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69.44% As A GAMER In One Piece / Chapter 23: CH-23 - JUMP PIECE - I

章節 23: CH-23 - JUMP PIECE - I

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[PREVIOUSLY ON GAMER PIECE]

"A plan huh?" Zephyr slowly drops all of his 'passengers' to the ground softly. He then looks at Us, most particularly me.

"You know, I didn't expect you having Observation Haki-"

I 'teleport', Speed-blitz him by shoving a Fully charged Spirit Energy Bolt

*BOOM*

Right in his face. he did NOT expect that, and so, i capitalize on the small opening to 'disappear' once more, appearing with another Spirit Energy Bolt and-

*BOOM*

ramming it straight into his back, Zephyr stumbles forward, and this is the signal that the others were waiting, Robin uses her powers to make dozens of limbs and hold Zephyr in place, just for a few seconds as-

Wyper fires his White-blue like flames straight from his Burn Bazooka, ramming itself On Zephyr's chest, going like a beam. Sanji, AND Zoro rush towards Zephyr, with Zoro using three sword's style. As they reach Zephyr, Sanji shoves a Mouton Shot straight at Zephyr's face, while Zoro shoots a Pound Phoenix at close Range-

"GUMU GUMU NO- GIGANT GIANT AXE!" Luffy inflates his Leg and brings it down from the sky, aiming to send Zephyr straight into the ground. the Attack lands, shaking the entire Upper Yard as a resounding thud is heard. All of us look over, and I warn them.

"it isn't over yet." Since I have my Observation Haki On the entire fight, I know that Zephyr has activated it too and has raised his robotic arm to block the giant Kick of Luffy. I get a little annoyed, since this is not what I wanted initially.

we made three plans regarding the situation, One was Attacking Zephyr and distracting him enough to where i am able to bring the beaten up people to the Instant dungeon, but if that isn't possible as Zephyr is having a good hold of them similar to him doing it now, then plan Two was to fight Zephyr until we remove whatever bindings that are connected to them. And Option Three is using the same method that I used against Enel, which I am not sure IF it is gonna work at all, since I am pretty sure that Zephyr 'sensed' me having a close interaction with Enel and disappeared with him, coming back without him.

"Well, that was some power." The dust clears, With Zephyr holding Onto Luffy's Giant Leg with his mechanic arm. the wires that are from the mechanical arm which is attached to the others are extending, meaning that even sufficient distance from Zephyr and the others will not give us an opportunity to free them until we remove the mechanical arm as-

BATTLE SMASHER

Durability - ???

Battle Smasher is a Giant Mechanical arm that is made using SeaStone. It has a big cannon and a machine gun turret inside of it. It is as hard as diamond. It can also generate explosions.

Chopper, seeing an opportunity, eats a rumble ball, the newer version that enhances his transformations to where he can maintain it for 10 minutes, and also increases his strength drastically. He rushes towards Zephyr with his hooves pointing forward-

"Kokutei Cross-" he colldies his hooves with Zephyr with a great impact, and through observation Haki, i can feel that the damage he gave is similar to Zoro's Pound Cannon, making Chopper be equal to the top tiers of the crew due to the advancement of the rumble ball after using the horns that i precured from the animal island-

i take this opportunity to 'teleport' near Zephyr's head, shoving a Spirit Energy Bolt-

And he ducks, letting me pass through. I looked at him in shock, and before I could formulate a thought, he raised his spear hand and grabbed me by the throat, hanging me. i try to resist, while trying to think how-

SHIT! HE HAS FUTURE SIGHT-

"You know, your devil fruit is intriguing, since without Future sight, no one in this world would be able to react to your insane speed. like, you pop up into existence in a second and then disappear in another-"

arms start sprouting IN THE arm that Zephyr is holding me in, but, somehow, i feel Zephyr...Manifest his will around his hand like some kind of armor, and the arms dissolve-

"hmm, so Nico Robin is part of your-"

"GUMU GUMU NO - GIGANT PISTOL" Luffy transfers the air from his leg to his arms and throws a giant punch, but Zephyr Jumps up high in the air, still holding me. Luffy looks up at Zephyr in anger, but Zoro, Sanji, Chopper all jump high up in the air, Zoro using his phoenix cannon as support while Sanji and Chopper try to hit Zephyr with everything they got.

