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What a good stat bro I hope he have relationship with Medusa because Medusa is not a vase not like xuner in original she ducking vase heroine
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Nice story author san . Please keep on going . The real deal is , it is very realistic unlike all the other nobel on the webnovel . I appreciate it , please don't drop it .
wish that'll be harem Females: Xiao Yixian, Yun Yun, Medusa, Nalan Yanran (slave)
The story seems intresting , but only if he maintains it and do not drop it in midway .
The story is good for the time being , but if if I feel wrong , I will change the review . But by the way you idea is quit good.... now it would be i treating to see , how he does things without Yao lao's help .
My story , no reason but a full five star...................................................................... .................................................................thank u for your support , keep on reading .
What a good stat bro I hope he have relationship with Medusa because Medusa is not a vase not like xuner in original she ducking vase heroine
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Nice story author san . Please keep on going . The real deal is , it is very realistic unlike all the other nobel on the webnovel . I appreciate it , please don't drop it .
wish that'll be harem Females: Xiao Yixian, Yun Yun, Medusa, Nalan Yanran (slave)
The story seems intresting , but only if he maintains it and do not drop it in midway .
The story is good for the time being , but if if I feel wrong , I will change the review . But by the way you idea is quit good.... now it would be i treating to see , how he does things without Yao lao's help .
My story , no reason but a full five star...................................................................... .................................................................thank u for your support , keep on reading .