Ashen Dragon

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The Red Dragon came from the vast wild wastes, coveting all the strength in the world. It once had countless titles: Mountain's Wrathful Flame, Infernal Calamity, Crimson Emperor, Ashen Dragon......
The world trembled under the shadow of the giant dragons. He stirred up the craze of the magic industrial revolution; in the empire he established, Wyverns roared, artillery fired in unison, and steel beasts appeared in the sky and on the land, while disasters from another world rampaged everywhere.
"Submit, or die."
Cassius spread his wings, blotting out the sun, and gazed down at the trembling humans, elves, and dwarves below, saying thus.
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It is a story about a Red Dragon with a player template conquering, ruling, and transforming an alternate world.
(Pseudo of DnD, The Fourth Calamity, Red Dragon)

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Nate_Lane_7757

I liked it worth the read. I didn’t think I would like the addition of players, but he pulled it off. I would be interested to find out if this is a real world with players coming into it or if the MC is a AI designed to think he was reincarnated

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Dezzz_Nuts

So far I like the story, it’s just that the translation quality just suddenly dropped and at this point it’s getting kinda annoying. Don’t let that discourage you if you like different race POV tho, like I said it’s very nice so far.

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TDz

Translation quality is bad, it feels like author didn't edit it at all, I seen better translation quality in fanfiction story's, fix this then this novel could be great.

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Pragmatico

Read what was free. So far the story is progressing slowly but steady. Grammar needs to be worked on in places. Also some references are connecting with me, guessing they are cultural references. I like dnd so that concept is what made me read to begin with. The world background needs to be added upon. We don’t know where the mc is in the world what is around them in what directions. Also never specified disturbances. Hope this translation works out for you but not for me.

1mth

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unfinished_senten

"Great read! The story kept me interested, and the pacing was just right. The characters felt relatable, and I found myself wanting to know what happens next. Keep up the good work!"

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