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- 寫作品質
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- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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This looks interesting, didn't read it but I'll be back once it has more chapters, keep it up author, hope it doesn't get dropped.
Always interested in good football novels. But I hope you'll explain some things in more details, like system workings, he's heading, shooting and assisting goals, but I didn't know he was good at those etc. and matches will be more realistic, not a one man army show. If it was like that then L.Messi would have scored hat tricks in every match, won every match/tournament.
This looks interesting, didn't read it but I'll be back once it has more chapters, keep it up author, hope it doesn't get dropped.
Always interested in good football novels. But I hope you'll explain some things in more details, like system workings, he's heading, shooting and assisting goals, but I didn't know he was good at those etc. and matches will be more realistic, not a one man army show. If it was like that then L.Messi would have scored hat tricks in every match, won every match/tournament.