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Would love the next universes to maybe be star wars, RWBY, Doom, starship troopers,naruto, or Call of duty where they could maybe meet ATLAS pmc or whatever it was called. Otherwise story is going great. Hope it stays with no romance. I dont know a lot about the background/lore of the other worlds so I cant tell you if it's accurate.
It's a good book I like it very much please continue with the translation and if you can correct the names of the characters you get a little annoying.
Good fanfic with nice world building and good update stability, the plot advances nicely without taking too long or going too fast in my opinion. Overall good read would recommend.
Muy buena serie que lleve un ritmo aceptable, además me gusta que el tiempo que se toma en los diferentes mundos, lain perder demasiados capitulos en cada arco, lo único diría que le falta en las relaciones del mc
no point in reading this ...in 16 chapters there was only ~5 chapters that has new content ...in the rest if the content its the same things repeated again and again....
Muito bom mesmo, bom mesmo................................................................................... ....... ........... ...... .......... ...................................................................
Certified banger fr.. Only thing that annoys me is how sometimes the names of the primarchs are wrong. Either have them take up new names or keep their og names and stick to them.
shows some potential but it is not currently long enough for a more detailed review
the name of the company and the mc are different "atlas name is not explained" the first name of the mc is also ridiculous. the voice in his head is not pleasant already that a controlling system is annoying there it is worse. finally the elements of other worlds are poorly exploited, resident evil, red dead redemption2 just a character name mentioned quickly then nothing. even the means of going to another universe is shaky, in short nothing is right.
I like it not going to lie at first I was very annoyed by the wrong grammar and atrocious wrong spelling of the primarch's but over time the writing quality got better though I can still see some wrong spellings here and there but overall it's slowly getting better I definitely recommend this
Would love the next universes to maybe be star wars, RWBY, Doom, starship troopers,naruto, or Call of duty where they could maybe meet ATLAS pmc or whatever it was called. Otherwise story is going great. Hope it stays with no romance. I dont know a lot about the background/lore of the other worlds so I cant tell you if it's accurate.
It's a good book I like it very much please continue with the translation and if you can correct the names of the characters you get a little annoying.
Good fanfic with nice world building and good update stability, the plot advances nicely without taking too long or going too fast in my opinion. Overall good read would recommend.
Muy buena serie que lleve un ritmo aceptable, además me gusta que el tiempo que se toma en los diferentes mundos, lain perder demasiados capitulos en cada arco, lo único diría que le falta en las relaciones del mc
no point in reading this ...in 16 chapters there was only ~5 chapters that has new content ...in the rest if the content its the same things repeated again and again....
Muito bom mesmo, bom mesmo................................................................................... ....... ........... ...... .......... ...................................................................
Certified banger fr.. Only thing that annoys me is how sometimes the names of the primarchs are wrong. Either have them take up new names or keep their og names and stick to them.
shows some potential but it is not currently long enough for a more detailed review
the name of the company and the mc are different "atlas name is not explained" the first name of the mc is also ridiculous. the voice in his head is not pleasant already that a controlling system is annoying there it is worse. finally the elements of other worlds are poorly exploited, resident evil, red dead redemption2 just a character name mentioned quickly then nothing. even the means of going to another universe is shaky, in short nothing is right.
I like it not going to lie at first I was very annoyed by the wrong grammar and atrocious wrong spelling of the primarch's but over time the writing quality got better though I can still see some wrong spellings here and there but overall it's slowly getting better I definitely recommend this