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i loved it, had tears, was fully immersed in the story and came to the latest chapter with great regret realising that now I have to wait for new chapters to be posted. all i can say as a review for the current chapter at 40, is that it is an amazing read but also unwill be left for yearning more and more and sadly you have to wait. thank you to the author for this fiction
I thought it was good at first, but slowly Harry is becoming more and more pathetic to me. It just feels like he has no backbone and is portrayed as a weak sissy. It makes sense in the beginning but slowly it has become too much. The story is also becoming a bit repetitive with how thing are going right now. I won't spoil it but, it just feels like bad thing happen, Harry cry, everyone pity Harry, fleur get mad... it's getting a bit annoying since it makes Harry look pathetic.
dark Dumbledore, but it's so well crafted and written that it draws you in. the dynamic of how fluer and harry are brought together is amazing. it will have you on their side easily.
real good story, i highly reccomend you read it, the author just knows how to pull at your heartstrings
This story is very well written. You can completely empathize with the emotions Harry is feeling. It is one of my favorite fan fictions of Harry Potter. I am curious how it ends.
i loved it, had tears, was fully immersed in the story and came to the latest chapter with great regret realising that now I have to wait for new chapters to be posted. all i can say as a review for the current chapter at 40, is that it is an amazing read but also unwill be left for yearning more and more and sadly you have to wait. thank you to the author for this fiction
I thought it was good at first, but slowly Harry is becoming more and more pathetic to me. It just feels like he has no backbone and is portrayed as a weak sissy. It makes sense in the beginning but slowly it has become too much. The story is also becoming a bit repetitive with how thing are going right now. I won't spoil it but, it just feels like bad thing happen, Harry cry, everyone pity Harry, fleur get mad... it's getting a bit annoying since it makes Harry look pathetic.
dark Dumbledore, but it's so well crafted and written that it draws you in. the dynamic of how fluer and harry are brought together is amazing. it will have you on their side easily.
real good story, i highly reccomend you read it, the author just knows how to pull at your heartstrings
This story is very well written. You can completely empathize with the emotions Harry is feeling. It is one of my favorite fan fictions of Harry Potter. I am curious how it ends.