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Author here, shamelessly giving my book a five star review 🤭 This book just started but I Feel it's going really great. I'll try to make it the best I can do please support me and let the magic flow. 🫶🫶🫶🫶
The progress of the story is good, neither too fast nor too slow, the characters are also good, they have their own problems as well which is good for their character development.
I have completed a few chapters and I think this is interesting . Looking forward to read the rest of the story ☺️
First of all I LOVE BL (uwu)...and i love the story description & for sure read this book from today 😀🤩....Keep it up author 💜
Really liking this book. It has a lot of potential and so far, it has a good development. Can't wait for more updates!
🤔 hmmm great background settings, well thought out progression of the story as well as transition of the plot.
the story is quite amazing I am looking forward to see how the twins are going to subdue the foolish and stubborn shou and to have a detailed flashback on that past event and see whether he only wounded the father or if he killed him while defending himself
Six chapters in and I'm liking it so far i look forward to seeing the development of the characters and plot. Also there isn't any description of our MC like image unlike the others i would like to see what he looks like
I've never done a review before so . . . 😅 Just started reading this, and I can already tell that I am going to become addicted! I love the idea and the potential that this story has! 🥰🥰🥰 I haven't given it 5 stars even though I want to since it's just started, and I don't know much about the characters and world yet, so I'll come back and edit this once there's more chapters. But so far, AMAZING start! Definitely give this a chance!
author I'm so happy that you are finally bring it another new novel but my only problem is that please can you make the update be fast. and thank you very much for this wonderful book. and those that have not reading this book please come and check it out it's very wonderful
Author here, shamelessly giving my book a five star review 🤭 This book just started but I Feel it's going really great. I'll try to make it the best I can do please support me and let the magic flow. 🫶🫶🫶🫶
The progress of the story is good, neither too fast nor too slow, the characters are also good, they have their own problems as well which is good for their character development.
I have completed a few chapters and I think this is interesting . Looking forward to read the rest of the story ☺️
First of all I LOVE BL (uwu)...and i love the story description & for sure read this book from today 😀🤩....Keep it up author 💜
Really liking this book. It has a lot of potential and so far, it has a good development. Can't wait for more updates!
🤔 hmmm great background settings, well thought out progression of the story as well as transition of the plot.
the story is quite amazing I am looking forward to see how the twins are going to subdue the foolish and stubborn shou and to have a detailed flashback on that past event and see whether he only wounded the father or if he killed him while defending himself
Six chapters in and I'm liking it so far i look forward to seeing the development of the characters and plot. Also there isn't any description of our MC like image unlike the others i would like to see what he looks like
I've never done a review before so . . . 😅 Just started reading this, and I can already tell that I am going to become addicted! I love the idea and the potential that this story has! 🥰🥰🥰 I haven't given it 5 stars even though I want to since it's just started, and I don't know much about the characters and world yet, so I'll come back and edit this once there's more chapters. But so far, AMAZING start! Definitely give this a chance!
author I'm so happy that you are finally bring it another new novel but my only problem is that please can you make the update be fast. and thank you very much for this wonderful book. and those that have not reading this book please come and check it out it's very wonderful