from behind, Wyper fires consecutive Burn Blasts, firing a beam of Flames straight at Me and Zephyr, mostly Zephyr. with all of this coming towards him, Zephyr turns his body upside down and then kicks-

the air, sending him flying to the ground where-

SHIT- i summon a Mana Shield but-

*BOOM*

"u-ugh!" I groan in pain, fighting unconsciousness as I have just been slammed into the ground by Zephyr. My HP reduces by a lot, and i cannot stand anymore since the HP bar becomes Red, meaning that i have-

shit, i am losing consciousness-

....

I jerk awake, hearing booming sounds. I groan, seeing my HP low. Thankfully, my brain is still working properly, so I open my inventory and take out a potion, a Medium grade health potion, that restores 50% of the total HP. I activated my Observation Haki, realizing that things have gone south.

Robin and Wyper have been knocked out, and Wyper's Burn bazooka has been destroyed. I teleport to Wiper, having an idea on how to change the tides.

Chopper Rushes Zephyr using his Horn Point, and Zephyr shoots an explosion towards Chopper, Zoro comes in between, Using Tatsumaki to deflect the explosion but he has to use his full power while doing so, Chopper jumps over Zoro and Comes in Contact With a First from Zephyr-

Who sends him flying-

I come in and grab Chopper, 'teleporting' him, Luffy rushes at Zephyr who shoots Bullets from his Arm, and Luffy tanks it, with Sanji taking cover behind Luffy and Jumping upwards and coming to the ground right at Zephyr's head. Zephyr coats his hand with armament Haki and throws a punch-

Before I appear in front of him and push my hand in front of him. His hand collides with mine, but the impact doesn't send me backwards, Zephyr doesn't have time to think much about it, as he jumps up into the air as he looks into the future to See Chopper appearing from the ground.

Zephyr Uses his Mechanical Arm to Send Some wires towards a Giant fist coming towards him, tying it and making Luffy weak. I appear in front of him in the Sky, and Zephyr Literally moves his body in the air, my hand going on the side of his head-

*BOOM*

I Use the reject dial, gritting my teeth as my arm shakes due to the force sent back at me, causing me to get sent back just before Zephyr could Get a hold of me. Zephyr looks down, using Sky walk to kick the air and send himself straight to the ground at Zoro-

Before twisting his body mid-air and kicking the side, sending him towards the path where Zoro is gonna jump towards. Zoro, who has already removed his feet from the ground can do nothing as He sees a Gigantic Mechanical Arm coming in front of his face-

Before it stops and Zephyr puts his Mechanical arm to the side, a second Later, Sanji's Mouton Shot and Luffy's Gum Gum Rifle hits it. Zephyr, still in the air, grabs onto Luffy's outstretched arm with his normal hand and then opens his Mechanical Arm, releasing-

"Smash Buster-"

*BOOM*

Zephyr fires a big bullet at point blank range, which causes a huge explosion. Zoro and Sanji get caught in it due to being too close to the blast, and Luffy has his hand injured due to being near the explosion.

Luffy de-stretches his arm back and holds it in pain, but he looks towards the Smoke which dissolves. He looks at Sanji and Zoro Knocked out, Zephyr standing relatively unharmed, Pissing him off.

"GUMU GUMU NO- GIGANT GATLING-" Luffy breathes Air into both His arms, enlarging it to a giant size, and throwing a punch with right hand, With Zephyr dodges a second early, before Kicking up in the air to dodge a second late Left Hand coming for him. Luffy raises his hands to the air to hit Zephyr.

Zephyr kicks the air a second early to dodge all the punches, and after dodging the 5th punch, he decides to go for the hit, before Kicking the air and dodging the 6th Punch and going straight for Luffy. Zephyr spins, trying to land a kick straight at Luffy's head-

Before Stopping, as a second Later I arrive, Grabbing Luffy. Zephyr just raises an eyebrow before Infusing his leg with Armament Haki and ramming it straight at my head, too fast for me to react-

And this gets me off the ground, with Zephyr angling it such a way that I collide with Luffy's head, letting Zephyr kick us both in the same time, rattling my brain and sending me flying along with Luffy, Who exhales all the air he put in his arms, making him be propelled much faster and crash into many trees.

