/ Fantasy / Overlooking heaven
摘要
I was born powerful and I shall live powerful
I shall the be the brightest existence to ever exist or I shall die trying.
In this grand era full of heavenly prides and prodigies
Only I shall overlook the heaven
Follow us and experience a thrilling feeling on the legendary tale of a legendary person
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The story flow was intriguing enough to get someone to turn the page. The character, Chris, was relatable and the author definitely gave him justice. Though there were some things that needs polishing like the punctuation marks and quotation marks, but aside from that, it was a good read.
Good work Highly recommended The book contains a thrilling journey through a rollcaster of events and happenings For those who like stories with handsome mc , op mc , harem, beautiful female leads Talented mc and grand world This work is for you
As the I deem it necessary to review my first novel So first time writing There maybe some grammatical error in spelling and all that if you are a lover of eastern fantasy and Western then this is for you OP mc ... check mate Handsome mc ... Check mate MC with strong background...check mate Harem ...check mate System check So what are you waiting for !
very good book with great start. waiting for future development in story
okay, I read the first chapter and it's interesting. You just need to fix your grammatical errors. they're too much. Hire an editor if you don't know much about English and can't how to fix it on your own.
The Novel is nice Though I think that this is the author 's first work but I think it's just nice for a new potential author The overall work is good Every one should try it out
This is the first webnovel I have read and I have to say that it's a nice work through and thorough The author is doing a great job We need more chapters out .... So please...
Nice story line And nice world building The should keep it up And yeah Though some mistakes in the initials But it's not enough not to give a five star rating
The novel is good Have a good story line Though in the initial chapters (1-6) There are some mistakes But still the author did a good job And he needs to be applauded
卷 1
- 1 Overlooking heaven 7 months ago
- 2 Reborn 7 months ago
- 3 Start of grand era 7 months ago
- 4 Immortal realm 7 months ago
- 5 Cultivation realms 7 months ago
- 6 Bloodline activating day 7 months ago
- 7 The manifestation 7 months ago
- 8 Coming out of Seclusion 7 months ago
- 9 The Divine son 7 months ago
- 10 The inheritance 7 months ago
- 11 My follower 7 months ago
- 12 Level up 7 months ago
- 13 The Gathering 7 months ago
- 14 The beginning of the banquet 7 months ago
- 15 Coming out 7 months ago
- 16 Bai muchen's jealousy 7 months ago
- 17 The challenge 7 months ago
- 18 Bai muchen's defeat 7 months ago
- 19 Have you fallen for him? 7 months ago
- 20 Long Zhang's questioning 7 months ago
- 21 Holy son of the Divine mystic sect 7 months ago
- 22 Long Tianfeng's wrath 7 months ago
- 23 The terrifying Long clan heroes 7 months ago
- 24 Long Tianfeng and Shen Luo's battle 7 months ago
- 25 Unexpected sign in 6 months ago
- 26 Shen Luo's defeat 6 months ago
- 27 Shen Luo's death 6 months ago
I love your work. Your style of writing and the storyline is amazing.