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A different take on The Boys, not surprising, but it's pretty well written. My only issue is with the female leads and the non harem route. No matter how naive Starlight was, it's irrational for her to go out of her way to save A-train after being saved from the Deep. Plus, her's and Maeve's reaction to seeing him again was kinda forced seemingly toward a harem route but the author later decided against it. This affected the consistency of the story afterwards. Was there a need to include The Boys gang in his plans against Vought especially so directly. They contribute to literally nothing, it's like the author was like, they're a big part of the show, can't forget them. The MC's background is kinda shallow, finding his moral compass at a time unknown and then being a goody goody after reincarnation. I like The Boys show due to how realistic it is, but now, the author wants a government sanctioned supe agency. Be real, people only care about their interests, being good is an act to satisfy some vanity in self. Besides, who's to say the government especially in The Boys America isn't dirtier than in reality. Just make the MC to be OP as hell because the strongest fist rules eventually. Or a kind of slice of life, because navigating all the complexities and intricacies of the world of the boys requires some very deep thinking and planning.
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This book is really bad simply because the mc is a good person and not a villian
The thing about Maeve and Translúcido is unreal because of how exaggerated it is. The MC thing is absurd, that new identity is 💀. The last chapters seem like teenage series with powers of friendship and awkward moments due to the characters' actions. The first few chapters were a good read but these last few have been torture, good luck.
it had great potentiall but author just made it do bad after chap 15 i stood hoping it'll improve even with the nonsense of starlight meeting translucent after almost being... by the deep then author made A train all emo over something he could've solved right away and and then said i changed my mind back again no harem just awful never gonna read this trash again
another translator who does a decent job for one or two chapters, then does whatever. here it doesn't even last the first chapter, no translation effort is really made. the names of the characters are poorly translated, Chinese quotes remain...
Author gave A-train speedforce, there's zero tension now. MC is either a Dharmann sketch character one second, then a White Knight hypocrite the next. I honestly don't know which one I hate more. Updates are okay.
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J'aurais aimé mettre 4 mais il y a quand même des choses qui ne vont pas, le fait que butcher est ami avec huggy alors qu'en fait sa copine n'est pas morte c'est pas compréhensible du coup il y a pas d'explication. Et aussi le fait que il ne sait pas d'avoir une concentration avec le Hollander, ou plutôt que le homelander n'essais pas d'en avoir une avec lui censé être super fort et donc il devrait pas avoir peur de aller l'affronter. Ensuite il y a le soi-disant am ou comme l'a dit un autre tu as des persos féminin qui a réagissent bizarrement avec lui des fois froide des fois brûlante. Mais j'aime beaucoup son côté sombre, bien que j'espère juste qu'il va affronter le homelander en fait, c'est un peu bizarre actuellement aussi je vois pas l'intérêt d'avoir un laboratoire pour l'instant en tout cas
this story had a premise, and the author ruined it with maeve randomly eye docking a.train, and then horrible, horrible use of chatgpt to write full chapters. one chapter legitimate just was about sam edgar and stillwell talking, with their thoguhts projected,.. sam edgar thinking was worse than chines mtl ai young master. just horrible.
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I can say this story is good so far, but I hope the author doesn't add a harem to this story, there are already too many harem novels out there, I'm just... sick of it okay?
I feel like this author has done very well and considering there aren't many good the boys fanfic I think this one stands out among the good ones although I do think he could go over his writing or review it and make it just a little bit better it's still a very good story and I hope this author keeps up the hard work 🙂🙂🙂
Don't even bother with this story, had a good start but turns into typical Chinese harem BS real quick. One chapter Maeve is normal towards MC and the next she wants to get 'under him' cause harem BS logic. MC has a good established romance that actually works, but F all that cause harem BS logic. MC meets a random female character and says one word to her, harem. Do not waste your time with this.
I like this A-Train, his dominance, power and unafraid to change the canon. Keep up the good work, author-san.