'he grows from every confrontation-' Zephyr throws a jab laced with Armament Haki at the incoming Chopper, hitting him straight in the jaw-

*CRUNCH*

Zephyr raises his eyebrows looking at Chopper flying, seeing him biting something. Although he doesn't know this, this is his 3rd time.

I drink 2 more potions, bringing myself back to full strength. I come inside the ID and try to think of a plan. Reject dial was a failure, and Zephyr is too fast for me to get Luffy. And from what I sensed just a couple of seconds ago before I came into the ID, it's gonna get even worse.

Zoro and Sanji are out, since I took them (along with Robin, Wyper AND Aisa) into my ID, where Aisa is trying to patch them with the toolkit I gave her. I can't even try to store the Battle Smasher since it is connected To Zephyr, and Unless someone has an item connected to any part of their body, I cannot Put that item in the inventory.

Damnit, there is no way to free Nami, Usopp, Bentham and the Shandians like Laki, etc without destroying the battle Smasher, which cannot be done as it is made of seastone-

Wait, destroy? I look at My stats-

Name:- Rai Adam

Job:- The Gamer

Gender:- Male

Level:- 19 (EXP:- 199,723,400/209,715,200)

Title:- THE -STRATEGIZER- OF THE STRAWHAT PIRATES

Perk:- SMALL TIME REGENERATION, ANCIENT SCRIPT, GENIUS TRAIT

HP:- 1520

MP:- 5,700 (3000)

STR:- 104

VIT (HP):- 80

DEX (AGI):- 50

INT:-141 (74)

WIS:-135 (71)

LUK:-20

Stat Points:- 0

A person who was orphaned during his young age, Rai Adam has always worked hard to sustain himself independently. his job however, is not to his satisfaction, and due to this, he watches Movies and Anime to take his mind of his bad days. he Dies in his sleep and is Summoned by #@!#$#@ and sent to a different world.

'Inventory' knowing that I have gained many skill books, especially one in particular that could be useful.

WOULD YOU LIKE TO ABSORB THIS BOOK-

'yes!' after clicking it, it goes into particles and gets absorbed into me. With all the skill books absorbed, I decided to check my skills.

1)GAMER'S MIND -PASSIVE- (MAX)

2)GAMER'S BODY -PASSIVE- (MAX)

3)OBSERVE -ACTIVE- (Lv22) (EXP- 91.1%)

4)SAND WALKING -PASSIVE- (Lv23) (EXP- 7.6%)

5)DIGGING -ACTIVE- (Lv32) ( EXP:- 0.2%)

6)BULLSHITTING -PASSIVE- (Lv32) (EXP:-6.7%)

7) MULTI-TASKING -PASSIVE- (Lv25) (EXP-8.9%)

8) BLUNT WEAPON MASTERY - ACTIVE- (Lv21) (EXP - 8.8%)

->SHOVEL STYLE - ACTIVE - (Lv5) (EXP - 4%)

9)PHYSICAL ENDURANCE -PASSIVE - (Lv30) (EXP - 7.2%)

10) THROWING -ACTIVE- (Lv7) (EXP -98%)

11)CREATE INSTANT DUNGEON - ACTIVE - (Lv30) (EXP - 2.2%)

12)ESCAPE INSTANT DUNGEON - ACTIVE - (Lv30) (EXP - 2.2%)

13)HEAT RESISTANCE - PASSIVE - (Lv5) (EXP - 7.7%)

14)ACTING - ACTIVE - (Lv20) (EXP-88.9%)

15)STEALING - ACTIVE - (Lv10) (EXP - 60%)

16) SWORD MASTERY -PASSIVE- (Lv33) (EXP - 73.3%)

->ONE-SWORD STYLE (Ittōryū) - ACTIVE- (Lv15) (EXP - 2.4%)

->TWO-SWORD STYLE (Nitōryū) -ACTIVE- (Lv30) (EXP - 9.5%)

->THREE-SWORD STYLE (Santōryū) - ACTIVE - (Lv21) (EXP - 1%)

