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Eastern 37 章節 44.9K 流覽
作者: Denion

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In a slowly crumbling world of a long-dead immortal, two souls meet.

Xin is a burnout prodigy, living a solitary life as a hunter, until one day he sees his hometown levelled to the ground by a giant boar.

Lei is a street urchin, living a life of pain and abuse, forced into a criminal syndicate at a very young age.

When these two meet, they are astonished by how similar and different they are at the same time, and a troubled friendship forms.

This is a dark, slow-burning tale of resilience and transformation. In a world where grand narratives are forged, not given, and shortcuts are carved, not found, Xin and Lei embark on a relentless journey of martial arts, cultivation, and friendship, with its beautiful ups and painful downs.

Authors note: When I say dark, I mean it. This is not a power fantasy book, although it has its payoff moments, and the mcs are meant to frustrate, to a degree. I'm answering all the comments and feedback on my discord, where I post early chapters (pre-release drafts). Please come join, I really value constructive criticism https://discord.gg/Nvj7yPJr4q

Extra tags: Alchemy, Survival, Business, detailed fighting scenes, Psychological, Strong language.
Little update: Editing and refining early chapters again, as my skils have improved since then. Tell me what you think.

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Captain_Nemo_8255

Great ideas, unusual characters and plot for the genre, surprising focus on psychology and drama, creative uses of wuxing system and taoism concepts.

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asdada_sdasdas

I read all 112 chapters released in the author's discord so far. It starts a bit slow, but picks up later. I really liked it. A lot of psychology, a lot of detailed side content in many different genres, well thought out system.

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