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Well, I really like the story. But this issue of a very extensive harem always displeases me, only the type where 2 is the maximum, but the rest of the story is very pleasant and the relationship between Mc and Sasuke is cool.
Quite enjoyable so far, really like the way the MC becomes friends with sasuke without doing the cringe handholding some fanfics do with the protagonists. I also like the system, it’s very overpowered but the MC has to do some interesting maneuvers to get the most out of it and have a reasonable explanation for his strength. Also, the translation is excellent quality. The harem interactions are the worst part of the story, original author thinks women are objects and thinks mistreating the harem is a flex.
A good enough story to pass the time. Аn interesting fanfic that doesn't spend a lot of time on unnecessary moments. Mostly a good story. Hope you like it.
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Sometimes the writing gets confusing, it also has Chinese elements and Chinese novel behaviors. I like it but there will probably be people who don't like it. The development of the story is good, it really doesn't drag on and the protagonist makes a point of taking advantage of the opportunities to be lazy. character designer is terrible, there is no good description of him or a photo.
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roan is generally nice. But it has a huge flaw, there is a harem inside and there is no #harem in the novel. So I started reading the novel, and of course it was disappointing.
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Well, I really like the story. But this issue of a very extensive harem always displeases me, only the type where 2 is the maximum, but the rest of the story is very pleasant and the relationship between Mc and Sasuke is cool.
Quite enjoyable so far, really like the way the MC becomes friends with sasuke without doing the cringe handholding some fanfics do with the protagonists. I also like the system, it’s very overpowered but the MC has to do some interesting maneuvers to get the most out of it and have a reasonable explanation for his strength. Also, the translation is excellent quality. The harem interactions are the worst part of the story, original author thinks women are objects and thinks mistreating the harem is a flex.
A good enough story to pass the time. Аn interesting fanfic that doesn't spend a lot of time on unnecessary moments. Mostly a good story. Hope you like it.
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Sometimes the writing gets confusing, it also has Chinese elements and Chinese novel behaviors. I like it but there will probably be people who don't like it. The development of the story is good, it really doesn't drag on and the protagonist makes a point of taking advantage of the opportunities to be lazy. character designer is terrible, there is no good description of him or a photo.
Please update nice chapter Thanks for update good story [img=nervous][img=recommend]
roan is generally nice. But it has a huge flaw, there is a harem inside and there is no #harem in the novel. So I started reading the novel, and of course it was disappointing.
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harem members ?.........................