17)GUN MASTERY -PASSIVE- (Lv10) (EXP - 0%)

->DUAL- WIELDING -ACTIVE- (Lv7) (EXP -99.9%)

18)H2H COMBAT - ACTIVE / PASSIVE - (Lv14) (EXP - 5.5%)

19)ONE-MAN ARMY - ACTIVE - (Lv3) (EXP -10%)

20)COMBAT PROWESS -PASSIVE - (Lv8) (EXP - 21%)

21)DASH -ACTIVE- (Lv7) (EXP - 5%)

22)FOOTWORK -ACTIVE- (Lv21) (EXP - 3%) 23) LOW MANA AFFINITY - PASSIVE - LVMAX

24) MOUNTAIN CLIMBING - ACTIVE - (Lv6) (EXP -7%)

25) FISSURE - ACTIVE - (Lv4) (EXP - 33%)

26) SAND MANIPULATION - ACTIVE - (Lv20) (EXP - 55.6%)

->DESERT SPARDA - ACTIVE - (Lv1) (EXP - 13.5%)

->SAND ATTACK - ACTIVE - (Lv5) (EXP - 12.3%)

->DESERT SPIKE - ACTIVE- (Lv21) (EXP- 55.5%)

-> SAND COFFIN - ACTIVE - (Lv7) (EXP - 69.6%)

27) ENGINEERING - ACTIVE - (Lv 22) (EXP - 1%)

28)MEDIUM MANA CAPACITY - PASSIVE - (Lv) (EXP - 7%)

29) MANA REGENERATION - PASSIVE - (Lv4) (EXP - 7%)

30) ENERGY BOLT - ACTIVE - (Lv7) (EXP - 4.6%)

31) MANA ARROW - ACTIVE - (Lv4) (EXP - 77.7%)

32) MANA ROPE - ACTIVE - (Lv9) (EXP - 4.4%)

33)SPIRAL ENERGY BOLT - ACTIVE - (Lv4) (EXP - 1.5%)

34)EIDETIC MEMORY - PASSIVE - (Lv4) (EXP-10%)

35)SAGE'S WISDOM - PASSIVE - (MAX) 36) SWIMMING - ACTIVE - (Lv6) (EXP - 90%)

37)MANA SHIELD - ACTIVE - (Lv8) (EXP - 69%)

38)MARTIAL REINFORCEMENT - ACTIVE - (Lv3) (EXP - 3.8%)

39) BALANCED -PASSIVE- (Lv9) (EXP -6.7%)

40) ALTITUDE ADAPTATION - PASSIVE - (Lv7) (EXP-4%)

41) OBSERVATION HAKI - ACTIVE - (Lv5) (EXP-4%)

42) BEGINNER REFLEXES - ACTIVE - (Lv1) (EXP - 55%)

43) BEGINNER BEASTLY MUSCLE POWER - PASSIVE - (Lv2) (EXP - 12%)

44) LIGHTNING MANIPULATION (Lv1) - ACTIVE - (EXP- 0%)

45) ITEM DISMANTLE (Lv1) - ACTIVE - (EXP - 0%)

'With Item dismantle, i could maybe do it' i click on the skill, reading its description.

ITEM DISMANTLE (Lv1) - ACTIVE - (EXP - 0%) (Uses MP depending on the Item)

DESCRIPTION:-

The Item Dismantle skill allows the user to disassemble items into their basic components, such as raw materials or parts. These components can then be used for crafting, upgrading, or selling. The success and efficiency of the dismantling process depend on the user's skill level and the item's complexity. The higher the level, the less Mana is needed.

This is one cheat skill if used properly. If i could combine it with my inventory, where i can hold someone's weapon and dismantle it, immediately storing the dismantled parts. This could also work against Zephyr's Battle smasher, but I don't wanna go unprepared, so I decided to experiment on it.