This makes no sense. Billy wasn’t watching hughie before he died, he would not be interested in him or even know about him if robin didn’t die. He was only interested in hughie because hughie was able to get into the vought building To make this more interesting this self insert should of been after a-train killed robin. There would be more tensions and story that way. Right now it makes no sense. Billy would not be interested in hughie.
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Vekay_Legend Great Fanfic Keep doing a great job You can do this The Boys Fanfic idea directly after The Boys: The Speed Of Redemption The Boys: Oozaru A dedicated comic book and superhero fan from our world, who lived as a skilled assassin akin to John Wick, wakes up in the body of Hughie Campbell one month before the events of "The Boys" series. But something was different as he walked in front of a mirror and saw a monkey tail. Now armed with extensive knowledge of the series and his former life, he sets out to rewrite Hughie’s fate. Harem Madelyn Stillwell Ashley Barrett Popclaw Victoria Neuman Queen Maeve Donna January Starlight Becca Butcher Rachel Saunders Susan Raynor Nina Namenko aka Little Nina Nubia Nubian Stormfront Tessa Crimson Countess Indira Shetty Kayla Li Tiffany Meyer Daphne Campbell Hyperion (The Boys)
Well its well written and random plot is not being fed to us out of nowhere. On other side I would like to see more interactions with homelander , he could also have plot of saving ryan and rebecca, I see a lot of potential. But a warning for those who don't like harems , anyway I like em so no problem for me
Real Good story and Characters. I love this Fan-Fiction of the boys for now and i can't wait to Read more of this !!!! Nice job Vekay_Legend !!!!!!!!!
So far story is quite good and interesting only advice: you should change your cover each time i see that cover it feels like the novel is dropped.
Great start author san ,loved the premise of the story please don't drop 🙏 😀
Please don’t stop or make the story go haywire and please upload regularly good luck 👍
I am loving this he has speed force no one in that world would be able to touch him. Now is he going to interact with the dc verse like if a multiverse event happens there would he also be affected by it and have to team up with the Justice League that would be pretty sick and he could have the flash help him on how to use his powers better.
A different take on The Boys, not surprising, but it's pretty well written. My only issue is with the female leads and the non harem route. No matter how naive Starlight was, it's irrational for her to go out of her way to save A-train after being saved from the Deep. Plus, her's and Maeve's reaction to seeing him again was kinda forced seemingly toward a harem route but the author later decided against it. This affected the consistency of the story afterwards. Was there a need to include The Boys gang in his plans against Vought especially so directly. They contribute to literally nothing, it's like the author was like, they're a big part of the show, can't forget them. The MC's background is kinda shallow, finding his moral compass at a time unknown and then being a goody goody after reincarnation. I like The Boys show due to how realistic it is, but now, the author wants a government sanctioned supe agency. Be real, people only care about their interests, being good is an act to satisfy some vanity in self. Besides, who's to say the government especially in The Boys America isn't dirtier than in reality. Just make the MC to be OP as hell because the strongest fist rules eventually. Or a kind of slice of life, because navigating all the complexities and intricacies of the world of the boys requires some very deep thinking and planning.
揭示劇透 This book is really bad simply because the mc is a good person and not a villian
The thing about Maeve and Translúcido is unreal because of how exaggerated it is. The MC thing is absurd, that new identity is 💀. The last chapters seem like teenage series with powers of friendship and awkward moments due to the characters' actions. The first few chapters were a good read but these last few have been torture, good luck.
it had great potentiall but author just made it do bad after chap 15 i stood hoping it'll improve even with the nonsense of starlight meeting translucent after almost being... by the deep then author made A train all emo over something he could've solved right away and and then said i changed my mind back again no harem just awful never gonna read this trash again
another translator who does a decent job for one or two chapters, then does whatever. here it doesn't even last the first chapter, no translation effort is really made. the names of the characters are poorly translated, Chinese quotes remain...
Author gave A-train speedforce, there's zero tension now. MC is either a Dharmann sketch character one second, then a White Knight hypocrite the next. I honestly don't know which one I hate more. Updates are okay.
