing an OP MC who is just chilling out and figuring out his life. It’s oretty clear who the FML is, but I can see there might be one or two more in the future. Not opposed to more, but please keep it limited.
If your other book was that good I am pretty sure this one will be, we are in good hands ladies and gentlemen very good hands 😉 its a joke or is it
Written as a story to pass the time, I wondered how Twilight and Harry Potter would meld well in a world of my own design. Story is AU, with changes happening everywhere, but it's fun to write. Hope you enjoy it!