'i'm sorry Luffy' last i left him, he was gonna crash into some trees, but this is for our success, so i do apologize. I Open my inventory to decide on what ITEM to dismantle, but looking at the golden Bell, I decide to dismantle that itself. i summon the bell, and after touching it, a window pops up-

THIS ITEM CAN BE DISMANTLED, WOULD YOU LIKE TO DISMANTLE IT? (MP - 60,000)

ACCEPT(Y) / DECLINE (N)

'60,000 MP? I don't even have that.!' i put the bell back into my inventory without any question, but it bega an issue, if gold was this much MP, then what about Seastone, which is as hard as a diamond? the plan is a dud now. i try to come up with a plan which could allow all o us to escape safely. i am annoyed at the situation, like, why the fuck is Zephyr even here in the first place?

I opened my quest tab, opening a new quest I got some time ago.

HIDDEN QUEST

ZEPHYR THE VICE ADMIRAL

DESCRIPTION:-

"Black Arm" Zephyr is the Vice Admiral that came back from Retirement. he is here to get back into shape, figure out how to deal with this.

Rewards:-

??? - ???

??? - ???

??? - ???

Failure:- Capture, Possible Death.

like, what is wrong with the rewards? Why are there question marks in it? i sigh, this is similar to the question marks that are in the legendary quest of The strawhats Pirates one i got when i joined the crew. I scratch my head, noticing how it said Vice Admiral, and coming back from retirement. This never happened in the story, as Zephyr was still in retirement until leaving. 

plus, he is here to "get back into Shape" meaning, this is an exercise battle for him. This is also supported with the failure, he isn't here to kill us, but just to get back into shape while also capturing us. But, what made him come out of retirement? Is my butterfly effect this huge? It doesn't make sense.

I try to make sense of it, but I just CANNOT understand why the hell Zephyr came out of retirement. After a couple of minutes of trying to figure out why, I gave up. no point in needlessly thinking about it since it is not gonna help us anyways. Now, Chopper, Me and Luffy are the only combatants left, and-

Wait....Luffy-

I Grin, having a crazy, but possible idea. I got up and rushed towards the Merry that I was stationed here in the dungeon, so that Aisa could have someplace to treat the injured. I get on the ship, seeing Aisa and Merry working together to treat the unconscious people.

"How are they?" I ask both of them while going into Chopper's room once more to grab something that is in a container. Chopper kept this here since it isn't perfected yet, it is a prototype. 

"they are recovering, that thing that you gave us was incredible, most of their wounds healed super fast." Merry gives the report, clutching the Potion I gave her. I gave Merry and Aisa all of my Lower Grade Potions, so that they could use it to heal all the injured. we need them anyways.

"good, i'll be back." I jumped off the ship, landed to the ground and through my memory, ran towards where Luffy was supposed to be. I come out of the dungeon, grabbing the arm of the flying Luffy and then coming back into the dungeon where I let him go, his limbs reattaching itself and him crashing into even more trees.

he eventually stops, and i reach him, opening my Last Medium Rare Potion. now, where did i get this, well-

nevermind, you guys will see that in the next chapter anyways.

Luffy pops back up, looking around for Zephyr, and seeing me relaxed, he realizes where we are, and collapses to the ground, being exhausted. his body shrinks, making it small. I give him a Low grade Stamina Potion, finally letting him sit uptight and look at me in wonder.

"woah, what is that?" He feels some of his stamina come back to him. but, he still is in his shrunken state. I shrug, not really in the mood to give him answers.

"Now Luffy, I have an idea on how to defeat Zephyr." Well, defeat is a big word, since what I am even gonna do is mostly getting us a chance to escape from this place, but Luffy wouldn't agree to this IF I put it in my way, i gotta put it in his way.

"what is it?" i don't answer him, but just pop out the case with The prototype. Luffy looks at it in confusion.

"wha-" before realizing that He knows what this is, since he remembers it when he was doing some kind of Experiment with Chopper where Chopper took his blood and stuff like that.

"wait, that is-" 

"Yeah, this is our ONLY option right now. I tried to think of something, but Nothing came up!" i look at him with a sigh, which helps communicate my intentions to him. he stares at the case, then back at me-

"I Don't like this. Is there No other way?" Luffy looks at me, and I deny it. While I could explain to Luffy how his gear 2 Works, it wouldn't do shit since this Luffy is a much weaker one than the luffy who fought Zephyr. Gear 2 wouldn't help much. so, this is the only Option.

but-

" We have no other option, so-" he sighs, grabbing the case and getting up, opening it and taking the item in it, the Rumble Ball made specifically for Luffy.