Muy buena, aunque la lea traducida (Spanish). - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - --------------- ---------- -
J'aurais aimé mettre 4 mais il y a quand même des choses qui ne vont pas, le fait que butcher est ami avec huggy alors qu'en fait sa copine n'est pas morte c'est pas compréhensible du coup il y a pas d'explication. Et aussi le fait que il ne sait pas d'avoir une concentration avec le Hollander, ou plutôt que le homelander n'essais pas d'en avoir une avec lui censé être super fort et donc il devrait pas avoir peur de aller l'affronter. Ensuite il y a le soi-disant am ou comme l'a dit un autre tu as des persos féminin qui a réagissent bizarrement avec lui des fois froide des fois brûlante. Mais j'aime beaucoup son côté sombre, bien que j'espère juste qu'il va affronter le homelander en fait, c'est un peu bizarre actuellement aussi je vois pas l'intérêt d'avoir un laboratoire pour l'instant en tout cas
this story had a premise, and the author ruined it with maeve randomly eye docking a.train, and then horrible, horrible use of chatgpt to write full chapters. one chapter legitimate just was about sam edgar and stillwell talking, with their thoguhts projected,.. sam edgar thinking was worse than chines mtl ai young master. just horrible.
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I can say this story is good so far, but I hope the author doesn't add a harem to this story, there are already too many harem novels out there, I'm just... sick of it okay?
I feel like this author has done very well and considering there aren't many good the boys fanfic I think this one stands out among the good ones although I do think he could go over his writing or review it and make it just a little bit better it's still a very good story and I hope this author keeps up the hard work 🙂🙂🙂
Don't even bother with this story, had a good start but turns into typical Chinese harem BS real quick. One chapter Maeve is normal towards MC and the next she wants to get 'under him' cause harem BS logic. MC has a good established romance that actually works, but F all that cause harem BS logic. MC meets a random female character and says one word to her, harem. Do not waste your time with this.
I like this A-Train, his dominance, power and unafraid to change the canon. Keep up the good work, author-san.
This makes no sense. Billy wasn’t watching hughie before he died, he would not be interested in him or even know about him if robin didn’t die. He was only interested in hughie because hughie was able to get into the vought building To make this more interesting this self insert should of been after a-train killed robin. There would be more tensions and story that way. Right now it makes no sense. Billy would not be interested in hughie.
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Vekay_Legend Great Fanfic Keep doing a great job You can do this The Boys Fanfic idea directly after The Boys: The Speed Of Redemption The Boys: Oozaru A dedicated comic book and superhero fan from our world, who lived as a skilled assassin akin to John Wick, wakes up in the body of Hughie Campbell one month before the events of "The Boys" series. But something was different as he walked in front of a mirror and saw a monkey tail. Now armed with extensive knowledge of the series and his former life, he sets out to rewrite Hughie’s fate. Harem Madelyn Stillwell Ashley Barrett Popclaw Victoria Neuman Queen Maeve Donna January Starlight Becca Butcher Rachel Saunders Susan Raynor Nina Namenko aka Little Nina Nubia Nubian Stormfront Tessa Crimson Countess Indira Shetty Kayla Li Tiffany Meyer Daphne Campbell Hyperion (The Boys)
Well its well written and random plot is not being fed to us out of nowhere. On other side I would like to see more interactions with homelander , he could also have plot of saving ryan and rebecca, I see a lot of potential. But a warning for those who don't like harems , anyway I like em so no problem for me
Real Good story and Characters. I love this Fan-Fiction of the boys for now and i can't wait to Read more of this !!!! Nice job Vekay_Legend !!!!!!!!!
So far story is quite good and interesting only advice: you should change your cover each time i see that cover it feels like the novel is dropped.
Great start author san ,loved the premise of the story please don't drop 🙏 😀
Please don’t stop or make the story go haywire and please upload regularly good luck 👍
I am loving this he has speed force no one in that world would be able to touch him. Now is he going to interact with the dc verse like if a multiverse event happens there would he also be affected by it and have to team up with the Justice League that would be pretty sick and he could have the flash help him on how to use his powers better.
just balanced till now and my mind can change upon how author works out the harem part of the story. He still has not touched it yet. [img=coins]
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