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First impressions starts strong. Although getting injured and working to recovery is already a familiar theme, the writing expounds more on the emotional tones rather than relying solely on sheer will typical in shounen writing. Likewise, the sports itself is different from the usual, never heard of flag football before. Can't wait to see how it will all play out.
I've read a few of the author's works, and they were all awesome! I'm really expecting this new one to be just as great. 🥰
Eyyy 🤙🏻 A new book by Senpai daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~
Really, right in front of my pancit canton? A sports genre anime written by Senpai? First chapters have good pacing. It has a nice start and good character development. Looking forward to more chapters, author-san.
I have returned from the grave once again. I, Sabito, will leave a fair review. Honestly, I like swordsmanship more than football, but this is good too. Yeah.
I have been summoned once again. As a friend, it is in my best intention to leave a review. Honestly, the prologue was really good, and it seemed like this got the inspiration from other animes in the sports genre. Definitely worth the read, especially since MC is striving to let go of the past. The title is good too, it's like an end that is ultimately the beginning. It would be nice to see some backstory from the MC when he was a star player... but I'm sure that will happen in later chapters ahah. In any case, I rate this novel a shield/shield. Also, second season sucks in my anime, just saying it out there.
Eyo~ everyone! DaisukiDayoSenpai here, bringing you my first-ever sports novel on this platform. Some key things to note, 1. This novel focuses on the MC's story at the start, so it will be a little slow, but once he rides the wind, the story's pace will get a boost. 2. As it's my first time writing a sports novel, I'm just glad that you're checking this out. I've been a fan of football and flag football for who knows how long now, and bringing you a new sports in the already-saturated place of sports novel is my pleasure. 3. No superpowers, no harem, and no violence. But there will be drama, and your usual power of friendship. 4. There will be special moves here, so expect some Kuroko or Haikyuu vibes! That said, I'll do my best to write this novel as detailed as I could. Thank you so much for all of your support. If you have anything to call out or compliment, feel free to leave a review, a comment, and gimme power stones, those are always appreciated hehe. That's it for now. Enjoy the read >///<
After writing a hundred chapters, as an author, let me write an update review. First chapters start off slow, with our MC having an existential crisis, and then it would shoot from there. Then we dive into the game of flag football, certain strats and plays that I got based on experience and also after researching lots, and I mean lots, of flag football teams. It's really fun, writing about a sport that I'm passionate about. AND ALSO! Fun fact, flag football is actually going to be in the next Olympics so I'm looking forward to it! In any case, if you're a fan of Haikyuu, Slam Dunk, Kuroko, Blue Lock, and Run With The Wind, I'd say read this. I will tell you, it won't disappoint! And I have the entire storyline written down for this so best believe there would always be updates! And after two weeks of writing, it's got a contract and is now going premium, so don't miss out! I'm just stoked that I'm finally writing a sports light novel after years and years of writing fantasy. Have fun reading! Don't forget to show your support via reviews, comments, and power stones. Glad to be on board with you here, dear readers ^0^
First impressions starts strong. Although getting injured and working to recovery is already a familiar theme, the writing expounds more on the emotional tones rather than relying solely on sheer will typical in shounen writing. Likewise, the sports itself is different from the usual, never heard of flag football before. Can't wait to see how it will all play out.
I've read a few of the author's works, and they were all awesome! I'm really expecting this new one to be just as great. 🥰
Eyyy 🤙🏻 A new book by Senpai daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~ daddy chill ~
Really, right in front of my pancit canton? A sports genre anime written by Senpai? First chapters have good pacing. It has a nice start and good character development. Looking forward to more chapters, author-san.
I have returned from the grave once again. I, Sabito, will leave a fair review. Honestly, I like swordsmanship more than football, but this is good too. Yeah.
I have been summoned once again. As a friend, it is in my best intention to leave a review. Honestly, the prologue was really good, and it seemed like this got the inspiration from other animes in the sports genre. Definitely worth the read, especially since MC is striving to let go of the past. The title is good too, it's like an end that is ultimately the beginning. It would be nice to see some backstory from the MC when he was a star player... but I'm sure that will happen in later chapters ahah. In any case, I rate this novel a shield/shield. Also, second season sucks in my anime, just saying it out there.
Eyo~ everyone! DaisukiDayoSenpai here, bringing you my first-ever sports novel on this platform. Some key things to note, 1. This novel focuses on the MC's story at the start, so it will be a little slow, but once he rides the wind, the story's pace will get a boost. 2. As it's my first time writing a sports novel, I'm just glad that you're checking this out. I've been a fan of football and flag football for who knows how long now, and bringing you a new sports in the already-saturated place of sports novel is my pleasure. 3. No superpowers, no harem, and no violence. But there will be drama, and your usual power of friendship. 4. There will be special moves here, so expect some Kuroko or Haikyuu vibes! That said, I'll do my best to write this novel as detailed as I could. Thank you so much for all of your support. If you have anything to call out or compliment, feel free to leave a review, a comment, and gimme power stones, those are always appreciated hehe. That's it for now. Enjoy the read >///<
After writing a hundred chapters, as an author, let me write an update review. First chapters start off slow, with our MC having an existential crisis, and then it would shoot from there. Then we dive into the game of flag football, certain strats and plays that I got based on experience and also after researching lots, and I mean lots, of flag football teams. It's really fun, writing about a sport that I'm passionate about. AND ALSO! Fun fact, flag football is actually going to be in the next Olympics so I'm looking forward to it! In any case, if you're a fan of Haikyuu, Slam Dunk, Kuroko, Blue Lock, and Run With The Wind, I'd say read this. I will tell you, it won't disappoint! And I have the entire storyline written down for this so best believe there would always be updates! And after two weeks of writing, it's got a contract and is now going premium, so don't miss out! I'm just stoked that I'm finally writing a sports light novel after years and years of writing fantasy. Have fun reading! Don't forget to show your support via reviews, comments, and power stones. Glad to be on board with you here, dear readers ^0^