"wait-" i put my hand in his mouth when i see him trying to chug it in, he looks at me confused, and i explain that now is not the time. the timing should be perfect, and until i say so, he should not put it in his mouth. He looks confused, but nods.

"one other thing-" i put my fist on Luffy's chest, right where his heart is located. and with intent that Luffy is not able to discern, i explain something to him.

"I Don't know how it will affect you, but remember that your devil fruit is as strong as your freedom, your imagination. the power lies in your heartbeat, use it as much as possible." He looks at me, confused. Why am I randomly telling some kind of bullshit?

he shrugs, not really minding much. I explain what we need to do after we go into the real world, and while he does not like it, he accepts. He also reverts back to his normal self after some minutes. I grab onto Luffy's Shoulder and exit the dungeon. 

*RROOAARR*

an animalistic scream is heard throughout the place. I look over, sensing what is going on, and realize that Chopper went to his Monster Point. 

"What the hell is that?" Luffy starts running towards the sound, already destroying the plan that we made, but already anticipating this, I just sigh and run behind him, giving him some exposure.

"it's chopper, he ate the third rumble ball that causes.... well, whatever the roar was." i tell to Luffy, while we cross some trees and arrive where the battle is being held, and i look at it in surprise, especially At Chopper-

or whom i think is a chopper. The Monster form of Chopper looks like some kind of combination of all his forms. it's leg is as tall as the Jumping Point, the chest as wide and bulky as Heavy Point, his arms as bulky as Arm Point, he has so much fur, similar to Guard Point , and his antlers are huge as Horn Point and-

Golden? it is similar to the Creature that i stole the Horns from in the animal island, and it seems that affected Chopper too, somewhat. His hand has fingers, but they are the size and thickness of his hooves. All in all, this Chopper is built differently. so different in fact that i feel that he is even taller than his canonical Monster Form, easily twice the size as before.

*RROOAARR*

Chopper screams so loud that Me and Luffy have to cover our ears. We look over to See Chopper swinging it's arm towards Zeephyr, who dodges by bending backwards in an unusual way. though, he takes a look at us and then disappears-

grabbing us both and slamming us right in a tree, almost breaking it. Me and Luffy try to resist, but due to the Mechanical Arm holding onto Luffy, he feels weak and stops struggling. Zephyr then looks at me, opening his mouth to speak. but before that, i give the signal-

"LUFFY NOW-" my scream attacks Chopper, who turns and then rushes towards us. Zephyr looks behind, before hearing-

*CRUNCH*

Zephyr looks back at Luffy, hearing the same sound he heard when Chopper ate something. Luffy has his head down, but the Stomping finally causes Zephyr to jump upwards, still holding onto me and Luffy, he kicks the air and generates some distance between Him and Chopper.

Zephyr lands, but that's when he feels something with His Haki. i also feel it too, and both of us look at Luffy, who finally raises his hand and put it on Zephyr's mechanical arm and squeezes-

making the area where Luffy's fingers are, Squish in on itself. Me and Zephyr raise their eyes, and that's when-

"SHISHISHISHISHI-" i hear some kind of drum beating, i know immediately what it is, and Luffy raises his head to Look at Zephyr, with a wild grin plastered across his face, most importantly, his hair starts flowing, and his pupils starts spinning, eyes turning into pink. an aura envelopes Luffy, and-

THE END

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AN:- THIS CHAPTER IS PART 1 OF TWO PARTS, SO YOU GUYS CAN ENJOY THIS FIGHT. NEXT CHAPTER, THINGS ARE GONNA BE FUCKING WILD. HOPE YOU GUYS ARE READY, THOUGH, I MIGHT NEED A SMALL BREAK AS I HAVE A FEVER TODAY, SO UNTIL I GET BETTER, I WON'T BE WRITING. THANKS FOR READING.


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I actually completely forgot about the MC stealing the horns from the animal island. i had to re-write Chopper's Monster form, but i thought that it needed some kind of new upgrade, so i added all of these. i actually thought that this form was gonna be canon when Monster form was introduced, and while the OG form was cold, i feel that Chopper having a from that combines all his other forms is awesome.

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